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Title pretty much explains the track, was taking a few subliminal shots at some people I know personally and a few at the "industry".
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Feeeed please
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Dark beat, nice. Average flow, average emcee stuff, good though.
I do it for the art i aint tryna get a deal, haaa lol. thats the part people forgot
Fuck the swag movement? haaa lol. all good, i get you.
not bad, good venting stuff.
7/10
Keep dropping.
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fitting beat for the concept, im feeling your lyrics, i agree with you and am right there with alottt of what you saying.....flows not too bad, delivery is cool, could have a few more angry ish moments....hook is kinda simple i was hoping for something hyped....
...fuck the swag FAD
good shit tho i def like what your saying in this...you are keeping it real dude, kinda inspired me to make a track similar lol
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Thx fellas
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I think your flow was actually pretty sick, your vocals went right along with the beat. You went in on some parts, but I think if you would have more aggression to grab peoples attention, I would have given it a 9/10 but I give it a 8/10. Nice man
The beat is pretty tight. The flow is semi-basic but still sounds sick! I like the puns you used and def agree with some of the things you said. Overall good drop man!
I'd like to see you do a lighter beat, a more mellow calm type thing. If you decide to do one PM me so I can make sure to see!
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Good looks
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I like your lyrics man but I don't quite understand your beat. I thought that would be to add something, cuz I wanted to do a remake of this melody and imagined it differently lol
Your flow actually pretty sick. As a whole its dope man! I like it!
If you write more songs, then tell me.
Check out my rapcore beat:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...24#post8224124
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I like the emotion in the track, and the chorus is nice and simple, fits the concept well...I like the opening to the second verse, starts off strong and the imagery there was pretty good...The mix is well done too, Im feeln the track man...when u get a chance rtf...http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...817/index.html
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Thx for feed will hit links tonight after work
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Ill edit this up later, i cant listen at work
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An armed man is a citizen,
An unarmed man is a victim.
Good delivery, your flow is on point, content is there. There are certain concepts I feel like you could have expanded on, or rather made more hard hitting and to the point, it's like you're telling instead of simply showing. Up your confidence, you got the flow, just find that beast inside yourself and roll with it. You're definitely off to a good start in terms of expressing yourself and getting the stress up from off your chest. Keep rhyming, you got it!
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i respect it.. 3/5 rating.. holla back..
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