An Argonaut

[Seyance]

AN ARGONAUT

my adamantium teeth made your family tree panic and flee,
mastered the flow division with moses wisdom and channelled the sea
now i plan to release a cancerous beast that answers the priest
with savage decrees, sayin your talent is cheap every calender week.
the phantom is me, putting your life on a balancing beam..
the evil one make you speak in tongues and chant in ya sleep
like you had a disease. cause steppin it up ain't a challenging feat
i'll destroy a world just to take this battle with ease,
becoming a cyborg timelord when i upgrade from man to machine
then inhale the planet's debris until my nasal passage is clean..
once i created adam and eve, now only hate and malice is seen,
when i blatently shatter beliefs, making your saviour have to retreat.
throw my jason mask in the streets, the truth is my iq is high
i'm who designed medusa's eyes, taught the jews to lie and crucify
ignored human kind's foolish cry and putrefied the bluest sky..
look skin deeper i'm the grim reaper forcing anubis life into the light
by placing a bladed chain to the knave of his neck at the pagans request,
see i'm gaining respect.. satan has said i'm the angel of death
with an army of hatred possessed changlings infesting the places of rest,
ready to make any shamen repent or fade to the depths.
i'm absolutely amazing at best.. you've got a blatent right to fear
spitting so hot, i'll make you cry then vapourize the tears,
a round table knight with blades so light and sheer
one patient swipe would take ya life and shave a mighty beard.



M

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[Prophet Margin]

This was pretty dope, lots of strong desciption and vocab, and interesting subjects.....good flow for the most part

The first 8 lines of the peice were prolly the best in my opinion

pretty sick drop overall

[Prophet Margin]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...postid=8235637

if you gottta minute

[Frantikk]

sick shit, for real, digging your vocab and multies.. Reminds me a lot of how I was trying to write when I was a solid txt head. Impressive and flashy ish, eye candy. Do you do audio at all? (Sorry to have to ask, i'm new to the site) The title drew me in, the rhymes blew me away.. Love your style dawg. Will be lookin forward for more.

[Seyance]

not sure if I'd record this verse, props on the feed.

[Seyance]

elevate.

[Seyance]

go on.

[White-Winter]

this piece is FUCKING CRAZY!!

the imagery in this piece is dope, the wordings/vocab was spot on, i had to use a dictionary for the second word lol...i felt the flow was increasing in tempo as i was reading through it....there were so many lines i could quote which i loved...i felt the anger and rage as i was reading through the piece....did you write this piece when listening to a heavy metal tune?

[Seyance]

just listening to jedi mind tricks.. props, i'll return the feed.

[-ANIMAL-]

First of all I like the flow.. dope and the inner were fire too. the content was fresh and IMO I think I like you approach to it... nonetheless, the multies were not present and IMO it took many credit of your drop. I like some alright imagery that you had... dope at best....

GOOD JOB

KEEP IT UP..

RTF: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...702/index.html

[_Lyrics]

what up sey haven't seen you in a while..
had to drop a couple lines of feed in here.. this was a dope drop man, definitely feeling the rhyme schemes here, this is that fast paced shit i really mess with.. felt like a short and to the point flex piece with a bunch of crazy shit line after line, the content wasn't really forced, which we know is hard to do when carrying multis like that.. just not much direction besides what you've done and will do being an Argonaut though, so my only complaint would have to be with the topic of choice i guess.. towards the end it was a rampage, and the flow was something I was vibin with, the word choices felt thought out and fresh.. keep dropping fam..

M

[.RainMan]

I really dig it man, it sounds great.

i'm absolutely amazing at best.. you've got a blatent right to fear
spitting so hot, i'll make you cry then vapourize the tears,
a round table knight with blades so light and sheer
one patient swipe would take ya life and shave a mighty beard.

That's what I'm talking about, nice rhymes and flow.

[Voyce Box]

man, first off, i really dig this whole rhyme scheme you used.
not only that, but the way you kept the flow clean while using it.
i have seen this tried many times and failed many times.
but, you, you really bodied this whole piece..
i love the vocab used, too, very well written.
just shows you're a true writer, whether you use a topic or not.
i love pieces like this, when done right like this.
actually ended up reading this like 4 times, cause it's that dope.

the phantom is me, putting your life on a balancing beam..
the evil one make you speak in tongues and chant in ya sleep
like you had a disease. cause steppin it up ain't a challenging feat
i'll destroy a world just to take this battle with ease,
becoming a cyborg timelord when i upgrade from man to machine
then inhale the planet's debris until my nasal passage is clean..

like, damn, man, perfection was definitely at it's best here.
and i ain't talking just these bars, but the whole piece.
i loved the way you described yourself in that part though.
you've got a very creative mind, when putting together your words.
this is the first i ever seen from you, keep writing!

i would appreciate it, too, if you would R.T.F on my ToyBox piece.

[English]

you chose good multi patterns/sets to carry
for a 'flex' that's fitting
and for a flex;
I'll ignore the lack of coherence and cohesion,
-looking at it, and I could be wrong, youd have a tough time vocalizing this onbeat, segments are stretched

and the 'content' didnt pertain to the title as much as I expected before reading, but

as a testament to ur ability to string multi's
this was on point.

[English]

you chose good multi patterns/sets to carry
for a 'flex' that's fitting
and for a flex;
I'll ignore the lack of coherence and cohesion,
-looking at it, and I could be wrong, youd have a tough time vocalizing this onbeat, segments are stretched

and the 'content' didnt pertain to the title as much as I expected before reading, but

as a testament to ur ability to string multi's
this was on point.