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    forbidden lover..

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    Re: forbidden lover..

    pianos dope. u compose it? reminds me "wish upon a starrrrrr" lol. the "oooh" is a good touch. hooks really nice too. i dunno though one thing is missing i cant put my finger on it..maybe a tougher bassline and some strings in the background being stretched.

    either way good job

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    Re: forbidden lover..

    no, not originally composed by me. This has some parts of Arc'ane or soebodys compositions .
    Thanks for feeds. i dont know if i should put background strings but i could tighten the bass.
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    Re: forbidden lover..

    i love the keys in this very nice sounds like a chord progression from changes (tupac) for the first part lol reli feeling this..

    i do feel if you ad some strings like viola or even a guitar it woul strengthen this beat up and bring it to life even more.

    on the whole this is a decent drop i personally would change the snare or adjust the mid levels but thats only being picky ..

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    Re: forbidden lover..

    not bad, but it feels like its missing something though & idk what it is

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    Re: forbidden lover..

    This sounds really nice overall, tranquil. But I gotta let you know, that clap annoys the hell out of me for some reason LOL I feel it sounds muddy, i don't know how to describe it but I think it should sound brighter and not so low. Other than that, I like everything else and the mood it gives off.

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    Re: forbidden lover..

    This is cool , reminds me of old pac. Real smooth sound to it dude. Clean beat overall , good shit man.

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