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    Trade Of Hands(Re-Done)

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    you literally ripped out my heart
    looked at it then ripped it apart
    my self-consious stare still lingers
    undoubtful i was around your fingers
    thoughts of bullets and pulling tiggers
    emotional pain in gallons come down
    seconds later im feeling the ground
    you had me up in hopes is whats found
    hearts with no beat,killing with no sound
    you had me so wound...up in your crowned
    image i was twisted,no need for assistance
    i didnt care,all i wanted was this chance
    though it was shot,knifed then switched hands
    a player being played guess we switched stands
    now you begin to dance,the movments of this man
    and make up for hearts he bent,a crucial revenge
    but deep in...side i thought you were heaven
    gods descent to bring me hopeful blessings
    but instead you were the devil and his minions
    sent to kill loving hearts and souls by the million
    with these sentences i stumble,i was oh so humble
    buzzed around you like a bumble,then you popped me
    like a bubble,it was so suddle 1 mintue we cuddled
    then the next i was crying out puddles pain i guzzle
    a simple rapper expressing feelings through as a poet
    it seems all my walls have began to close in,there i go
    dozing...off while triple cs i overdose and...it seems
    i looked at you once as golden,but now anger and hatered
    i hold in...no ! hatered i Bolded ! your bluffing is folded
    the chill of you leaving was so cold it....felt like a unwanted
    breeze approching,maybe i cant grasp the fact the more i grabbed
    the more i lost track the more i lost slack
    shattered hopes like glass toke the shards from that ran
    fast across my skin edge jagged,piece dragged
    id like to say it pain it took away but maybe
    i had too much to break away and it each way
    i faked a day then it left me stray still looking
    at that blade my life began to fade,subliminally
    mentally this was all i even needed,but the more
    i feed it the more i bleeded...or bled it helped
    me passed meds or was it the demon who lead me to
    death in the first step cant say at best all i guess
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