some doubles on the hook might have helped it, but it sounded empty. The beat was nice though and I dug the verses and how you switched up from fast and slow flow.. which were both on point for the most part. This was pretty tight tho man, just coulda used more doubles and hypeness to the hook.. good shit.
Aigh cool, preciate ya Checka, I do double up on my hooks but I make the double too low I guess, I'll keep that in mind when mixing in the future..
Like the flow-- your voice is hip hop made -- real tight -- need some back ups behind your main vocals especially in your hook -- you add those ablibs you gonna be on something -- you had some really good places where you could have added some harmonies and this woulda been a real dope project. I would go back to the lab and refocus on doing that... repost and can gaurentee your feed will be 100% better
If you have a moment please RTF
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@Longway, good lookin out homie, preciate the feedback, I def see how I need the doubles up on the hooks now, and I see what you're sayin bout harmonizing more and puttin in adlibs, I used to put in adlibs a lot and then all the sudden I just dealt away with it aha, not really sure why, I'll keep that in mind, I'll check out your track right after I post this other track of mine I got, thanks again..
man....you have dope style! wanna collab with you for real
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