In the short time that I’ve been here I’ve come to realize the majority of the poetry on this site is very new age and contemporary…I’m not quite sure if there is even a poetic genre for it. Now I said that to say this…my poem is the complete opposite of what I just said. It’s purposefully sappy and a bit cliché at moments, but that’s only because I wrote it for my girl and I know what she likes…she’s very classical in taste. Therefore, I tried to tailor-make a poem to fit her preference. So, yeah, I know…trust me…I know. Feedback/criticism is always welcomed though. Enjoy…I hope.
RANDOM THOUGHTS FORM A FOOL IN LOVE
When I look at you…
I THINK OF GOD
And how proud he must have been
The day he made you
The smile on his face
And the joy in is heart
The feeling of great accomplishment
You are the prototype Eve before the fall
The blueprint to beauty
The picture- prefect- version of an angel
There is nothing not to
LOVE,
ADMIRE,
DESIRE or
LUST,
You are divine in every way
There are no words worthy enough to define your splendor
You render wordsmiths worthless and poets speechless
Musicians have ventured to put you down on paper
Turn your beauty into notes and compose…
What sweat sounds perfection makes…
Your melody is heavenly
Your heartbeat is rhythmic
Your dance moves are flawless
...You are a waltzing miracle
A walking-talking-fairytale I want to never end
So, grab my hand and let’s dance through eternity
Turn our backs on mortality
And discover what forever is
Our story begins with a "Once upon a time"
And IF it ever ends
It’ll be a "Happily ever-after"
The in-between chapters
Are filled with romance and sunny days
With little beads of raindrops
thumping against windowpanes
Mother Nature’s play-list to lovemaking…
And baby, my love is for the taking
Hell, you’ve already stolen my heart
So why stop now?
I have so much more to offer
I picture white doves flying above
As we stand at the alter
Reciting our vows to one another
“When I stare into your eyes
I see God’s grand design
Like looking in the midnight sky
And seeing the stars shine for the first time
Galaxies are spinning in your pupils
And constellations are waiting to be named
After you
Your smile is like a kaleidoscope
Complete with all the colors of the rainbow
Galileo, invited the telescope
So that all the world my gaze upon you
… In your heavenly form"
She's a misguided angel in search of her halo
Looking for her way back home…
I know God must miss you as much as I do
When you’re not by his side…
Seven thousand miles across the sea
Could never keep me from loving you
I’d build an ark if I had to
Or swim thru shark invested waters
Just to reach you...risk life and limb
For one last kiss then die a happy man
Baby, you are my everything
My slide and monkey bars
Marry-go-round and swing
A playground full of amusement
You bring my inner child to surface
And remind me of what innocence was like
When I look at you…
I THINK OF SHAKESPEARE
And how proud he must have been
The day he penned you
The smile on his face
And the joy in is heart
The feeling of great accomplishment
You are the prototype Juliet before the tragedy
The rough draft to an epic poem
The finely-polished-final-version of a masterpiece
There is nothing not to
LOVE,
ADMIRE,
DESIRE or
LUST ,
YOU ARE THE MOST INCREDIBLE BEING EVER CREATED
And I love you...more than you'll ever know...