Reckless

[Atmospheric]

I'm reckless, beat emcees to death with headsets
I shine like a necklace and blow up like breast lifts
The best gets breathless once i throw chest hits
So blessed with methods, flow like a death kiss
Check it.. multis raw as fuck, chainsaw em up
I'm sicker than licking a walrus nuts in a stall with sluts
Leave jaws with cuts, kiss my alcoholic nuts
You wanna be rap all stars but your balling sucks
Similes i eat em alive over beats by surprise
I metaphor but she ran when she saw the beast in my eyes
They say i need to settle my ass down, I'm losing my mind
Causing brain contusions with rhymes, abusing my lines
But I'm refusing to die, cuz this music is my life
So kiss the white off my ass cuz you're as useless as my wife
Mad cuz i write shit, i don't care if you like it
Cuz turning me off is impossible, there is no light switch




Links:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...798/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...006/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...747/index.html

[WhatsHisFace]

Dope shyt bro. A lot of witty things, nice touch on creativity. "I metaphor but she ran....." hahaha nice job with word play. Also "I'm sicker than licking a walrus nuts in a stall with sluts" that was dope. Overall, nice drop dude.

[Atmospheric]

Thanks for the feedback, man. Just my daily exercise with multis, similes and some puns.. Keep an eye out for me. I do Storytelling, too. I'll be posting a lot...

If you give feedback, I will return the favor. Just add links to your pieces, guys.

[Maximus]

This is good, it just flowed smooth.... Sick multies in there as well like:''check it, multies raw as fuck, chainsaw em up/im sicker than licking a walrus nuts in a stall with sluts'' thats nice
I also like the last light switch line, nice metaphor. Keep at it bro

[thatdudeB]

liked it, a solid verse to me.. i got the impression you were going mostly for flow/i can see this being a cool audio verse.. nothing too sick though, to me.. but good none the less.. my favorite part was how smoothly it read, and the rest was pretty solid to me

[.Nell.]

nice one lol, yeah i quote the i metahpor line aswell, that was dope, good wordplay, flow was nice, think it would make a good audio if recorded, couple of lines i didnt like, thought they could of been replaced with something better, but overall nice little verse here, good shit