u know yall thank yall very much i appreciate all the feeds leave links and i will surely return the favor.
u know yall thank yall very much i appreciate all the feeds leave links and i will surely return the favor.
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^short piece i did exercising cause i want to get into doing topical pieces.
all feedback would be appreciated, and thanks in advance.
i tried to come with something a little different than what's been done already.
Fuck doing breakdown..
Shoe.. I hate every rhymes you spit my man... if this was on stage I'll bOO you off.. seriously, nonetheless some the flow was good at some point while you just mess it up at some point what I mean fix your structure and you'll see the difference... The inner were dope as I like but the mulites were just bad as fuck.. no hate...
I would advice you to think through you line and incorporate some of the basic stuff such as 2 syllables rhymes at each ends of your rhymes..
But Overall That was aight verse IMO...
Joe.. Shit was good but IMO it was like freeing.. with many punches... The flow was good and I think it can be better if you include multies syllables inner... I think that's some advance shit LOL..
But overall I like you verse better than Shoe..
Overalll a pretty decent collab..
KEEP IT UP
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yeah definitely i feel you on that part i always try new metaphores or concepts when i can but yes i gotta brush up on the vocab content and multies which i dont really do
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