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    Till death do us part...


    *Till death do you part*

    Lips injected a fuel that our engine
    Had fused for depression to use.
    Lisping a cruel vile to seep through
    And while the eyes roamed the city,
    We stayed pacing passed burgundy brown-ish pews.
    Hand in hand with echoes of whispers
    Congratulations misses and mister
    For overdosing on ether to slither
    And wither the soul of sinners.

    Hath
    Has 
    Shun
    Light
    Through
    Darkness

    With prudence my jubilant scarlet letter,
    Is scatter brain pistol; storming bullet wounds. 
    Crimson vile clank through my veins excited,
    But depressed in anguish for reasons unknown.
    I hold the cold fingers tight for the wind,
    To come bask and recite "we're at this again?"
    Murdering paint with beads of sweat asunder,
    Like thunder going under except the sound
    -is muttered not covered for detail
    Beautiful glances she romances the mens chances,
    Picking with icicle jawbreakers to mend teeth
    That bite for body language rather than language- itself.
    Hand hidden with sheet covers and louvre window pains,
    Slitting the skins throat to croak this mirror image...
    ... Fingers choke the palm to sweat.

    *I Do*
    CHEERS-
    In the reception a lesson unfolds,
    Scolding binds of hatred in tap glasses
    To speech an imbrued emotion
    To silhouette the night- before Christmas.

    "T'was December with flakes descending
    Onto the pavement which we kept warm.
    You remember?
    Howls if bitter cries echoing the streets
    With lampshade figurines prancing.
    We met under stars but no movie sequel,
    Just a bs full of clothes and some stranger
    -smiling in fear"


    -dad don't please it's a happy moment for me
    [I]Well then so be it... I just...
    -STOP! If the bare hands of another
    Frightens your soul cold then
    A lover is something that you can't accept; for me

    *Sigh*  

    Once a year twice a month and three days
    In a week we see I to eye but my cataracts are dry.
    Been wiping them for years as her smell
    Lingers in the living room.
    Oh... To be odd years back in time
    Would refine the once punch drunk sty
    She delivered as WE cried.
    Mother is gone forever,
    What more is there to hold the place
    We raised you in is broken and cold.
    Reminds me of nothing but belts to the skin
    Fingernails digging In and a meal half cooked
    Cause the mail hasn't received anything 
    Of the likes for me.
    I'm done let it go it's tine to rest in thy same snow
    Grab my best friend off the shelf
    Brush the dust to the wind- soon
    That will be me with Emily again.

    Where day meets night,
    We say until forever.
    No need to try again,
    Because-
    What she don't know...
    ... Is that I love her.

    .
    .
    .


    Got there as soon as the call
    Came in through my hands that
    Left me anxious of the name- on display.
    Honey I love you, tell Michael to stay
    father what's the matter? Are you okay?
    -Click-
    And my soul hits the ground
    Crawling to where a house in flames decapitates.
    I am left weary as I fall from grace
    Leave the angels for a moment to find
    The devil in this place.
    Find the only room that wasn't burnt in the mayhem,
    A letter folded with a wine bottle

    -congratulations my daughter., wish you could see me dancing with your mother right now

    Ash particles combust men rush for me; flushed
    My emotions to begin to rust as staying strong
    Was the only lesson I've learned to trust.
    Head held high as tears decay from my eyes,
    I look to kiss the sky
    -love you mom and dad
    Glad you chose your anniversary to re-unite.
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    Re: Till death do us part...

    bump fuckers
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    Re: Till death do us part...

    This is fantastic. I chose to read this due to the personal feel, easy to say it didn't dissapoint.
    The first stanza gripped me because of your description, the way in which you compared daily life with the emptyness of a church - brown pews and dark days.

    -Click-
    And my soul hits the ground
    Crawling to where a house in flames decapitates.
    I am left weary as I fall from grace
    Leave the angels for a moment to find
    The devil in this place.
    That is awesome. It's the kind of writing I would expect in a piece like this, only it's rare you see it this good.

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    Re: Till death do us part...

    Wow, sick writing and the picture is amazing. Dig it.

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