Natural Selection

[Prophet Margin]

I'll prolly refine this at some point soon. but i NEEDED to write again so i had some fun getting back into the swing of things

Yo its a struggle just stayin alive
Natural selection- only the strong survive

You in trouble;strugglin beneath the rubble
Muddled in your senses theres a rumble in the jungle
I'm on the lookout with sharper sight than the Hubble
Fuck brawn, my intellect make me a man of muscle
Man up, Im the master strategist, your plans suck
My shots land flush, not a cell in your body I cant crush
Chief lyrical, master of porter rap, the quarterback
I take snaps from the mic and make tracks when i attack
You cease to exist, my flow rises, but your line stay flat
Plots against me, but im intact and gettin stacks
All over the map, greenbacks in scientific notation
Its my genetic formation, more advanced than this pathetic generation's
Synthetic abrasion, upon a concentric foundation
I bring about the 10 plagues, epidemic the nation
A crude warrior, the irony of slaying faggots with my dick
I'll laugh at Armageddon, when i escape the triple 6
While mother nature the ruthless bitch has you prayin to die
No time to enjoy the world when its a struggle just stayin alive


Its a struggle just stayin alive
Natural selection only the strong survive
God give me eyes so that i may never lose sight
And if I fall I'll need the strength to revive

Its a struggle just stayin alive
Natural selection- only the strong survive
I'll fight forever, cuz I'd be ashamed to give in and die
Natural selection- only the strong survive

Juggle the planets while i rebuttal the banished
God trusts me to feed both the righteous and famished
My story's one part savior, and one part damage
In step with the commandments, yet the plot is outlandish
But the Prophet's ink can't erase itself, the future's told
I'll be there to bear witness when the new world folds
The slaughter block's equiped, if your name's down youre fucked
I'm better endowed, so I'll survive when hell runs amok
Turning these fake emcees into real topic heads
Opening eyes so like NAS they all see who the Prophet is
My will is made of steel, my skill is unheard of
My voice resonates once youve heard one word of
Destruction all around, but I stand unscathed
Uncaged, unleashed monster once a slave
Upon a time before i found lyrical perfection
Before a mic was my weapon of protection
You tried to fight me, but wound up battlin your reflection
While i added another ignorant victim to my collection
Cant continue to keep pace with my cranial conncections
On planet Earth we call that shit natural selection

Its a struggle just stayin alive
Natural selection only the strong survive
God give me eyes so that i may never lose sight
And if I fall I'll need the strength to revive

Its a struggle just stayin alive
Natural selection- only the strong survive
I'll fight forever, cuz I'd be ashamed to give in and die
Natural selection- only the strong survive

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[The Scientist]

Im Feeling the raps but like the first rap was all over the place it was a solid rap the flow was good but i just gives off the feeling of a Rap battle kind of rap but the last paragraph is a good peice man keep writing.

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[FaHQtual]

First feedback on this forum. This song to me was pretty solid and I can imagine it being recorded with a slow simple beat. You had some great lines in their my favorites in particular are

Synthetic abrasion, upon a concentric foundation
I bring about the 10 plagues, epidemic the nation

Juggle the planets while i rebuttal the banished
God trusts me to feed both the righteous and famished

Destruction all around, but I stand unscathed
Uncaged, unleashed monster once a slave

Those lines were DOPE. The only thing I could complain about is you have some filler rhymes I would say, that dont live up to some of the others you have in the rest song.

[N.F.M.]

Wasn't bad. I liked the second half of this peice more than the first half. It almost seems like it took you a moment to get in the zone. But overall it was a nice peice.

[Prophet Margin]

Thanks for the feed guys

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