Hey everyone this my first drop on the site please leave me some feedback thats the whole reason I kinda joined the site to see how my shit compares to others and to get some constructive criticism. Thanks in advance.
DAILY ROUTINE
[Verse 1]
I create more rhymes in a day then babies are born in a year
Overpopulation is near so I hope this metaphor is clear
Tryin not to get to complicated but you know my head is loaded
Wit complex rhyming schemes that fuck your brain till it exploded
Kind of hope you got that noted jotted down on a piece of paper
Cause my words cut through you fakes like a star wars lightsaber
Just say im going on my Darth Vader my swag is creatin a crater
Slating you for execution first beheading all the haters
And this is just a tribute to all the people doubtin me
Dont get under my skin cause i can act pretty foul you see
You might say that im out acting or acting out whatever
But im on a clever endeavor to sever you from me forever
No one better im hot like wearin a sweater in summer
Its a bummer that I have to cut you down like you were lumber
Postin pics up on my tumblr of you tumbling down Timber
Im cooking all of you but for now just stay on simmer
[Hook]
I'm writing like this everyday Like a beat its looping
No Obstacle will ever stop me from my daily routine
Its just a thing I have to do an unbroken habit
Dont wanna get rid of it so haters you cant have it
[Verse 2]
I always write daily and you know it never fails
Gotta keep in practice or my rhymes will be going stale
While yours lost their crunch and there flavorless
And gettin dissed by me is a privilege so savor this
Im sayin this for a reason and not listenin is treason
Im so fucking cold ill make the hottest record freezing
By listening your breathing in my toxins and fumes
But their the opposite of dangerous so dont you assume
If i release a plume of smoke its a hazard to your health
And I never rolled up green but I still get rhymes in wealth
Got a Contradictive nature say things that dont make sense
Though it might be because I have a higher level of intelligence
The moment I started rapping I saw that you got tense
If my skill was measured in weight it'd be ten elephants
That was a simple simile that i sporadically said
Now its time for me to leave this verse tactically dead
[END]
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