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Thread: Doorways to Infinity

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    Re: Doorways to Infinity

    "But I was a victim of an unfortunate downfall when my chance expired
    And then unwillingly returned to the lower level of my life prior..."


    "People live to dream, but that dream will never enter reality
    Despite the openings, it will remain stuck at the centre of fallacy
    From an idealist’s point of view that dream will one come true
    But that individual will realise the moment they succumb youth"


    You had a few nice lines in there...interesting read...keep writing...

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    huh? Vinzr's Avatar
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    Re: Doorways to Infinity

    upp

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    Re: Doorways to Infinity

    nice imagery in this piece vin definatly was feeling it...kinda poetic to me but was definatly feelin this good drop mayne keep doin ya thing

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