[sc]http://soundcloud.com/chi-money/lose-control[/sc]
leave links n I'll rtf..
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...991/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...816/index.html
[sc]http://soundcloud.com/chi-money/lose-control[/sc]
leave links n I'll rtf..
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...991/index.html
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Last edited by The Gwapfather; September 19th, 2011 at 02:30 AM
1st of all i feel like there is something missing from your hook.. it doesnt sound complete and could use a bit more depth.. I wasnt sure when you had started your verse in the beginning cause you started on an off part it seemed. However the flow was sick the content was there as well. Love the word play and imagary too.
hmb - http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...060/index.html
I agree with killakei, a lil bit depth is needed,
the content is good but the flow is not up to the mark.
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I agree with killakei, a lil bit depth is needed,
the content is good but the flow is not up to the mark.
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aye yo this is dope man for real!!!!
ive always said your vocal ability is unique .
beat is pretty dope too man..
lyrics are pretty clever man ...
im feeling this man
keep dropping
rtf http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...09#post8258409
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aye yo this is dope man for real!!!!
ive always said your vocal ability is unique .
beat is pretty dope too man..
lyrics are pretty clever man ...
im feeling this man
keep dropping
rtf http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...09#post8258409
Youtube - JMIN SCHOBS
Spotify - JMIN SCHOBS
AMAZON - JMIN SCHOBS
AppleMusic - JMIN MUSIC
Ect...... JMIN SCHOBS
Beat Ok nice head nodder
Chorus I liked the chorus might need to doube it
Verse Wicked flow prefer the voice on the chorus but raps are wicked
Liked the 1st better than 2nd verse both were nice though
Please Refeed
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you remind me of yelawolf , i like it .. just work on delivery a bit the most , keep it up
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Good lookin out, I'll be rtf a lil later..
upsadaisey!...
Dope shit bro.. I liked your flow and delivery, lyrics were good ! Mixing is very well done as well, something I still need to get the hang of... -.-
You ride the beat the way it should be done so no comments on that
Real tight fam, i liked the hook too.. Overall very dope track bro, keep it up !
RTF: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...366/index.html
Why does the volume of this song sound low? hmm...
And yea...the hook sounds like it's missing a few elements...but, I'm feeling the beat and the vocals sound good and crisp...flow is on point...and the overall presentation is good
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Why does the volume of this song sound low? hmm...
And yea...the hook sounds like it's missing a few elements...but, I'm feeling the beat and the vocals sound good and crisp...flow is on point...and the overall presentation is good
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Man, the voice on the hook really reminds me of someone...I can't think of who though...hook's cool. First verse has a dope flow. Love that quick switch up that comes in every now and then. Second verse is dope..will smith/livin legend line is dope..beat's sick.
Overall this is some real dope shit. Lookin forward to seein more shit you'll be droppin on this site. Keep it up and I'll keep peepin. 1
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Thanks guys, @Ace.. I've dropped about.. prolly like 5-7 tracks on here already, most are just a page or two back in the threads (if you're interested), I got some more work in progress though so I'll be droppin more soon, I'm going to hit everyone's stuff up now..
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