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Thanks.
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This was probably one of the deepest ones I've read on here. Actually, it was the deepest. I completely agree that words can't do this justice. You need a hug for this one
I liked how you compared the sky colors to skin colors. Wow, this one should be in a book.
"Where the bluest of ocean meets pink skies on the horizon.
Rainbow Raindrops capsizing; The morning sun rising.
These interaction of hues, are of satisfaction to you?
You say yes, But I know your attraction's untrue.
The mixed green and light blue, of a mornings fresh dew.
The black night changing to, the white moonlight's debut.
Through and through; I cant see how one could draw this view:
That when its nature, its beauty. But when its skin, it's taboo."
That whole part there was very good. You made it so easy to picture real life with just words. Then I liked how that last line fit in there.
"For they love the blossom of deep purple, and would never wish to fade-it.
But forget it was blue and red petals that came together to create-it.
May not fit-in ur-group if one's peach and another's brown
But we stick-to-our-'roots', since we 'hold eachother down'."
I really liked those lines too. I wish I could say more about why I liked it but I can't. All I can say is that it was extremely good.
"Love says: "Ive been there since the first time you kissed-him"
Logic says: "You cant marry a muslim and a Christ-ian."
But forget-them, and fuck that whole world they exist-in,"
This part is something I kind of disagreed with. I mean, love is blind, so I'm not saying Christians and Muslims shouldn't marry. But, being a Christian, I can understand how hard it would be to do that. Both religions say not to marry someone of different faith. I dunno, I guess I'm just saying make sure the Love is real before going through with something like that. It would be a lot of hard times for both people.
"Tho he has different hues in the hint of his face,
I wouldnt fix them to match; not a tint nor a trace.
Even tho if they did, we would be more accepted
But why wish change on somethin already perfected.
I see his true colors, and there's nothing Id trade
For together, we make the most beautiful shade."
Ah man, this was another good part of it. Damn, I wish I could explain more why I liked it. It went together very well. It couldn't be any more true.
I pretty much quoted your whole piece here, and I'm sure this response is going to be a mile long, but I feel it's the least I could do in response to such a good piece. The hug is always open for you but you have to come to me to get it :P
I just noticed your post to me in the "life through the eyes of a bird" post and wanted to say sorry for overlooking you :P It was definately my loss..hehe.
Legendary..You're my new best friend.
heh, Naw, but seriously..THANK YOU so much for that reply. That just makes it worth posting. I really, sincerely, appreciate it.
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lolWell if you keep posting I'll keep replying to it. I'm definately going to be reading whatever you post here in the future.
as one good turn well deserves anotha rite back. i must say this is defintly sum good stuff. love how ya took a deep and close 2 heart subject and just florished it with the rite mix of emotions and imagery that ya blew me back in my steps foe a second. ya flow in ya first verse was rapid pace almost a tounge twister. well used, grabbing my attention untill the the mighty unveiling, where ya second verse just demands attention with a raw power just screaming to vent out. sum serios emotions coming out with an intent. but enought about this and that im just lettin ya know this was a joy to read so stAy up
peace
dat waz tight girl! it waz really good!! one of da best
Thanks very much you two^
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sick piece. wordz were amazing, and it all flowed real good. feelin that fo sure.
you dont know me and you dont owe me a thing. my comments would just get lost in the sea of love your already drowning in. beautiful as always. kash rulez everything around missremarkable k.r.e.a.m get the money. xoxox
I cant even express the feelings I had while reading the piece, nor can I quote my favorite part from it. If I had to, I think I would be forced to quote the entire piece and then highlight it. Maybe underline some pieces.
This was dope, you speak so well with words and the inner rhyme scheme is untouchable by any other female netcee I've seen or heard about. This is truely the gift to others.
Well, enough flattering you. Do audio with me, and I'll be happy. You know how I love you GeGe, come back to the freak-nest whenever you have time.
"I never pictured I'd be good at rap, honestly.
Now I figure I'm too good to rap, modestly."
LM [Ai]
ah, ^My two favorite fellz.
JAYJAY!!! I luh mah jayjay, thanks for the response babe, you know i love ya.
Zacky..thank ya baby. I'd say thats one of the best compliments anyone's ever given me on here. The freak-nest part that is. hehe.. JK. Thanks boo.
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Very nice Gyrl
imagery flow and all
keep doin ur thang
*~ nothin but love~*
thanks, gyrl.
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