10 Lines, do not go over...my patience is short with noobs.
due in 1 hour.
Copper
Jeffry
10 Lines, do not go over...my patience is short with noobs.
due in 1 hour.
Check. Here's my links:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...274/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...495/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...13/index2.html
And here's my rap:
You think your so slick
But trust man, you suck dick
You just can't put two rhymes together
'Cause you're flow is old and dried like leather
I'm the new kid, it's true
But you've bitten more than you can chew
And when this thing is done
I think we'll know who's number one
Two lines left from me, are you feeling okay?
When you respond, please, just don't be too cliche
This nigga said he wanted to battle me before, well why didn't he?
I'd mop his ass up and throw away the brush, like i did to swift shifty
Losing to me will be the death of you, get the fuck outta the front lines
eat some copper salt please and do us a favor and attempt suicide
Went on a jog, i kept kickin up rocks like i was playin soccer,
i realized i was murdering you, then i picked up the rock and threw away the copper
Periodic table goes...Nickel -> Copper-> Zinc, you're always stuck in the middle,
you were the butt of the 3 ways, now your wife n bf left you now you're a widdow,
If mods were smart, they'd kick out the noobs and ban you,
but im like gold, funny how im still worth more than you..
keystyled this whole shit.
bump
Periodic table goes...Nickel -> Copper-> Zinc, you're always stuck in the middle,
you were the butt of the 3 ways, now your wife n bf left you now you're a widdow,
vs
nada
that line coulda been cool jeff but ya worded it real weird, didnt need to do much for the win though
vote jeff for having a better verse.
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V.Jeff better verse.
jeff im callin you out stop duckin hoe
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A.T.
Last edited by A.T.; August 26th, 2011 at 12:46 AM
...Onslaught!
Copper:
1: played... and just awful...
2: i see a punch i guess... but its way off...
3: statement... no punch
4: yeah, we know it aint you... no hate...
5: statement...
Jeff, or Price, whoever the fuck you are now, lol:
1: not really a punch... but that line by itself could win this battle...
2: name flip, eh
3; notha name flip, another eh
4: worded weird... potential to be pretty awesome... ha
5: another name flip... eh, below average closer...
no bueno battle...
V/ Jeff
The blue stuff.
Periodic table goes...Nickel -> Copper-> Zinc, you're always stuck in the middle,
you were the butt of the 3 ways, now your wife n bf left you now you're a widdow,
vs
nothing
v-Jeff for having the better attempts..cop was lackin some punches
leave links n ill rtf peeps...
bump #2
nothing
vs
Periodic table goes...Nickel -> Copper-> Zinc, you're always stuck in the middle,
you were the butt of the 3 ways, now your wife n bf left you now you're a widdow,
-meh
copper came to basic
v-Jeff
hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...520/index.html
bump #3
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vote peeps... bump #6..
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