Knux. vs Outss

[Knux]

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I'll Check in when i get home, im at work now

[Outss]

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[Outss]

Knux would pay bucks to suck nuts from bum fucks..
but with balls in his mouth thats the only time he could shutup and still suck..

Knux you dumb fuck your coloured username really got my attention..
now i bet he wish he never red- like a book about the dead ressurecting,

I'll leave you traumatized from venemous lines dont say i didnt tell you so..
So after my punchlines, you'll always flashback like a family guy episode..

[Knux]

blah this guys gay..

Outss

Told myself not to box lames, shits to easy.. I got ock slain
Leave this square, Out lined in chalk, no hopscotch games..
U couldnt post 10 lines, I couldnt give 2 shits
Cuz 6 or 10, i'll still run through O lines like an all out blitz..
You'll get the cold shoulder, im here to finish like a closer
Punch lights out then proceed to take my gloves off and work out over..
Kid ur bout to fry.. punch him till he shouts n cries
This close line'll leave you hangin like ur material..Out to dry..
This last ones a freebe, dont gotta show no clout
If voting went that high i'd probly win, 10-4.. over n out

[Joe Boston]

OUTS

Knux would pay bucks to suck nuts from bum fucks..
but with balls in his mouth thats the only time he could shutup and still suck..
this finisher through u off developing the punch because u have suck in ur setup then u used it to end ur finisher u shoulda came with something diffrent in the ryhme scheme here.


Knux you dumb fuck your coloured username really got my attention..
now i bet he wish he never red- like a book about the dead ressurecting,
not feeling how u started the setup the finishing concept had potential cause the concept was there but the wordplay was basic and the wording fucked it up no hate.


I'll leave you traumatized from venemous lines dont say i didnt tell you so..
So after my punchlines, you'll always flashback like a family guy episode..
this was better cool setup nice concept hit slightly


KNUX

Told myself not to box lames, shits to easy.. I got ock slain
Leave this square, Out lined in chalk, no hopscotch games..
this nameplay concept was cool but the chalk and hopstotch reference played no hate but ok attempt

U couldnt post 10 lines, I couldnt give 2 shits
Cuz 6 or 10, i'll still run through O lines like an all out blitz..
this was a cool personal punch nice reference on the nameplay

You'll get the cold shoulder, im here to finish like a closer
Punch lights out then proceed to take my gloves off and work out over..
good multi usage i see what u was doing in this finisher but if u was trying nameplay attempt again the creativity was off here but other then that it was direct

Kid ur bout to fry.. punch him till he shouts n cries
This close line'll leave you hangin like ur material..Out to dry..
lol nice

This last ones a freebe, dont gotta show no clout
If voting went that high i'd probly win, 10-4.. over n out
nice again


V/Knux

I thought Knux got this by his last two bars cuz the nameplay attempts were good other then that he had one plyed concept and a nameplay attempt line that i thought he didnt word out right. What fucked Outs Up is that he was using suck n fuck in both his bars n threw the rhyme scheme off and also the punch. his finisher was there and he went ten and put some 2 bars that were just like his 3rd bar he coulda had a chance.

[A.T.]

Knux wins via DQ...