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    The WuzUppers Intro

    Sup ya'll this piece is entitled "The WuzUppers Intro" featuring my man, JoeBoston. The WuzUppers are a newer crew to RB and we'd like to make our introduction to the members of Rap Battles. Big upps to Joe on his input for this.

    Joeboston:

    These dudes continuously sleeping now it time to wake up mutha fukas
    They ask what we feeding these Debbie Downers we tell em it was WuzUpperz
    Sending lyrical headshots when produce these head thumpers
    So when we ask do yall pack a Techno yall far from some Fist pumpers
    Spittin out these ill rhymes yall know thats our bread n butter
    We sitting at the table eating good when ot comes to family suppers
    Running this fucking game 100 yards like d-ends, pass rushers
    Once these dudes fall under pressure they wont be faking injuries like Jay Cutler
    Words smash with hard impact hit ya in the rear bumper
    Breaking through rush hour traffic runnin over yall like Big Rig Truckers
    Punches will have Highway Patrol picking up your body from the fucking interstate
    when it comes to puttin shit down on paper yall just lay their like a bunch of paper weights
    Act up "We Whip That Trick",fuck a Lorenz Tate
    Passing these bitches around like boxes of loose freight
    These dudes swearing under oath that they'll take away our fate
    Ya'll Fucking with the wrong people cuz we dropping hammers like the Clerk Magistrate
    When it comes to spittin yall will always be inferior cuz will fuking bury ya
    U can bite like mosquitoes from our verses and still wouldnt kill us from signs of Maleria
    We riding through ur open areas yall quick to throw up the barriers
    Delivering shots door to door like angry Postal Carriers
    These dudes just a bunch of characters with everything in their lives Sketched out
    Coming at us with a fresh mouth will turn shit into Reality once we leave ur bodies stretched out
    Wateva u throwin in our direction is going in a indirect route
    Cuz when it comes beef we cuttin through that shit like a Japanese Steakhouse
    The Moto is activity and extreme elevation
    Haters tryna cross our borderlines with Illegal Documentation
    We offing these bitches so they'll take us as being Relentless
    Murking muthafukas and taking more Bodycounts off the Census
    We aiming high and we swinging for the fences
    So next time haters throw us a curveball we clearing out the benches



    Jeffry:


    Pop, Lock and droppin like your jaws when we enter the room,
    Ya’ll can put up a fight, but you’ll be forgotten about faster than Sylvester Croom
    Flip on my hat, put on my J’s yup I represent the WuzUppers,
    We came to dinner, and even Jesus made room for us at the Last Supper,
    Fresh to Jeff or Fresh to death, you lame haters couldn’t see through it,
    I’m spinnin of my feet - like DaDa’s from G-Unit,
    From Boston to Memphis we runnin the streets,
    Flowin rhymes longer than marathon events at Olympic track meets
    Other crews will hate on this and will call it whack,
    We don’t stand for that,
    we’ll leave em bloody and bodied like open water shark attacks
    They never could and never will relate, the top spot is what we’re tryin to pursue,
    Otherwise I suggest going to magic kingdom where dreams do come true,
    We run fast breaks on your D, unscripted offensive plays,
    ya'll cant keep up, standing alone waitin for the ball - 3 seconds in the lane,
    Other crews used to be good, what happend? oh they prolly on one,
    Me & Joe run spread eagle like Mike Vick and Vince Young
    All these haters were destined for whack, since their moms gave birth,
    We're runnin for that Super Bowl run like Ocho Cinco and Albert Haynesworth
    Other crews are full of audio heads, SS nuts and lame ducks
    We in our prime watch us transform into optimus, ride in GMC trucks
    We rise to the top, beat down on returning RB members,
    couldn't study this phenomenon if you were in Huntington learning centers
    Dick riders ride vets like Christmas gifts on santas sleigh,
    if you plan on doing that to us, please stand away from our fame,
    We stood watchin other crews, seein what they can do,
    always comin in 2nd like they were Wayne Rooney and ride with Man U
    They got loose screws, knock em down like unconnected door hinges,
    but they're all rusty like overused heroin syringes,
    We're a newer crew to RB, always up for improvement,
    If you don't like it, step out of the way for the WuzUppers movement.



    feedback is appreciated and always open for comments, leave a link at the end of your feedback and Joe n i will return the favor.


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    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...844/index.html
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...html?p=8203874

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    Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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    sick, bro. Holy shit. Absolutely captivating lyrics. never seen something so explosive, dynamic, and quintessentially mesmerizing! Keep it up!

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    got some good lines in there fam, id like to hear it in audio though. Just to see how it all clicks. got any songs?
    [SOUNDCLICK]11471670[/SOUNDCLICK]


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    Re: The WuzUppers Intro

    i do some audio but not a whole lot, im lazy, but thanks cuz, which lines did you like best? im interested in knowing to be honest.

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    Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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    sick, bro. Holy shit. Absolutely captivating lyrics. never seen something so explosive, dynamic, and quintessentially mesmerizing! Keep it up!

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    bump

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    Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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    sick, bro. Holy shit. Absolutely captivating lyrics. never seen something so explosive, dynamic, and quintessentially mesmerizing! Keep it up!

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    Flip on my hat, put on my J’s yup I represent the WuzUppers,
    We came to dinner, and even Jesus made room for us at the Last Supper,

    Nice, favorite bar.

    Decent drop, got a little choppy in some parts with the flow, but like the trackz said, you can't really judge it until you hear it. Connections could use work and the rhyme scheme of the first person was too simple. Work on adding multis and connecting lines better. Keep dropping and repping your crew fellas.
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    Flip on my hat, put on my J’s yup I represent the WuzUppers,
    We came to dinner, and even Jesus made room for us at the Last Supper,

    Nice, favorite bar.

    Decent drop, got a little choppy in some parts with the flow, but like the trackz said, you can't really judge it until you hear it. Connections could use work and the rhyme scheme of the first person was too simple. Work on adding multis and connecting lines better. Keep dropping and repping your crew fellas.
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    Re: The WuzUppers Intro

    joe - didn't feel liek you took a topical approach and went for written audio, i feel the flow and can almost feel the energy in this just by the opening line however i think you should look into takeing a more topical approach when you do a text collab as it seems a bit basic otherwise.

    jeffy - basically the same as joe tbh. you had punchlines in there and similies but you should turn the similies into metaphores and put a few extra multis in there to smooth the flow out a little.

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    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...93#post8206193

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    @slayer ill rtf when I get home when I get to a computer

    And its just jeff, not jeffy....

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    Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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    sick, bro. Holy shit. Absolutely captivating lyrics. never seen something so explosive, dynamic, and quintessentially mesmerizing! Keep it up!

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    Re: The WuzUppers Intro

    Ayo good drop jeff. Everyone this was a freestyle collab so there was really no topic to it but just overall coming hard and representing our crew name to get us out there and get some feedback. Thanks jeff for putting together my dude.
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    upp

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    Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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    sick, bro. Holy shit. Absolutely captivating lyrics. never seen something so explosive, dynamic, and quintessentially mesmerizing! Keep it up!

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    Incredible.
    Flip on my hat, put on my J’s yup I represent the WuzUppers,
    We came to dinner, and even Jesus made room for us at the Last Supper,
    That's genius man, pure inspiration. Nice work.

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=456370

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    yeah thanks...

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    sick, bro. Holy shit. Absolutely captivating lyrics. never seen something so explosive, dynamic, and quintessentially mesmerizing! Keep it up!

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    Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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    sick, bro. Holy shit. Absolutely captivating lyrics. never seen something so explosive, dynamic, and quintessentially mesmerizing! Keep it up!

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    Re: The WuzUppers Intro

    still yet to rtf

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    Re: The WuzUppers Intro

    Quote Originally Posted by Slayerr View Post
    still yet to rtf
    watchout for the freepost slayerr...

    im gettin on it now.

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    Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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    sick, bro. Holy shit. Absolutely captivating lyrics. never seen something so explosive, dynamic, and quintessentially mesmerizing! Keep it up!

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