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Eh , sutin quick.
Why am i battlin a noob obvcourse he needs help but really he wont be felt..
Your bars are just like cotton .. Coz really you cant be felt..
heres the details This is text so prepare yourself to see hell..
Your name'll haunt you forever battle me and you'll begin to See L's..
Battlin me you have a death note but this aint no cartoon you melt..
Rapbattles Is like that show, It was sick until you .. CL.. (Death note reference)
But yeah im done repeating your name I dont want shit to end up crazy..
You might jump out the mirror , cook me dinner , coz i kept on saying Candy Lady..
Anyways heres my closer , You probs have a lisp so most of..
The public think your gay when you just wanna get closure(closer)..
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I'm laughing at kids face in his profile looking gay
Trying figure out why he swings that way??
17 years old never had a girl he could get to 2nd Base
Bitch! I got a pitchers arm so take a diffrent route
Cause when I throw to hit I'm taken this punk outss
Fuck wordplay I got the perfect punch for your mouth
So when people see you spit'n they'll know its not juice running out
Lmao, everything about you played like outlets roc-a-wear
So when I start to put fire to you bitch BEWARE!
Facing me & the result is the same slogan is smoky the bear
Stop, Drop and Roll someone get this kid out of here
2 links.. 3rd coming
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...708/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...html?p=8271711
Here's my 3rd link, since I can't edit my post yet
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...54#post8271954
Last edited by King; October 2nd, 2011 at 06:44 PM
Nothing
vs.
Bitch! I got a pitchers arm so take a diffrent route
Cause when I throw to hit I'm taken this punk outss
This was the only decent punch i saw. You guys need to work on getting those punches to hit. CL, you had one decent punch with nameplay. Try to use those more. As for Outss, try to come up with better concepts. No hate, keep elavating.
V/ CL
Take a Look at my Life
uppin for votes
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really ? .. biased.
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upp.
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Why am i battlin a noob obvcourse he needs help but really he wont be felt..
Your bars are just like cotton .. Coz really you cant be felt.
(this was a very bad opener especially since you used the two same words to rhyme...huge miss)
heres the details This is text so prepare yourself to see hell..
Your name'll haunt you forever battle me and you'll begin to See L's..
(saved yourself wit this one good nameplay)
Battlin me you have a death note but this aint no cartoon you melt..
Rapbattles Is like that show, It was sick until you .. CL.. (Death note reference)
(wasnt really feeling this one at all weak)
But yeah im done repeating your name I dont want shit to end up crazy..
You might jump out the mirror , cook me dinner , coz i kept on saying Candy Lady..
(it was ok coulda been better)
Anyways heres my closer , You probs have a lisp so most of..
The public think your gay when you just wanna get closure(closer)..
(weak ender man not feelin this)
I'm laughing at kids face in his profile looking gay
Trying figure out why he swings that way??
(this is very weak opener)
17 years old never had a girl he could get to 2nd Base
Bitch! I got a pitchers arm so take a diffrent route
(i dont really see wat rhymes here at all)
Cause when I throw to hit I'm taken this punk outss
Fuck wordplay I got the perfect punch for your mouth
(weak bar)
So when people see you spit'n they'll know its not juice running out
(i'm not really understand your rhyme scheme or flow_
Lmao, everything about you played like outlets roc-a-wear
So when I start to put fire to you bitch BEWARE!
Facing me & the result is the same slogan is smoky the bear
Stop, Drop and Roll someone get this kid out of here
only this was a super weak battle im gonna say that outts took it wit the nameplay line and the ender which could have been worded better but cl man you need some work man honestly cuz that was a weak verse and i couldnt even read the rest of it cuz i dont understand wat kinda flow you got mayne....v/outts
Why am i battlin a noob obvcourse he needs help but really he wont be felt..
Your bars are just like cotton .. Coz really you cant be felt..
weak
heres the details This is text so prepare yourself to see hell..
Your name'll haunt you forever battle me and you'll begin to See L's..
meh
Battlin me you have a death note but this aint no cartoon you melt..
Rapbattles Is like that show, It was sick until you .. CL.. (Death note reference)
no idea what CL reffrece means
But yeah im done repeating your name I dont want shit to end up crazy..
You might jump out the mirror , cook me dinner , coz i kept on saying Candy Lady..
this name flip didint connect
Anyways heres my closer , You probs have a lisp so most of..
The public think your gay when you just wanna get closure(closer)..
i understand the close closure pun, but it didint hit at all
Vs
I'm laughing at kids face in his profile looking gay
Trying figure out why he swings that way??
meh opener
17 years old never had a girl he could get to 2nd Base
Bitch! I got a pitchers arm so take a diffrent route
Cause when I throw to hit I'm taken this punk outss
better
Fuck wordplay I got the perfect punch for your mouth
So when people see you spit'n they'll know its not juice running out
meh
Lmao, everything about you played like outlets roc-a-wear
So when I start to put fire to you bitch BEWARE!
Facing me & the result is the same slogan is smoky the bear
Stop, Drop and Roll someone get this kid out of here
not really feeling it punch hard, you were too focused on the rhyming.
you guys can elevate, not bein biased or anything, but im just comparing the both and ima give this to CL,
well im just saying, what good is a punch if people dont get it, i just didint know cause... fuck, i dont watch manga, anyways it was the best punch you had, free up lol
Outts
Why am i battlin a noob obvcourse he needs help but really he wont be felt..
Your bars are just like cotton .. Coz really you cant be felt..
wasnt really feeling the same rhyme scheme here and the metaphore just too basic no hate man
heres the details This is text so prepare yourself to see hell..
Your name'll haunt you forever battle me and you'll begin to See L's..
ok this was a little better was direct punch but u gotta make it hit harder be creative
Battlin me you have a death note but this aint no cartoon you melt..
Rapbattles Is like that show, It was sick until you .. CL.. (Death note reference)
wording messed this up no hate again
But yeah im done repeating your name I dont want shit to end up crazy..
You might jump out the mirror , cook me dinner , coz i kept on saying Candy Lady..
coulda been more creative with this
Anyways heres my closer , You probs have a lisp so most of..
The public think your gay when you just wanna get closure(closer)..
coulda made this wordplay punch alot better
CL
I'm laughing at kids face in his profile looking gay
Trying figure out why he swings that way??
ok attempt with this personal but gay reference too basic
17 years old never had a girl he could get to 2nd Base
this line was unecessary threw off rhyme scheme here
Bitch! I got a pitchers arm so take a diffrent route
Cause when I throw to hit I'm taken this punk outss
punch coulda been better the setup was there but wording threw u off
Fuck wordplay I got the perfect punch for your mouth
So when people see you spit'n they'll know its not juice running out
not bad direct
Lmao, everything about you played like outlets roc-a-wear
So when I start to put fire to you bitch BEWARE!
didnt like this no hate
Facing me & the result is the same slogan is smoky the bear
Stop, Drop and Roll someone get this kid out of here
again not hard hitting
V/CL
well he actually got this for attempting but needs alot of work coming off his setups. Outts really didnt see punches u gota come more harder and creative
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