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    Blissful Execution...

    every once in a while something epic or drastic happens to completely change everything...this is one of those moments....a changing of the guard if you will...I need mod rights asap...the board is mines now....




    Beathttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XmLN_pY-WXs&feature=related[/url]




    I'm just an art gallery's first portrait in Maui//
    accept humanitarians; indulge in tai chi.
    Yeah...I squeeze life outta life & then scalp that//
    the gross in escrows & the rest swiss alps that.
    I'm the 20th of January condo in Windsor//
    in very stark contrast to previous winter.
    Yeah....Watch intently//
    scold Goodell for not allowing Ocho to rock 15 & hold Henry.
    Yes I'm all century//
    perennial all star & pro bowl vet I hang glide on Mt. Symphony.
    Think...if I shoot & you live then you can tell//
    life unravels....voice mails....Uchitel (Rachel)
    I'm ugly gorgeous//
    H.N.I.C. no religion but shell storms will have him in the crosses.
    I'm the H.1.N.1 that'll have you in the office//
    needle in ya groin that'll have you with the corpses.
    8 and a sparrow put 8 in the barrel//
    and spit...till your wardrobe's Jamaican apparel.
    My man said to get the trees second but the cane first//
    that's if you're trying to cash in like Hanyesworth.
    Of course I get acclaim & love//
    I'm Dennis Wise but if you fruits are in my sights then it's rain the snub.
    Sh*t I'm ignorant & arrogant aki//
    yet distinguished hit the menu Crème brûlée of foie gras w/broccoli.
    So if these artists thinking that they're sick give them medicine//
    I'll shoot down three like Terry then do the jet on 'em.
    It's Colorado slopes so don't stress or test a vet//
    or risk turning gray like that stuff in Etch-A-Sketch....



    Yo...I said....I said "It's Colorado slopes so don't stress or test a vet//or risk turning gray like that stuff in Etch-A-Sketch"






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    Last edited by SmashoneTheGod; September 30th, 2011 at 06:46 AM

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    Re: Blissful Execution...

    It's ok. Your rhymes are good, but overall the whole things didn't make sense to me. I can see you working with word play and puns, but overall I wasn't feeling it and I just felt confused. They weren't strong or funny. No shock value. "It's Colorado slopes so don't stress or test a vet//or risk turning gray like that stuff in Etch-A-Sketch" Eeeehh, it's cool, bit like I said no shock value. Next time re-read your stuff and ask if this makes sense.

    Other then that, good multi's. Keep that up. Keep writing dude.
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