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Supernat
King
16 Lines Due tomorrow
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This is my check.
check.
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king 1 day ago in the LLL semifinals chat
[quote]its cool that i vote right?[quote]
shreddin the weak, don`t step when I speak ur gettin be-headed this week
U`d think k owned a gravesite the way ur only king of the deadliest peeps
You won`t have to brag about quotes, no one would say this fag is dope
especially since u champed FL 3 times, but LLL YOU still hafta beg to vote
n` i heard u don`t eat healthy son, Shit nobody cares for this dumb herb
cuz the only time ur diggin deep s`when ur havin a bad day in the dumpster
dude`s in need of some serious help, you should just give up what ur dealt
cuz everytime king has a fundraiser, money`s missin n there cuts on em self
n` you seem to bring wrong facts to me, no one listens to ur songs actually
bitch ur so dumb u thought a chocolate lab was somewhere in wonkas factory
Plus ur life`s messy as fuck, and now i have to stay smackin this artist
cuz k`s been a hoarder, which explains why ur style has adapted to garbage
n peeps say you can`t fight, So I`ll make sure this snitch`s jaw`s shut
cuz my pen game`s so sharp u`ll get one to the neck like a episode of lockup
with bars you aint even fresh, so there`s no debating I`m best
shit only time king`s making moves is after that faggot gets mated in chess
Dudes terrible, he'll never make the text scene make noise
It aint enough to call Super bad, even though he's all about teenage boys
You came back before n Arch ended you, tried LLL n got trashed
Nats had the door closed on his career so much a Jehovas witness would point n laugh
You spit bars that just can't work, so this'll be over quick
If some concepts are a stretch, yours are like 6 hours of yoga bitch
Lol You must've had ya head up ya ass to not know I'm the best
And unless you eat didlos you better get it out before you starve to death
You aint on my level son this was over before it started
Bitch no one sees you as arrival, just a scrub who's easily departed
Ya crew keeps you around for support though they know that your shitty
Cuz you're weak is fuck, but you got a loss column that could hold up a city
Your RB career is pitiful, its almost too easy to ridicule son
Its time you just took a break from text, cuz it damn sure aint giving you one
Even ya girl treats you like shit, kid your just the picture of shame
So its clear she's got a little King in her...we just haven't picked out a name
upp
You won`t have to brag about quotes, no one would say this fag is dope
especially since u champed FL 3 times, but LLL YOU still hafta beg to vote
^Straight
n` i heard u don`t eat healthy son, Shit nobody cares for this dumb herb
cuz the only time ur diggin deep s`when ur havin a bad day in the dumpster
^Cool
Plus ur life`s messy as fuck, and now i have to stay smackin this artist
cuz k`s been a hoarder, which explains why ur style has adapted to garbage
^Fresh
n peeps say you can`t fight, So I`ll make sure this snitch`s jaw`s shut
cuz my pen game`s so sharp u`ll get one to the neck like a episode of lockup
^Kinda hypin urself here imo
with bars you aint even fresh, so there`s no debating I`m best
shit only time king`s making moves is after that faggot gets mated in chess
^Decent
vs.
You came back before n Arch ended you, tried LLL n got trashed
Nats had the door closed on his career so much a Jehovas witness would point n laugh
^Funny
You spit bars that just can't work, so this'll be over quick
If some concepts are a stretch, yours are like 6 hours of yoga bitch
^Ehh - debating quoting this but it was cool.. Above FL's level of bars lol
Lol You must've had ya head up ya ass to not know I'm the best
And unless you eat didlos you better get it out before you starve to death
^Lmaoo.. This was tight.. Wording was Ehhh but the punch itself was nice
Ya crew keeps you around for support though they know that your shitty
Cuz you're weak is fuck, but you got a loss column that could hold up a city
^Feelin it
Your RB career is pitiful, its almost too easy to ridicule son
Its time you just took a break from text, cuz it damn sure aint giving you one
^Decent misdirection
Even ya girl treats you like shit, kid your just the picture of shame
So its clear she's got a little King in her...we just haven't picked out a name
^Ok closer
Thought King came way more consistent here.. Nat was just too wordy at times n didnt bring it as much.. Good shit tho.. Prob one of the best battles FL's had in a while too lol.. v/King
shreddin the weak, don`t step when I speak ur gettin be-headed this week
U`d think k owned a gravesite the way ur only king of the deadliest peeps
meh
You won`t have to brag about quotes, no one would say this fag is dope
especially since u champed FL 3 times, but LLL YOU still hafta beg to vote
ok
n` i heard u don`t eat healthy son, Shit nobody cares for this dumb herb
cuz the only time ur diggin deep s`when ur havin a bad day in the dumpster
meh
dude`s in need of some serious help, you should just give up what ur dealt
cuz everytime king has a fundraiser, money`s missin n there cuts on em self
nice
n` you seem to bring wrong facts to me, no one listens to ur songs actually
bitch ur so dumb u thought a chocolate lab was somewhere in wonkas factory
nah
Plus ur life`s messy as fuck, and now i have to stay smackin this artist
cuz k`s been a hoarder, which explains why ur style has adapted to garbage
ok
n peeps say you can`t fight, So I`ll make sure this snitch`s jaw`s shut
cuz my pen game`s so sharp u`ll get one to the neck like a episode of lockup
meh
with bars you aint even fresh, so there`s no debating I`m best
shit only time king`s making moves is after that faggot gets mated in chess
weak
vs
Dudes terrible, he'll never make the text scene make noise
It aint enough to call Super bad, even though he's all about teenage boys
ok
You came back before n Arch ended you, tried LLL n got trashed
Nats had the door closed on his career so much a Jehovas witness would point n laugh
ok
You spit bars that just can't work, so this'll be over quick
If some concepts are a stretch, yours are like 6 hours of yoga bitch
weak
Lol You must've had ya head up ya ass to not know I'm the best
And unless you eat didlos you better get it out before you starve to death
meh
You aint on my level son this was over before it started
Bitch no one sees you as arrival, just a scrub who's easily departed
meh
Ya crew keeps you around for support though they know that your shitty
Cuz you're weak is fuck, but you got a loss column that could hold up a city
ok
Your RB career is pitiful, its almost too easy to ridicule son
Its time you just took a break from text, cuz it damn sure aint giving you one
ok
Even ya girl treats you like shit, kid your just the picture of shame
So its clear she's got a little King in her...we just haven't picked out a name
nice
v/King
good battle the wonka line was dead,other than that pretty even battle,the wit from kings punches kinda tipped it to
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dude`s in need of some serious help, you should just give up what ur dealt
cuz everytime king has a fundraiser, money`s missin n there cuts on em self
Plus ur life`s messy as fuck, and now i have to stay smackin this artist
cuz k`s been a hoarder, which explains why ur style has adapted to garbage
vs
Even ya girl treats you like shit, kid your just the picture of shame
So its clear she's got a little King in her...we just haven't picked out a nameYou came back before n Arch ended you, tried LLL n got trashed
Nats had the door closed on his career so much a Jehovas witness would point n laughYa crew keeps you around for support though they know that your shitty
Cuz you're weak is fuck, but you got a loss column that could hold up a city
V; King for more hard hitting punches. Both guys dropped some nice punches but king just connected a little bit more than his opponent
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Scytsophrenia
On that next level.. but STILL fuckin' crazy.
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Supernat:
shreddin the weak, don`t step when I speak ur gettin be-headed this week
U`d think k owned a gravesite the way ur only king of the deadliest peeps
dece opener
You won`t have to brag about quotes, no one would say this fag is dope
especially since u champed FL 3 times, but LLL YOU still hafta beg to vote
good punch
n` i heard u don`t eat healthy son, Shit nobody cares for this dumb herb
cuz the only time ur diggin deep s`when ur havin a bad day in the dumpster
lol this gotta laugh outta me
dude`s in need of some serious help, you should just give up what ur dealt
cuz everytime king has a fundraiser, money`s missin n there cuts on em self
mehh
n` you seem to bring wrong facts to me, no one listens to ur songs actually
bitch ur so dumb u thought a chocolate lab was somewhere in wonkas factory
doesn't connect
Plus ur life`s messy as fuck, and now i have to stay smackin this artist
cuz k`s been a hoarder, which explains why ur style has adapted to garbage
okay..
n peeps say you can`t fight, So I`ll make sure this snitch`s jaw`s shut
cuz my pen game`s so sharp u`ll get one to the neck like a episode of lockup
dece
with bars you aint even fresh, so there`s no debating I`m best
shit only time king`s making moves is after that faggot gets mated in chess
played concept, word this differently it woulda been solid
vs.
King:
Dudes terrible, he'll never make the text scene make noise
It aint enough to call Super bad, even though he's all about teenage boys
ehh
You came back before n Arch ended you, tried LLL n got trashed
Nats had the door closed on his career so much a Jehovas witness would point n laugh
good punch
You spit bars that just can't work, so this'll be over quick
If some concepts are a stretch, yours are like 6 hours of yoga bitch
lol
Lol You must've had ya head up ya ass to not know I'm the best
And unless you eat didlos you better get it out before you starve to death
ehh
You aint on my level son this was over before it started
Bitch no one sees you as arrival, just a scrub who's easily departed
heard this line before, ehh
Ya crew keeps you around for support though they know that your shitty
Cuz you're weak is fuck, but you got a loss column that could hold up a city
solid.
Your RB career is pitiful, its almost too easy to ridicule son
Its time you just took a break from text, cuz it damn sure aint giving you one
lol
Even ya girl treats you like shit, kid your just the picture of shame
So its clear she's got a little King in her...we just haven't picked out a name
good closer
Decent battle here, good to see both battlers have pretty even line length an line structure. Supernat you started off well then you came off soft the rest of the way in your piece. King was very consistent, some good punches and i think he edged Supernat in this one.
v - king
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supernat
shreddin the weak, don`t step when I speak ur gettin be-headed this week
U`d think k owned a gravesite the way ur only king of the deadliest peeps
its okish...a lil too many multies with no set up.
You won`t have to brag about quotes, no one would say this fag is dope
especially since u champed FL 3 times, but LLL YOU still hafta beg to vote
didnt go too harsh with the personal attempt...plus the punch was a statement
n` i heard u don`t eat healthy son, Shit nobody cares for this dumb herb
cuz the only time ur diggin deep s`when ur havin a bad day in the dumpster
too weak/basis/simple
dude`s in need of some serious help, you should just give up what ur dealt
cuz everytime king has a fundraiser, money`s missin n there cuts on em self
weak
n` you seem to bring wrong facts to me, no one listens to ur songs actually
bitch ur so dumb u thought a chocolate lab was somewhere in wonkas factory
lol...nah.
Plus ur life`s messy as fuck, and now i have to stay smackin this artist
cuz k`s been a hoarder, which explains why ur style has adapted to garbage
n peeps say you can`t fight, So I`ll make sure this snitch`s jaw`s shut
cuz my pen game`s so sharp u`ll get one to the neck like a episode of lockup
shit dont rhyme..missed bar bruh
with bars you aint even fresh, so there`s no debating I`m best
shit only time king`s making moves is after that faggot gets mated in chess
too wordy..too weak again..
vs
king
Dudes terrible, he'll never make the text scene make noise
It aint enough to call Super bad, even though he's all about teenage boys
make 2 times in the set up was bad wordin..but the end punch didnt rhyme to me so pretty much felt it miss
You came back before n Arch ended you, tried LLL n got trashed
Nats had the door closed on his career so much a Jehovas witness would point n laugh
not feelin this
You spit bars that just can't work, so this'll be over quick
If some concepts are a stretch, yours are like 6 hours of yoga bitch
aight..
Lol You must've had ya head up ya ass to not know I'm the best
And unless you eat didlos you better get it out before you starve to death
weak
You aint on my level son this was over before it started
Bitch no one sees you as arrival, just a scrub who's easily departed
statementish..
Ya crew keeps you around for support though they know that your shitty
Cuz you're weak is fuck, but you got a loss column that could hold up a city
eh..
Your RB career is pitiful, its almost too easy to ridicule son
Its time you just took a break from text, cuz it damn sure aint giving you one
better delivery..this was coo
Even ya girl treats you like shit, kid your just the picture of shame
So its clear she's got a little King in her...we just haven't picked out a name
this was aight as well, not a strong punch but humour is decent
verdict
thought king pulled this out with more connects. supernat had a few more wordin issues that took ecen more from the weak punches so this was pretty clear to me who won.
vote-> king
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