*New* Cold Winter

[KHelluh]

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Latest track by me. I feel like the part with the crashes in the beginning is better, but also if someone raps over this its better without the loud crash in my opinion. I kind of used it for the hook until I get the chorus the way I want it. Either way give your feedback, its all welcome !

[J-min]

u need tot ake those crashes out man its drowning all the drums out man id only use crash either real subtle or on every 8th bar..

when the crashes go the drums bang hard man !! the sample uve used its nice pretty sure ive heard it before though!!!

good drop man!

rtf http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...099/index.html

[KHelluh]

I just put them in there for a hook. lol untill i do something else eith it

[DUSTYMENTALS]

Im feeling it the samples dope.

[JDemers]

this was pretty good a liked that sample alot

[fo11]

The sample is dope. That piece of cymbal in the intro should be shanged. Use a shorter one or do something like lower the pitch and strech the time and make it shorter. is that bass comin from the sample? Drums is kind a bit different but nice

good shit. keep it comin

[Fre]

Kevin, nice to see you on here bro. Nice beat you improved mad recently. Love that fuckin sample, real soul feeling to it. the drums are banging to. Is that bassline separate or part of the sample? either way the basslines sick.

[Fatal.]

this is cool. i liked the drum line you got going here. strings are sounding nice. sounds like a story telling beat

[KHelluh]

The bassline is in the sample aha. I was thinking of adding one but figured the existing one did the beat justice. Sorry for never replying my computer has been down for about a month.

[Genetics]

u need tot ake those crashes out man its drowning all the drums out man id only use crash either real subtle or on every 8th bar..

when the crashes go the drums bang hard man !! the sample uve used its nice pretty sure ive heard it before though!!!

good drop man!

rtf http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...099/index.html

i dont usually quote a comment and say i agree, but his feed was def on the money

those crashes are too frequent, it takes away from the aesthetics of the beat. its actaully hard to listen to with the symbols coming in every measure

just a thought..keep buildin ya skills

[narkotikbeats]

I think u can keep the crashes but lower the volume on them. Or change the crashes to an open hi hat sound. Also I think this would sound dope faster tempo. So you'd have to stretch the sample, but I think the sample would sound dope if it was faster. N I would add some drum fills and drops, maybe a lil instrumentation over it.

[W.isdom I.s L.ife so L.iv]

i dont know if i like this beat... i know this sample from somewhere and feel you could've done more than just loop it... anyway decent still b/c it has potential ... keep elevating

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