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  1. August 20th, 2011, 04:50 AM #1
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    She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    i wrote/recorded this verse an hour ago (out of boredom)

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    drop links, i will reply asap!


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  2. August 20th, 2011, 06:39 AM #2
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    Decent freestyle, Can definitley see u wrote this outta boredom lol..but not to shabby though, a where did u get that instrumental At? I've been lookin all over for that shit.
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  3. August 20th, 2011, 06:49 AM #3
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    i uno what it is but i really vibe with.. much props man
    i can tell u wrote outta boredom but its really cool sounding =)
    keep it up man
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  4. August 20th, 2011, 07:58 AM #4
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    yo this aint bad man for a freestyle man !!!!

    should maybe look into makin it a song bruh!
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  5. August 20th, 2011, 10:27 AM #5
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    I gotta admit it, I can never do such 1-hour tracks, lol I need a lot of time to put a track together! So mad respect for doing it. It's pretty good for something THAT quick. The beat choice was good. I liked your delivery, it's quite confident. Flow was tight all the way through, it was a short track though. The lyrics were cool, I'm not really a fan of such subject matter, but then again you said you did this out or boredom so I guess the content is irrelevant.

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  6. August 20th, 2011, 06:12 PM #6
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    thanks fellas! ^ i'm going to hit that link tonight.
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  7. August 22nd, 2011, 02:05 AM #7
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    *elevator music*
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  8. August 22nd, 2011, 04:03 AM #8
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    this is pretty chill, i dunno, try to use your flow more tnagable, like
    a little more internal rhymes and repititon, i like the voice slowing down on the bridge,
    this is tight otherwise mang, keep writing
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  9. August 23rd, 2011, 10:28 AM #9
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    thank you
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    NIce job man, I like your mic presence first of all. lyrics were pretty good, flow was on point. Definitely good quality and good work ethic recordin that shit. I hear no fuck ups, thats always whats up! lol
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  11. August 26th, 2011, 07:12 AM #11
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    ^ i really appreciate that
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    Listening.
    I Like The Beat and Your Vocals and Quality Are Fuckin Nasty.
    Lyrical Content Is Pretty Good.Good Shit Man Keep It up.
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  13. August 26th, 2011, 01:32 PM #13
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    this is pretty hot yo... beat is mellow and kinda... dreamy??? lol kinda feels like a dream sequence in a movie... flow is on point, delivery is strong and real confident, good voice... cool track...


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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    dope beat....nice rhyme schemes think your delivery could be more convincing on this...u just rapping it seems i guess goes along with emotion too....some real shit i can tell oh i dindt know this was the drake beat i might have to rip this without that cornball on it lol

    overall cool track man would like to hear more tho
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    Re: She Will (REMIX) *DROP LINKS!*

    thanks for the feedback!
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