Aight 15 lines verse 2 hours after check.
i'll post my link in a few
Memphis Pro
Defy-Gravity
Aight 15 lines verse 2 hours after check.
i'll post my link in a few
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in.. Lol@you using 15 lines STILL!!!
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"...bringing slavery back,since '06"
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what? 10 lines? what you ever want
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Defy's a failure at life,nobody ever heard of this cat
on one hand he's awful at rap,on the other,he cant count further than that
its obvious ur wack,dawg.your lines r dim witted and slack jaw'd
in this chain of events.. youre the weak link getting snatched off
plus ur girl said ur a joke,and she loves my sweet strokes
i bet you didnt know,even the shallow side of her ego-deep throats
Youre the pitiful type,sit n moan about the shit u would like
for instance,your avy is the exact opposite of that bitch in ur life
true,she sucked my dick.. but the hoe is quite snobby n fact
i heard of big and tall stores,but her dress size is "sloppy and fat"
10pz.
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"...bringing slavery back,since '06"
[YOUTUBE]Bk77Z00AZE8[/YOUTUBE]
Memphis Pro
this rare beef, just watch how "raw i come"/
that heads a see " a baby crowning" before your holding one/
not even a spark in that verse, i've seen hotter flows in a cold coffee cup/
While rap gives memphis something to lie in like a coffin does/
and my interviews sparked up something more then blunts/
asked myself why am in the same scene with this blood sucker like Kirsten dunst/
I rock steady and beboop, your a foot soldier no cassie jones/
victory we hold up glasses like Irma's nose while your underground shit isn't moving "technodrone"/
not even breaking a sweat in this under card tite match/
I'm on tv dinning on you rodents "no first season survivor cast"/
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this rare beef, just watch how "raw i come"/
that heads a see " a baby crowning" before your holding one/
(first line was perfect set up for a sick punch...but ou lacked)
not even a spark in that verse, i've seen hotter flows in a cold coffee cup/
While rap gives memphis something to lie in like a coffin does/
(coulda been worded alot differently, OK)
and my interviews sparked up something more then blunts/
asked myself why am in the same scene with this blood sucker like Kirsten dunst/
(weak you sound like ur tryin to throw punches but you dont kno wat to say)
I rock steady and beboop, your a foot soldier no cassie jones/
victory we hold up glasses like Irma's nose while your underground shit isn't moving "technodrone"/
(i get the irmas nose not the technodrone though)
not even breaking a sweat in this under card tite match/
I'm on tv dinning on you rodents "no first season survivor cast"/(weak finisher)
VS
Defy's a failure at life,nobody ever heard of this cat
on one hand he's awful at rap,on the other,he cant count further than that
(nice opener)
its obvious ur wack,dawg.your lines r dim witted and slack jaw'd
in this chain of events.. youre the weak link getting snatched off
(nice line played punch)
plus ur girl said ur a joke,and she loves my sweet strokes
i bet you didnt know,even the shallow side of her ego-deep throats(alright)
Youre the pitiful type,sit n moan about the shit u would like
for instance,your avy is the exact opposite of that bitch in ur life(haha funny...nice)
true,she sucked my dick.. but the hoe is quite snobby n fact
i heard of big and tall stores,but her dress size is "sloppy and fat"(ok enough hearin bout his girl weak finisher)
Memphis pro took this all the way through defy gravity made no sense sometimes memphis pro had a nice opener decent punches in the middle of his verse but weak finisher still did more then gravity did
v/Memph
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...976/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...870/index.html
Defy's a failure at life,nobody ever heard of this cat
on one hand he's awful at rap,on the other,he cant count further than that
plus ur girl said ur a joke,and she loves my sweet strokes
i bet you didnt know,even the shallow side of her ego-deep throats
vs
nada
Memph had some mad solid hits and stayed consistant. definitely not a newb to battling. DEfy had some ok concepts but needs to work on execution.
v. memph
Defy's a failure at life,nobody ever heard of this cat
on one hand he's awful at rap,on the other,he cant count further than that
Youre the pitiful type,sit n moan about the shit u would like
for instance,your avy is the exact opposite of that bitch in ur life
VS
nothign really do say but you had some good set ups
I vote M
Defy's a failure at life,nobody ever heard of this cat
on one hand he's awful at rap,on the other,he cant count further than that
Youre the pitiful type,sit n moan about the shit u would like
for instance,your avy is the exact opposite of that bitch in ur life
VS
nothign really do say but you had some good set ups
I vote M
(i get the irmas nose not the technodrone though)
Skitzo-you must have never seen the ninja turles. The whole show was about shedder and Krang trying to getting the technodrone to move. Shit was stuck underground.
plus ur girl said ur a joke,and she loves my sweet strokes
i bet you didnt know,even the shallow side of her ego-deep throats
this was a dope line.
I do think what he wrote is more of something i would need to hear said in person with timing and delivery. i tried to write something metaphoric and complex. i fucked your girl punches bore me but the bulk of what i read here borders that realm no offense.
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dude,i dont text battle anymore since the LLL days,and that was waaaaay back then.. so yea, my lines come off more of an audio verse.. and surely you do know,if you have to explain ur punch then youre not doing it right.. jus sayin.
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"...bringing slavery back,since '06"
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naw they're votes were on some retaliation tip. but its cool.
you critique my vote memphis
and i havent battled in text in 10 years but never stop writting
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then get them DQ'd if u think its out of spite... but i doubt they were.Originally Posted by Defy-Gravity
Memphis Pro
its obvious ur wack,dawg.your lines r dim witted and slack jaw'd
in this chain of events.. youre the weak link getting snatched off
i like the reference in this finisher clever
plus ur girl said ur a joke,and she loves my sweet strokes
i bet you didnt know,even the shallow side of her ego-deep throats
lmao nice
true,she sucked my dick.. but the hoe is quite snobby n fact
i heard of big and tall stores,but her dress size is "sloppy and fat"
lmao again
DEFY GRAVITY
Nuthin i can quote no hate man some punches were just off and some were more statements man. The coffee cup setup was nice man but the only thing was that finisher it woulda been ill otherwise.
V/MEMPHIS
Overall better punches brought real good humor to it nice concept choices.
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