Metaphor/ Simile cypher

[Voyce Box]

her beauties a crime, her heart is a prison
i found her attractive, now i am her victim

[Defy-Gravity]

i smoke endless blunt, my weed tab is huge/
i roll up so much hefty couldn't match the baggies used/

[Defy-Gravity]

dam your water down flow, flooding the stage man/
now i gotta tighten your scalp and your not getting your braids down

[Bloodyhands]

acid trippin', on the mic just spittin'
flows vicious, like taking on pistol whippin's

[Eko Ren]

Consumed with shrooms, gifted with rhyming lips
Saying delicious shit like a candy coated clits

[ED word]

I'll never run out
like a clock that runs out
of its batteries
this is battery to rappers
that face me

[ED word]

I always got something to say like a cynical bastard
You cant stop me ones I've started

[Well Versed]

these are TERRIBLE...ok guys get some fuckin real metaphors...i mean tha candy coated clit one was sorta funny...let me SKOOL yall kids...

now how strange is that?, like i might not be felt
dude i bring home gold medals like michael phelps
yall need to tighten ur belts, cuz yall dudes saggin
so appearently u dont need dope bars, if ur swaggin

and


n im not hatin on cuz, im just sayin stuff
im sry dude but those bars just dont weigh enough

and

yall dudes is lame, n ur all tha same
thats why u like each others writtens inside of aim
yeah i know how u work, ur all inside tha frame
n if I were tha LORD, i wud put u all inside tha flames

and

i keep a clip handy like its a sequal, who said i wanna beat u?
i rather ground u into, spagetti n then fuckin eat u

and

no i dont be cool, n im not gonna calm down
if rap was a highskool id be shootin up ur prom gown
u lil fuckin faggets, always causing anamosty
if u wanna play with lines, ill have u hangin like aposthropies

and

to try even harder, or get even smarter
or switch n work on new styles like imma barber

and

everytime i hear u rhyme, i wanna grab a knife dude
n kill anyone with tha same name or even if they look like u

and

n ive been watchin CSI, so i might get away with it
7 seasons down, i got my bleach ready, anyday with it
yall dudes is just gay with it, n im more like dexter
yall better enjoy me now, i might be in jail next year

YALL DUDES GET YA GAME UP...for real...dont post BULLSHIT in this...its making yall look worse...HAAAAAAAAAAAA!

[Young Strykez]

spitting bars acidly like i'm a snake spraying venom
it fits with my army man look cos i got combats made of green denim

[Eko Ren]

ThaKING. Tsk.

I expected something phenom. Snippets 2 - 5 were nice. The rest were bla -- Voyce Box's was better. However.

These were "keystyles," at least on my part, rather than something copy/pasted from an old battle rhyme.

So, if you wanted to showcase, give me a minute to spit some shit:


My mind is a battered temple under constant assault
But I don’t get sentimental, after the fights that I’ve fought


Dear everyone, thanks
For hearing out my soul
It was just for fun
But now it’s part of what makes me whole
Every setting sun
Ignites the sky afire with gold
A description
Akin to the poetry I hold


I spit in script, never nondescript, my description sick as licking armpits
My tongue flicks are fantastic, my dick is like magic, no stick, automatic fix for your bitch
Black spic, the mix is perfect, skin waxed like a whip, biceps for vice grips
Juicy lips special fit perfect for sucking tits and tongue that’s hung just long enough for licking clits



And I eat my vegetables, so I’m incontestable
The magnitude of my phallic havoc is immeasurable
As my testicles play the illest instrumental
On her asshole like bongos, so freestyling is essential
But that shit was no tiempo, to me, that's fundamental
Rhymes so orgasmic, she leans over and grabs a pencil
Rap multis into her G spot with my big glock rubber sock

You're gonna need to come harder if you expect to leave everyone jaw-dropped, kid.

[<SamPle>]

my talents like a first day’s meal
Surreal, Yes I take the piss like I broke the ceil

Your like a Dyson you’ll always suck
Then call me abstinent, cause I don’t give a fuck

[Maximus]

I'll slaughter all these weak rappers like rams in the Holy month of Ramaddan
Cause im the devilish lyrical wizard who just broke out of Azkaban

[Young Strykez]

how about walk back in, little curry potter
im so powerful when i cast incendio it gets hotter.

[N0BLE]

everybody's weak at first, me, ive just inhaled too much fumes
but i guess everyone starts from shit like mushrooms.

[N0BLE]

im like a fat bitch on top, the way i crush dudes
like a girl who lies when she says that she loves you