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    Accept My Defeat

    You betta take a second to accept defeat
    If you don't come correct there aint no steppin to me
    Livin in the streets you can call me a ghee
    yeah yo mum told me you started to cry
    I cant murder you wit words but you gonna wish you died
    My heart still beatin thats why you alive
    Cant stand it that white boy rappin
    Cuz if I piss you off enough you gonna start cappin
    But its shoot up the place first then take names
    Then exit watch the remains of yo brain
    Cant think correct
    Hear me on the mic might make you errect
    Imma shut the place like its a wreck
    This random style will have you breathless
    But I let sit there lifeless
    Thinkin you can survive this
    Put you in a daze amaze
    Feelin the flow
    Soething like magic when I holla at yo hoe
    But you betta know this Boy
    And I aint tryin to hate
    Tryin to get my voice heard while you dicrimantie

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    Re: Accept My Defeat

    this will prolly get closed because you have no feedback links but meh you need to work on your written skills your "style" hurts my head you write like I used to when I was 12

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    Re: Accept My Defeat

    Accept My Defeat
    You betta take a second to accept defeat
    If you don't come correct there aint no steppin to me
    Livin in the streets you can call me a ghee
    yeah yo mum told me you started to cry
    I cant murder you wit words but you gonna wish you died
    My heart still beatin thats why you alive
    Cant stand it that white boy rappin
    Cuz if I piss you off enough you gonna start cappin


    I'm confused " my heart still Beating thats why you alive?"
    The hell that mean

    Accept My Defeat
    You betta take a second to accept defeat
    If you don't come correct there aint no steppin to me

    This didn't even rhyme
    You need alot of work brethren keep posting

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    Re: Accept My Defeat

    go review 3 other songs, nursery rhymes, keep at it and you'll kick some ass one day

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