Trust me my entrance to this is perfectly timed
My verses shining so much you goanna be blind
Good lines keep erupting from me like Ima fountain
And still I keep it fresh like its trickling down'a mountain
There are sacred lands whereever I trod
Because every word I spit has been gifted by god
My mind is a computer packed with lyrical circitry
You can tell i'm bright yeah it's like I'm an L.E.D
Like a demon from hell, I am one you should fear
Even if you have a condition I'll make you shed a tear
I'm untouchable now I'm just on fire
You better submit and become part of my empire
I'm here now there is no time for retreat
You can either try and stand my wrath or just admit deafeat
You know times up when I'm knocking on the door
Cause this aint rap man, this is war...
First thing I've put up on these forums, please do criticize! It's the only way I will get better.
Feedback will be returned, thanks.
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