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    Heartache rap

    This rap is written to the instrumental here


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    Nigger get a deal he been scrabblin’
    Tryna get a deal they be babbling,
    Bout how to make it, but especially bout guns and money,
    Make beats so call rap girl my loving honey,
    No brain to get but this kid loves knowledge,
    No aim to hit the game was his only choice
    Without voice he writ(sic) cus this nigger needs a homage
    You better use what he gives as it always suits her,
    Better see it how it is, don’t always que the,
    End or the final scene,
    Bouts to spin guess it’s always the vinyl scene,
    A nigger gotta dream tho,
    Listen to the most high marjuana,
    Food for thought piranah
    Vouch lightning but scared of fucking thunder,
    I ain’t hiding, so why’s it so hard to find another,
    A to bring aim to the fucking game,
    Shame to the fucking name of,
    Those who ain’t cared about it,
    Call me Robin, fire is but all I doubt,
    Call me thor, lighting ain’t all I vouch,
    No lips to pout,
    No myths to doubt,
    Boy lovesJah-Rule, but he ain’t no ruler
    And he ain’t no rasta
    Girl talking whips and chains,
    would’ve thought y’all want a master,
    Girl like russian roulette, ain’t lucky and she’ll give a fire,
    She got 6 clips but still she ain’t no counter,
    Happy go Luck and you still have to pass her.


    HOOK
    I never wanna hurt but i feel no pain,

    You talk bout love but it the same

    You fooled me twice no time for shame

    But with a chip on my shoulder, I guess I must play the game

    Bout heartaches,
    Love makes,
    Hate thangs,
    Fakethangs,
    Gotta make it real things,
    Baby momma bought a benz
    but lil baby still be spending it on mo. things
    but now grew up,
    Suit up, Stood tall,
    No screw up,
    The game’s shoes to fill But no I didn’t need to boot up
    Thought there was no me in game,
    Word to your tutor,
    Better brought the dark sundays never suit her,
    Pact that, spittiing all that white powder
    For teachers tryna make all truth vanish away
    Sorry to say,
    Girl ain’t a girl without some short-short wearing,
    Boy ain’t a boy, unless its glock he bearing,
    Trying hard for this nigger its college
    No balls to hit but this girl loves knowledge
    No scholarship the game was his only choice
    Without voice he wrote cus this nigger needs homage

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    Re: Heartache rap

    The Flow Is Pretty Good To The Instrumental That You Provided...
    The Content To Me Isnt To Pleasent And Great.


    I Was Looking For A Way More Deeper Piece By The Title To Be Honest. Work On The Content And Imagery..... Rating About 2/5

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