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Last edited by coco718; October 16th, 2013 at 05:32 PM
hook is ehhh...too much auto tune for my liking. the verse i liked the presense. a lil shaky in the begginning but you stepped it up and brought the flow back in the zone. i liked the lyrics. overall pretty good so far for a preview
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Last edited by coco718; October 16th, 2013 at 05:32 PM
flow was dope, lyrics were the best part for me, I agree to ease up on teh autotuning, but besides that it was on point, delivery was also a key positive, nice listen
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Last edited by coco718; October 16th, 2013 at 05:32 PM
1st off...I hate that Auto-tuned R/B singin shit...and at the start of a rap song? ugh...
I like your voice on this...and the vocal mixing could sound amazing with a better mic/set up...
flow is good
hook is blah
but your delivery is dope to me
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Last edited by coco718; October 16th, 2013 at 05:33 PM
checking this...yeah man hook sounds wayyy too robotic or something, verses quality could be a bit better...hmm you got real lyrics i feel them, but this wasn't really delivered well...ur flow is a bit jumbled at times, delivery wasn't too bad and emotion was there for the most part, i like the diretion of hook but maybe just sing it without all the effect?
anyway not a bad preview
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