10 lines.
due either in 1 hour or by midnight Pacific Standard time.
10 lines.
due either in 1 hour or by midnight Pacific Standard time.
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Checking in, good luck, 1 hour.
- Zoh
Let's see. Another lazy man claiming he's a Jay-Z fan,
But I think you better just get ghost... Like a Patrick Swayze fan.
This battle should over quick, and I don't gotta perform no magic.
10 lines in an hour? Bro, we ain't talking about your coke habits!
I've seen your battles & you don't hit hard, like a day old joint,
Battling Jeffry's like writing with a broken pencil, 'cos there ain't no point.
10 bars by midnight? Heck, I could have this out before lunchtime.
Your verses are just bad jokes, 'cos they ain't got a punchline.
It's time for me to earn some respect and I know that you can bring it up.
This battle's like stand-up comedy for pussies - I'm just humoring this cunt.
- Zoh
ok...
battlin me? this field-fairy will have better luck pickin 4-leaf clovers,
mad because he spilled his lucky charms all over his boyfriends zohfa [1]
set up a callout expected vets to step up, but i had to settle for Z,
his girl cheated on him, he wanted in, but she said, nigga theres no room for 3,
just like the first letter in your name you always come dead last to respond,
never met a faggot like this who stole appliances from bed...bath n beyond
zoh the lines are clearly drawn, no need to get angry and cock-block,
cuz when you were pickin dandellions, i was skippin over your girl at recess, hop-skotch
[filler,] joe tiller, zoh is whack, worse than mac, ate it once had a heart attack,]
[filler,] zoh wanted to be a doctor but he didn't have the heart for that.
keystle..
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Zoh
10 bars by midnight? Heck, I could have this out before lunchtime.
Your verses are just bad jokes, 'cos they ain't got a punchline.
It's time for me to earn some respect and I know that you can bring it up.
This battle's like stand-up comedy for pussies - I'm just humoring this cunt.
U had some nice attempts going on but some of ur concepts were played.
Jeff
set up a callout expected vets to step up, but i had to settle for Z,
his girl cheated on him, he wanted in, but she said, nigga theres no room for 3,
just like the first letter in your name you always come dead last to respond,
never met a faggot like this who stole appliances from bed...bath n beyond
zoh the lines are clearly drawn, no need to get angry and cock-block,
cuz when you were pickin dandellions, i was skippin over your girl at recess, hop-skotch
[filler,] joe tiller, zoh is whack, worse than mac, ate it once had a heart attack,]
[filler,] zoh wanted to be a doctor but he didn't have the heart for that.
Lmao at the first too bars. I can see that u elevate when u actually try u had some humor and nice executed punches.
V/Jeff
Jeff was more consistent with his punches. Zoh u get props too man but try some diffrent concepts instead of basic metaphores. Try using personals and wordplay concepts as a part of creativity.
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wtf is the poll lmao???
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i keystyled this joeboston...
lol
bump to the top!
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Keystyled on my part, too, Jeff, lol.
Joe, not sure how I can use many personals on somebody I don't know yet, since I only joined the forums today, lol.
Thanks for the feedback, regardless.
- Zoh
Keystyled on my part, too, Jeff, lol.
Joe, not sure how I can use many personals on somebody I don't know yet, since I only joined the forums today, lol.
Thanks for the feedback, regardless.
- Zoh
Sorry about the double post!
- Zoh
Also, I had some wordplay, but yes I could've had more.
"Get ghost" - as in, disappear/leave, but also to get the movie "Ghost"... Wasn't sure how many people were going to get that, though.
- Zoh
Also, I had some wordplay, but yes I could've had more.
"Get ghost" - as in, disappear/leave, but also to get the movie "Ghost"... Wasn't sure how many people were going to get that, though.
- Zoh
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