Screw Me

[Lil. D]

I spit shit so please do not get that confused with music
My genitals are the size of 2 marbles and a toothpick
If I could have a wish I would probly wish myself dead
Cause my balls are too small to shoot myself in the head
My face on the face of the earth is the world's biggest disgrace
I get so much hate I was branded as a new kind of race
I'm designed like a dumbass, a motherfucking faggot
The kind to pass gas and say "thats the smell of maggots"
They say that hip hop is dead, and it's because I was born
A dumbass fucking faggot that shits corn while watching gay porn
I should be banned off this website, for being so bad
The death of me would even make Osama Bin Laden feel glad
And look at me rapping, feeling so cool
Bragging to bitches online about texting in school
What a fucking faggot, bitch go die a hole
Cause even god would feel threatened if he saw your soul in heaven

[Lil. D]

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[Nohbody]

hmmmmmmm. . . .

well apparently your a faggot with a small dick. Sorry for your troubles.

I can tell this piece wasnt serious, had some comedic value to it, but nothing done overly well. Im not sure what you was going for here. . but i got a chuckle out of it. I dunno. . good to see people not take them self that serious i guess.

[WhatsHisFace]

I'm confused. Are you serouis about this? or are you just playing around? If your serouis about this, then i gusse its cool. I mean the whole conspet of how you view yourself is honest. It creates emotion such a despaire and depression. Words are dark, making it strong.

If your playing around, then you got a dark side which creates orginality. I didn't find it funny if humor was what you were going for. When you want dark humor, you want to play with words and puns a lot. I use dark humor in my flow by useing the idea of rape and ditching bodies. If you want to go terroist image, by all means do it. It's orginal.

Overall, like the guy above me said. I don't know what your going for in this piece.

[Lil. D]

Well I thought I'd try dissing myself lol.

[Lil. D]

Uppin