Check in by Wednesday 1159 pm Eastern
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Y'all know the rules by now...
This is for the season championship... good luck to you both
Check in by Wednesday 1159 pm Eastern
Verses due Friday 1159 pm Eastern
Line Limit 20 minimum
Y'all know the rules by now...
This is for the season championship... good luck to you both
Last edited by Philly®; July 18th, 2011 at 01:26 AM
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ahem..
the predictions have made it clear, the winner's no doubt slaying
so if the season champ's untold.. it's only because it goes without sayin
i'm going casey anthony on this kid, you ain't a winner dude
this is such a blatant case of murder, i just got offered a mill for my first interview
this faggot could never get a date to show, i dont mean to look like a snitch
but now I know how Untold feels.. Friday was the first time i've ever been stood up by a bitch
this queer needs some tips, there's no point in prolonging this battle further
cuz when it comes to being quick to dish beef this bitch mimics rapbattle's server
join the SAP and get shook g, I bet you got the looks of a rookie
shit, nobody even has to see U-N-T, to know you got the traits of a pussy
reading 5 bars from you is bad enough, voters r gonna be pissed n' bummed
so if ur verse causes a change of heart.. it'll be arch editing the line limit minimum
honestly, kid's had a couple haymakers, but not enough to be fearing this geek
watch him be the first nigga to get a 1-2 punch medal in the Lethal Lyricist League
even with a couple *lol* lines, the rest of ur shit is too weak n' lame
so if untold ever makes a *DEAD* line.. the outcome will still be the same
what made u so cocky bitch? there's no reason for such a confidence
cuz when I say you're a master at executing concepts.. it's not a fuckin compliment
your punches never connect, as a text battler ur such a bore
shit, the only time my verse is an understatement is if I drop it after one of yours
bitch you couldn't even top my worst, so this is me schoolin you modest
cuz sometimes the truths better untold.. & i'm just being brutally honest
he's got no sense of cleverness, while his ideas are dull n' old
plus his punches & style only mesh, cuz they're both full of holes
ur bitch was due for some remodeling, that's why she ain't respond
shit, the only reason you got this far is cuz ur girl was in Bed and Bath with Beyond
ur nervous and it shows, quit being timid n' act wreckless
cuz you should've never been scared in the first place..
..knowing you wouldn't make it past second
go ahead n' post..
ur verses never entertain, so ur still getting crushed in the chest
i mean, the reason this thread was never cleaned.. is cuz philly's post still sums it up best
Originally Posted by Philly®
here we go..
check the nines. when it comes to guns, u cant mess wit mines
so for a season recap, i'll double up n bust a cap in ya ass a second time
i don't think when i drink! so for a safer bet, i'll take the steps
but i'll be the designated driver.. responsible for another alcohol related death
i stay wit sluts! wit toke's girl 'round the clock to say enough
if u count-her clockwise, u cant keep up wit how many times a day we fuck
toke, the hoes hate ya, n they won't date ya. so its harder to win
we watch each dame dash so quick, jay-z'll consider him for a partner again
while goin through ur history, its no mystery that ur in denile
last good page toke had, there were no cell phones n beepers were in style
i murder while its a bet toke ain't a threat. ull get beat easy hoe
but ur a predator in the league.. that has yet to be caught on the t.v. show
now listen fam. im a business man. n this battle, you lost it.
so intern.. u can answer my calls n take notes when im out of my office
tokes a bad example. now the fag gets trampled n thrown in a ditch
dawg, ur such a Bad Teacher.. a bitch was casted to play ur roll in the flick
tokes weak wit rap, so keep ya tracks cuz u wont leak a gem
ur music speaks volumes.. that even deaf people wish wouldnt speak to them
enough of the childish shit. ya crews wild n sick. i get nauseous
monsters inc? ok i got it.. cuz u n arch like to hang out in little kids closets
ya hoe know i like some dome. n the league know shes likes to bone
cuz her headset.. well in my crotch while she spoke into my microphone
plus ya chick, be runnin her mouth to a bunch of pricks
now she has a blue tooth, since she wasnt bayou when she sucked his dick
its time that this fag dies. we knoe he should'a lost last time
cuz even god's Grace.. could fuck ur ass up if u her got in a cat fight
its cool that we dropped alot. now this coward wont beef wit me
cuz face it, twenty-eight ur verse.. but i drop'd the rest to devour u easily
toke, should take a shot cuz i know this bitch is hurtin
fight? nah! u only TAAKA lot'a shit cuz the vodka gives u liquid courage
Last edited by Untold.; July 18th, 2011 at 12:34 AM
the predictions have made it clear, the winner's no doubt slaying
so if the season champ's untold.. it's only because it goes without sayin
cool
i'm going casey anthony on this kid, you ain't a winner dude
this is such a blatant case of murder, i just got offered a mill for my first interview
meh, ok
this faggot could never get a date to show, i dont mean to look like a snitch
but now I know how Untold feels.. Friday was the first time i've ever been stood up by a bitch
lol
this queer needs some tips, there's no point in prolonging this battle further
cuz when it comes to being quick to dish beef this bitch mimics rapbattle's server
lmao
join the SAP and get shook g, I bet you got the looks of a rookie
shit, nobody even has to see U-N-T, to know you got the traits of a pussy
cool
reading 5 bars from you is bad enough, voters r gonna be pissed n' bummed
so if ur verse causes a change of heart.. it'll be arch editing the line limit minimum
nah
honestly, kid's had a couple haymakers, but not enough to be fearing this geek
watch him be the first nigga to get a 1-2 punch medal in the Lethal Lyricist League
ok
even with a couple *lol* lines, the rest of ur shit is too weak n' lame
so if untold ever makes a *DEAD* line.. the outcome will still be the same
lol, cool
what made u so cocky bitch? there's no reason for such a confidence
cuz when I say you're a master at executing concepts.. it's not a fuckin compliment
eh kinda obvious
your punches never connect, as a text battler ur such a bore
shit, the only time my verse is an understatement is if I drop it after one of yours
cool
bitch you couldn't even top my worst, so this is me schoolin you modest
cuz sometimes the truths better untold.. & i'm just being brutally honest
tight
he's got no sense of cleverness, while his ideas are dull n' old
plus his punches & style only mesh, cuz they're both full of holes
nice
ur bitch was due for some remodeling, that's why she ain't respond
shit, the only reason you got this far is cuz ur girl was in Bed and Bath with Beyond
eh, i'm pretty sure i've seen this play used on Beyond which kinda takes away from it for me.
ur nervous and it shows, quit being timid n' act wreckless
cuz you should've never been scared in the first place..
..knowing you wouldn't make it past second
decent
go ahead n' post..
ur verses never entertain, so ur still getting crushed in the chest
i mean, the reason this thread was never cleaned.. is cuz philly's post still sums it up best
ok, could have left this one out imo.
vs
check the nines. when it comes to guns, u cant mess wit mines
so for a season recap, i'll double up n bust a cap in ya ass a second time
decent
i don't think when i drink! so for a safer bet, i'll take the steps
but i'll be the designated driver.. responsible for another alcohol related death
eh
i stay wit sluts! wit toke's girl 'round the clock to say enough
if u count-her clockwise, u cant keep up wit how many times a day we fuck
didn't like it, either the wording is weird or the wordplay just doesn't work
toke, the hoes hate ya, n they won't date ya. so its harder to win
we watch each dame dash so quick, jay-z'll consider him for a partner again
ok
while goin through ur history, its no mystery that ur in denile
last good page toke had, there were no cell phones n beepers were in style
eh
i murder while its a bet toke ain't a threat. ull get beat easy hoe
but ur a predator in the league.. that has yet to be caught on the t.v. show
ok
now listen fam. im a business man. n this battle, you lost it.
so intern.. u can answer my calls n take notes when im out of my office
lol cool
tokes a bad example. now the fag gets trampled n thrown in a ditch
dawg, ur such a Bad Teacher.. a bitch was casted to play ur roll in the flick
eh idk
tokes weak wit rap, so keep ya tracks cuz u wont leak a gem
ur music speaks volumes.. that even deaf people wish wouldnt speak to them
ok
enough of the childish shit. ya crews wild n sick. i get nauseous
monsters inc? ok i got it.. cuz u n arch like to hang out in little kids closets
lol
ya hoe know i like some dome. n the league know shes likes to bone
cuz her headset.. well in my crotch n while she spoke into my microphone
ok i guess
plus ya chick, be runnin her mouth to a bunch of pricks
now she has a blue tooth, since she wasnt bayou when she sucked his dick
lol
its time that this fag dies. we knoe he should'a lost last time
cuz even god's Grace.. could fuck ur ass up if u her got in a cat fight
eh
its cool that we dropped alot. now this coward wont beef wit me
cuz face it, twenty-eight ur verse.. but i drop'd the rest to devour u easily
lol, cool.
very cool battle. I'm going with Token. Reason being I thought he connected not only slightly more consistently, but also harder. Untolds style of wordplay, imo, doesn't work. I don't like wordplay that doesn't work smoothly in both contexts, which is why i think a lot of his lines didn't appeal to me as much. Tokens punches just seemed to come off smoother. good battle, definitely HOF worthy imo. Untold, props on doing what it took to show up and congrats to both for getting here.
vote Token
the predictions have made it clear, the winner's no doubt slaying
so if the season champ's untold.. it's only because it goes without sayin
oin the SAP and get shook g, I bet you got the looks of a rookie
shit, nobody even has to see U-N-T, to know you got the traits of a pussy
honestly, kid's had a couple haymakers, but not enough to be fearing this geek
watch him be the first nigga to get a 1-2 punch medal in the Lethal Lyricist League
even with a couple *lol* lines, the rest of ur shit is too weak n' lame
so if untold ever makes a *DEAD* line.. the outcome will still be the same
your punches never connect, as a text battler ur such a bore
shit, the only time my verse is an understatement is if I drop it after one of yours
he's got no sense of cleverness, while his ideas are dull n' old
plus his punches & style only mesh, cuz they're both full of holes
ur bitch was due for some remodeling, that's why she ain't respond
shit, the only reason you got this far is cuz ur girl was in Bed and Bath with Beyond
vs
toke, the hoes hate ya, n they won't date ya. so its harder to win
we watch each dame dash so quick, jay-z'll consider him for a partner again
now listen fam. im a business man. n this battle, you lost it.
so intern.. u can answer my calls n take notes when im out of my office
enough of the childish shit. ya crews wild n sick. i get nauseous
monsters inc? ok i got it.. cuz u n arch like to hang out in little kids closets
plus ya chick, be runnin her mouth to a bunch of pricks
now she has a blue tooth, since she wasnt bayou when she sucked his dick
good battle here, but I think it's fairly one sided, Token was way more consistent and had more quotables i got him winning this.. good shit tho untold and props for showing up with ur busy schedule
V-Token
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the predictions have made it clear, the winner's no doubt slaying
so if the season champ's untold.. it's only because it goes without sayin
ok
i'm going casey anthony on this kid, you ain't a winner dude
this is such a blatant case of murder, i just got offered a mill for my first interview
decent
this faggot could never get a date to show, i dont mean to look like a snitch
but now I know how Untold feels.. Friday was the first time i've ever been stood up by a bitch
lol... good
this queer needs some tips, there's no point in prolonging this battle further
cuz when it comes to being quick to dish beef this bitch mimics rapbattle's server
ok-ish
join the SAP and get shook g, I bet you got the looks of a rookie
shit, nobody even has to see U-N-T, to know you got the traits of a pussy
cool
reading 5 bars from you is bad enough, voters r gonna be pissed n' bummed
so if ur verse causes a change of heart.. it'll be arch editing the line limit minimum
meh
honestly, kid's had a couple haymakers, but not enough to be fearing this geek
watch him be the first nigga to get a 1-2 punch medal in the Lethal Lyricist League
eh... ok-ish
even with a couple *lol* lines, the rest of ur shit is too weak n' lame
so if untold ever makes a *DEAD* line.. the outcome will still be the same
ok, kinda played
what made u so cocky bitch? there's no reason for such a confidence
cuz when I say you're a master at executing concepts.. it's not a fuckin compliment
lmao! good
your punches never connect, as a text battler ur such a bore
shit, the only time my verse is an understatement is if I drop it after one of yours
cool
bitch you couldn't even top my worst, so this is me schoolin you modest
cuz sometimes the truths better untold.. & i'm just being brutally honest
nice
he's got no sense of cleverness, while his ideas are dull n' old
plus his punches & style only mesh, cuz they're both full of holes
ehhhh
ur bitch was due for some remodeling, that's why she ain't respond
shit, the only reason you got this far is cuz ur girl was in Bed and Bath with Beyond
BAM! LMFAO... good hit!
ur nervous and it shows, quit being timid n' act wreckless
cuz you should've never been scared in the first place..
..knowing you wouldn't make it past second
cool flip
go ahead n' post..
ur verses never entertain, so ur still getting crushed in the chest
i mean, the reason this thread was never cleaned.. is cuz philly's post still sums it up best
ok closer
vs.
check the nines. when it comes to guns, u cant mess wit mines
so for a season recap, i'll double up n bust a cap in ya ass a second time
ehhh,... ok-ish
i don't think when i drink! so for a safer bet, i'll take the steps
but i'll be the designated driver.. responsible for another alcohol related death
not feelin, tbh
i stay wit sluts! wit toke's girl 'round the clock to say enough
if u count-her clockwise, u cant keep up wit how many times a day we fuck
lol... good
toke, the hoes hate ya, n they won't date ya. so its harder to win
we watch each dame dash so quick, jay-z'll consider him for a partner again
cool
while goin through ur history, its no mystery that ur in denile
last good page toke had, there were no cell phones n beepers were in style
ok
i murder while its a bet toke ain't a threat. ull get beat easy hoe
but ur a predator in the league.. that has yet to be caught on the t.v. show
rofl... nice!
now listen fam. im a business man. n this battle, you lost it.
so intern.. u can answer my calls n take notes when im out of my office
I see the wordplay, but the cockiness didn't come off right...
tokes a bad example. now the fag gets trampled n thrown in a ditch
dawg, ur such a Bad Teacher.. a bitch was casted to play ur roll in the flick
Damn!!! I liked this
tokes weak wit rap, so keep ya tracks cuz u wont leak a gem
ur music speaks volumes.. that even deaf people wish wouldnt speak to them
cool
enough of the childish shit. ya crews wild n sick. i get nauseous
monsters inc? ok i got it.. cuz u n arch like to hang out in little kids closets
decent
ya hoe know i like some dome. n the league know shes likes to bone
cuz her headset.. well in my crotch while she spoke into my microphone
ok... but not harsh
plus ya chick, be runnin her mouth to a bunch of pricks
now she has a blue tooth, since she wasnt bayou when she sucked his dick
lmao! nice
its time that this fag dies. we knoe he should'a lost last time
cuz even god's Grace.. could fuck ur ass up if u her got in a cat fight
decent
its cool that we dropped alot. now this coward wont beef wit me
cuz face it, twenty-eight ur verse.. but i drop'd the rest to devour u easily
seemed forced, imo...
toke, should take a shot cuz i know this bitch is hurtin
fight? nah! u only TAAKA lot'a shit cuz the vodka gives u liquid courage
ok-ish...
Pretty nice battle, actually! Both had some good lines and some ehhhh, ones too!
I got Toke winning in quoteables, 7-6 tbh... and both were about even as far as consistent with decent hits. With that being said, Toke gets my vote by a cunt hair...
vote- Token
the predictions have made it clear, the winner's no doubt slaying
so if the season champ's untold.. it's only because it goes without sayin
(nice hit)
i'm going casey anthony on this kid, you ain't a winner dude
this is such a blatant case of murder, i just got offered a mill for my first interview
(okay, wording made it hit)
this faggot could never get a date to show, i dont mean to look like a snitch
but now I know how Untold feels.. Friday was the first time i've ever been stood up by a bitch
(haha gd)
this queer needs some tips, there's no point in prolonging this battle further
cuz when it comes to being quick to dish beef this bitch mimics rapbattle's server
(nah not feeling it)
join the SAP and get shook g, I bet you got the looks of a rookie
shit, nobody even has to see U-N-T, to know you got the traits of a pussy
(not feeling)
reading 5 bars from you is bad enough, voters r gonna be pissed n' bummed
so if ur verse causes a change of heart.. it'll be arch editing the line limit minimum
(not too hot)
honestly, kid's had a couple haymakers, but not enough to be fearing this geek
watch him be the first nigga to get a 1-2 punch medal in the Lethal Lyricist League
(too statementish, funny tho)
even with a couple *lol* lines, the rest of ur shit is too weak n' lame
so if untold ever makes a *DEAD* line.. the outcome will still be the same
(this is cool to me)
what made u so cocky bitch? there's no reason for such a confidence
cuz when I say you're a master at executing concepts.. it's not a fuckin compliment
(played line)
your punches never connect, as a text battler ur such a bore
shit, the only time my verse is an understatement is if I drop it after one of yours
(very played)
bitch you couldn't even top my worst, so this is me schoolin you modest
cuz sometimes the truths better untold.. & i'm just being brutally honest
(nice nameflip)
he's got no sense of cleverness, while his ideas are dull n' old
plus his punches & style only mesh, cuz they're both full of holes
(haha this was dope)
ur bitch was due for some remodeling, that's why she ain't respond
shit, the only reason you got this far is cuz ur girl was in Bed and Bath with Beyond
(its been done)
ur nervous and it shows, quit being timid n' act wreckless
cuz you should've never been scared in the first place..
..knowing you wouldn't make it past second
(ok misd)
go ahead n' post..
ur verses never entertain, so ur still getting crushed in the chest
i mean, the reason this thread was never cleaned.. is cuz philly's post still sums it up best
(filler closer)
vs.
check the nines. when it comes to guns, u cant mess wit mines
so for a season recap, i'll double up n bust a cap in ya ass a second time
(slick but not slick enuff. okish)
i don't think when i drink! so for a safer bet, i'll take the steps
but i'll be the designated driver.. responsible for another alcohol related death
(not feeling)
i stay wit sluts! wit toke's girl 'round the clock to say enough
if u count-her clockwise, u cant keep up wit how many times a day we fuck
(haha good)
toke, the hoes hate ya, n they won't date ya. so its harder to win
we watch each dame dash so quick, jay-z'll consider him for a partner again
( cool, coulda tied it up better)
while goin through ur history, its no mystery that ur in denile
last good page toke had, there were no cell phones n beepers were in style
(haha cool)
i murder while its a bet toke ain't a threat. ull get beat easy hoe
but ur a predator in the league.. that has yet to be caught on the t.v. show
(nah too obvious)
now listen fam. im a business man. n this battle, you lost it.
so intern.. u can answer my calls n take notes when im out of my office
(haha sick)
tokes a bad example. now the fag gets trampled n thrown in a ditch
dawg, ur such a Bad Teacher.. a bitch was casted to play ur roll in the flick
(seen bt flips this was ok)
tokes weak wit rap, so keep ya tracks cuz u wont leak a gem
ur music speaks volumes.. that even deaf people wish wouldnt speak to them
(played)
enough of the childish shit. ya crews wild n sick. i get nauseous
monsters inc? ok i got it.. cuz u n arch like to hang out in little kids closets
(prob been done but i havent see it so cool)
ya hoe know i like some dome. n the league know shes likes to bone
cuz her headset.. well in my crotch while she spoke into my microphone
(lol funny)
plus ya chick, be runnin her mouth to a bunch of pricks
now she has a blue tooth, since she wasnt bayou when she sucked his dick
(ok cool)
its time that this fag dies. we knoe he should'a lost last time
cuz even god's Grace.. could fuck ur ass up if u her got in a cat fight
(dont getit)
its cool that we dropped alot. now this coward wont beef wit me
cuz face it, twenty-eight ur verse.. but i drop'd the rest to devour u easily
(not feeling)
toke, should take a shot cuz i know this bitch is hurtin
fight? nah! u only TAAKA lot'a shit cuz the vodka gives u liquid courage
(cool ender)
gd battle, both brought some real nice stuff
i got untold being a little more consistent tho
gud shit
v untold
LOL
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm. GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD Battle right here. This is what I like to see. If only we could have seen this in the Tourney, but GoW had to go fuck it up for everyone. Anyways, break downs.
Token:
the predictions have made it clear, the winner's no doubt slaying
so if the season champ's untold.. it's only because it goes without sayin
Digging the opener. You came in strong.
join the SAP and get shook g, I bet you got the looks of a rookie
shit, nobody even has to see U-N-T, to know you got the traits of a pussy
LMFAO. GREAT Nameplay here. And this was totally original. Hard to do that nowadays
honestly, kid's had a couple haymakers, but not enough to be fearing this geek
watch him be the first nigga to get a 1-2 punch medal in the Lethal Lyricist League
ROFL. LMAO. This was one of my favs for sure!
even with a couple *lol* lines, the rest of ur shit is too weak n' lame
so if untold ever makes a *DEAD* line.. the outcome will still be the same
This was prob one of the corniest lines, but it actually made me LOL. I think this connected well for it being as plain as it is. LMAO
what made u so cocky bitch? there's no reason for such a confidence
cuz when I say you're a master at executing concepts.. it's not a fuckin compliment
LoL, I dug this one too.
bitch you couldn't even top my worst, so this is me schoolin you modest
cuz sometimes the truths better untold.. & i'm just being brutally honest
Sort of predictable, but I think it connected well!
e's got no sense of cleverness, while his ideas are dull n' old
plus his punches & style only mesh, cuz they're both full of holes
Lol, makes me think of my popper stopper for my mic.
ur bitch was due for some remodeling, that's why she ain't respond
shit, the only reason you got this far is cuz ur girl was in Bed and Bath with Beyond
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
ur nervous and it shows, quit being timid n' act wreckless
cuz you should've never been scared in the first place..
..knowing you wouldn't make it past second
I think Token should have ended on this note, but that's My opinion. This was a fucking ROFL ass dope line!
Untold:
i don't think when i drink! so for a safer bet, i'll take the steps
but i'll be the designated driver.. responsible for another alcohol related death
LMAO. Me likey. Thought this was pretty cool
i stay wit sluts! wit toke's girl 'round the clock to say enough
if u count-her clockwise, u cant keep up wit how many times a day we fuck
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOO. I love this line!
now listen fam. im a business man. n this battle, you lost it.
so intern.. u can answer my calls n take notes when im out of my office
This was kind of funny, even though I feel it was executed poorly.
enough of the childish shit. ya crews wild n sick. i get nauseous
monsters inc? ok i got it.. cuz u n arch like to hang out in little kids closets
ya hoe know i like some dome. n the league know shes likes to bone
cuz her headset.. well in my crotch while she spoke into my microphone
Lol. Good stretch here.
----- Other than that for Untold, I really Feel like the girlfriend lines hurt you man. I just felt there were too many. The 1st one was the best, and you should have left it at that.
With that being said, it's clearly an easy win to me. I feel that Token executed his concepts much better, and his wordplay and punches were a lot stronger than Untold's. Great Battle Gents!!!
V/ Token
the predictions have made it clear, the winner's no doubt slaying
so if the season champ's untold.. it's only because it goes without sayin
aight
i'm going casey anthony on this kid, you ain't a winner dude
this is such a blatant case of murder, i just got offered a mill for my first interview
aight
this faggot could never get a date to show, i dont mean to look like a snitch
but now I know how Untold feels.. Friday was the first time i've ever been stood up by a bitch
nice hit
this queer needs some tips, there's no point in prolonging this battle further
cuz when it comes to being quick to dish beef this bitch mimics rapbattle's server
aight
join the SAP and get shook g, I bet you got the looks of a rookie
shit, nobody even has to see U-N-T, to know you got the traits of a pussy
LOL
reading 5 bars from you is bad enough, voters r gonna be pissed n' bummed
so if ur verse causes a change of heart.. it'll be arch editing the line limit minimum
meeehhhh
honestly, kid's had a couple haymakers, but not enough to be fearing this geek
watch him be the first nigga to get a 1-2 punch medal in the Lethal Lyricist League
LOL
even with a couple *lol* lines, the rest of ur shit is too weak n' lame
so if untold ever makes a *DEAD* line.. the outcome will still be the same
nahhhhhh
what made u so cocky bitch? there's no reason for such a confidence
cuz when I say you're a master at executing concepts.. it's not a fuckin compliment
played
your punches never connect, as a text battler ur such a bore
shit, the only time my verse is an understatement is if I drop it after one of yours
played
bitch you couldn't even top my worst, so this is me schoolin you modest
cuz sometimes the truths better untold.. & i'm just being brutally honest
nice
he's got no sense of cleverness, while his ideas are dull n' old
plus his punches & style only mesh, cuz they're both full of holes
aight
ur bitch was due for some remodeling, that's why she ain't respond
shit, the only reason you got this far is cuz ur girl was in Bed and Bath with Beyond
nice
ur nervous and it shows, quit being timid n' act wreckless
cuz you should've never been scared in the first place..
..knowing you wouldn't make it past second
nice
ur verses never entertain, so ur still getting crushed in the chest
i mean, the reason this thread was never cleaned.. is cuz philly's post still sums it up best
alright
vs
check the nines. when it comes to guns, u cant mess wit mines
so for a season recap, i'll double up n bust a cap in ya ass a second time
not feeling
i don't think when i drink! so for a safer bet, i'll take the steps
but i'll be the designated driver.. responsible for another alcohol related death
aight
i stay wit sluts! wit toke's girl 'round the clock to say enough
if u count-her clockwise, u cant keep up wit how many times a day we fuck
aight
toke, the hoes hate ya, n they won't date ya. so its harder to win
we watch each dame dash so quick, jay-z'll consider him for a partner again
played
while goin through ur history, its no mystery that ur in denile
last good page toke had, there were no cell phones n beepers were in style
haha
i murder while its a bet toke ain't a threat. ull get beat easy hoe
but ur a predator in the league.. that has yet to be caught on the t.v. show
not feeling
now listen fam. im a business man. n this battle, you lost it.
so intern.. u can answer my calls n take notes when im out of my office
nice
tokes a bad example. now the fag gets trampled n thrown in a ditch
dawg, ur such a Bad Teacher.. a bitch was casted to play ur roll in the flick
been used alot recently
tokes weak wit rap, so keep ya tracks cuz u wont leak a gem
ur music speaks volumes.. that even deaf people wish wouldnt speak to them
played
enough of the childish shit. ya crews wild n sick. i get nauseous
monsters inc? ok i got it.. cuz u n arch like to hang out in little kids closets
LOL, but played crew punch
ya hoe know i like some dome. n the league know shes likes to bone
cuz her headset.. well in my crotch while she spoke into my microphone
played w/p
plus ya chick, be runnin her mouth to a bunch of pricks
now she has a blue tooth, since she wasnt bayou when she sucked his dick
alright
its time that this fag dies. we knoe he should'a lost last time
cuz even god's Grace.. could fuck ur ass up if u her got in a cat fight
not feeling
its cool that we dropped alot. now this coward wont beef wit me
cuz face it, twenty-eight ur verse.. but i drop'd the rest to devour u easily
not feeling
toke, should take a shot cuz i know this bitch is hurtin
fight? nah! u only TAAKA lot'a shit cuz the vodka gives u liquid courage
alright
Real cool battle a lot of consistency which you don't see much now-a-days with that said I felt Toke had the better punches and his lines stood out to me the most.
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ahem..
the predictions have made it clear, the winner's no doubt slaying
so if the season champ's untold.. it's only because it goes without sayin
nice
i'm going casey anthony on this kid, you ain't a winner dude
this is such a blatant case of murder, i just got offered a mill for my first interview
ok
this faggot could never get a date to show, i dont mean to look like a snitch
but now I know how Untold feels.. Friday was the first time i've ever been stood up by a bitch
ive seent his alot tbh
this queer needs some tips, there's no point in prolonging this battle further
cuz when it comes to being quick to dish beef this bitch mimics rapbattle's server
yeah im not really feeling this
join the SAP and get shook g, I bet you got the looks of a rookie
shit, nobody even has to see U-N-T, to know you got the traits of a pussy
naw
reading 5 bars from you is bad enough, voters r gonna be pissed n' bummed
so if ur verse causes a change of heart.. it'll be arch editing the line limit minimum
ok
honestly, kid's had a couple haymakers, but not enough to be fearing this geek
watch him be the first nigga to get a 1-2 punch medal in the Lethal Lyricist League
ur punches come off as statement to me man this was really statementish
even with a couple *lol* lines, the rest of ur shit is too weak n' lame
so if untold ever makes a *DEAD* line.. the outcome will still be the same
[b]seen ALOT of "dead" punches. i even used one a year or two ago
what made u so cocky bitch? there's no reason for such a confidence
cuz when I say you're a master at executing concepts.. it's not a fuckin compliment
ok
your punches never connect, as a text battler ur such a bore
shit, the only time my verse is an understatement is if I drop it after one of yours
understatement is done, and it kind of backfires because ur wording makes alot of your punches seem statementish so its like ur dissing ur style aswell
bitch you couldn't even top my worst, so this is me schoolin you modest
cuz sometimes the truths better untold.. & i'm just being brutally honest
[b]ok[/b[
he's got no sense of cleverness, while his ideas are dull n' old
plus his punches & style only mesh, cuz they're both full of holes
ok
ur bitch was due for some remodeling, that's why she ain't respond
shit, the only reason you got this far is cuz ur girl was in Bed and Bath with Beyond
noooo dont ever use a beyond punch rofl
ur nervous and it shows, quit being timid n' act wreckless
cuz you should've never been scared in the first place..
..knowing you wouldn't make it past second
a basemall reference?cool
go ahead n' post..
ur verses never entertain, so ur still getting crushed in the chest
i mean, the reason this thread was never cleaned.. is cuz philly's post still sums it up best
this could of been snipped of my dude
vs
check the nines. when it comes to guns, u cant mess wit mines
so for a season recap, i'll double up n bust a cap in ya ass a second time
no
i don't think when i drink! so for a safer bet, i'll take the steps
but i'll be the designated driver.. responsible for another alcohol related death
this was fire i thought
i stay wit sluts! wit toke's girl 'round the clock to say enough
if u count-her clockwise, u cant keep up wit how many times a day we fuck
this was cool
toke, the hoes hate ya, n they won't date ya. so its harder to win
we watch each dame dash so quick, jay-z'll consider him for a partner again
dope idea oly ok execution so this is jus borderline good to me
while goin through ur history, its no mystery that ur in denile
last good page toke had, there were no cell phones n beepers were in style
[b]this was wierd my dude{/b]
i murder while its a bet toke ain't a threat. ull get beat easy hoe
but ur a predator in the league.. that has yet to be caught on the t.v. show
naw way to simple man seen a hundred of this
now listen fam. im a business man. n this battle, you lost it.
so intern.. u can answer my calls n take notes when im out of my office
this was cool
tokes a bad example. now the fag gets trampled n thrown in a ditch
dawg, ur such a Bad Teacher.. a bitch was casted to play ur roll in the flick
naw man could of done better wit this
tokes weak wit rap, so keep ya tracks cuz u wont leak a gem
ur music speaks volumes.. that even deaf people wish wouldnt speak to them
ok
enough of the childish shit. ya crews wild n sick. i get nauseous
monsters inc? ok i got it.. cuz u n arch like to hang out in little kids closets
monsters ink punches is done to death my g
ya hoe know i like some dome. n the league know shes likes to bone
cuz her headset.. well in my crotch while she spoke into my microphone
this was nice
plus ya chick, be runnin her mouth to a bunch of pricks
now she has a blue tooth, since she wasnt bayou when she sucked his dick
this is cool
its time that this fag dies. we knoe he should'a lost last time
cuz even god's Grace.. could fuck ur ass up if u her got in a cat fight
i didnt get this at all homey
its cool that we dropped alot. now this coward wont beef wit me
cuz face it, twenty-eight ur verse.. but i drop'd the rest to devour u easily
this was cool 20 ate ur verse was fire to me
toke, should take a shot cuz i know this bitch is hurtin
fight? nah! u only TAAKA lot'a shit cuz the vodka gives u liquid courage
no
ok man this is wierd i thought untold was gon get jerked here for admin riding n i was all ready to vote on the real winner here but i think token edged it , i read the verses like 5 times n i just dont see i know token has statements but untold u brung forced wordplay which killed me. u seemed to of rushed the shit out of this verse n i give u mad respect n props for dropping but yo atleast u made it to the finals my dude. i got token with the edge here after readin it over and over
v/token
edit i also thought token had consistency cuz his statementpunches did hit some what and untold had bigggg misses esp wit the shit loe the gods grace punch
Vs
Overall thus battle was close but tokes verse was too consistent. He wins
V token
the predictions have made it clear, the winner's no doubt slaying
so if the season champ's untold.. it's only because it goes without sayin
coo
i'm going casey anthony on this kid, you ain't a winner dude
this is such a blatant case of murder, i just got offered a mill for my first interview
iight
this faggot could never get a date to show, i dont mean to look like a snitch
but now I know how Untold feels.. Friday was the first time i've ever been stood up by a bitch
not fresh enuff flip.. same tbh
this queer needs some tips, there's no point in prolonging this battle further
cuz when it comes to being quick to dish beef this bitch mimics rapbattle's server
ehhh
join the SAP and get shook g, I bet you got the looks of a rookie
shit, nobody even has to see U-N-T, to know you got the traits of a pussy
funny
reading 5 bars from you is bad enough, voters r gonna be pissed n' bummed
so if ur verse causes a change of heart.. it'll be arch editing the line limit minimum
ok/funny
honestly, kid's had a couple haymakers, but not enough to be fearing this geek
watch him be the first nigga to get a 1-2 punch medal in the Lethal Lyricist League
iight/meh
even with a couple *lol* lines, the rest of ur shit is too weak n' lame
so if untold ever makes a *DEAD* line.. the outcome will still be the same
ehh, used a deadline punch years ago against feeble
what made u so cocky bitch? there's no reason for such a confidence
cuz when I say you're a master at executing concepts.. it's not a fuckin compliment
coo
your punches never connect, as a text battler ur such a bore
shit, the only time my verse is an understatement is if I drop it after one of yours
mehish
bitch you couldn't even top my worst, so this is me schoolin you modest
cuz sometimes the truths better untold.. & i'm just being brutally honest
[b]iight[/b[
he's got no sense of cleverness, while his ideas are dull n' old
plus his punches & style only mesh, cuz they're both full of holes
ok
ur bitch was due for some remodeling, that's why she ain't respond
shit, the only reason you got this far is cuz ur girl was in Bed and Bath with Beyond
funny
ur nervous and it shows, quit being timid n' act wreckless
cuz you should've never been scared in the first place..
..knowing you wouldn't make it past second
ehh, used a punch like this against hens a few years back
go ahead n' post..
ur verses never entertain, so ur still getting crushed in the chest
i mean, the reason this thread was never cleaned.. is cuz philly's post still sums it up best
coulda left this out
vs
check the nines. when it comes to guns, u cant mess wit mines
so for a season recap, i'll double up n bust a cap in ya ass a second time
nah
i don't think when i drink! so for a safer bet, i'll take the steps
but i'll be the designated driver.. responsible for another alcohol related death
ha, cool
i stay wit sluts! wit toke's girl 'round the clock to say enough
if u count-her clockwise, u cant keep up wit how many times a day we fuck
coo
toke, the hoes hate ya, n they won't date ya. so its harder to win
we watch each dame dash so quick, jay-z'll consider him for a partner again
meh, been using dame dash punches in audio b4 i even started texting
while goin through ur history, its no mystery that ur in denile
last good page toke had, there were no cell phones n beepers were in style
[b]meh{/b]
i murder while its a bet toke ain't a threat. ull get beat easy hoe
but ur a predator in the league.. that has yet to be caught on the t.v. show
meh
now listen fam. im a business man. n this battle, you lost it.
so intern.. u can answer my calls n take notes when im out of my office
nice
tokes a bad example. now the fag gets trampled n thrown in a ditch
dawg, ur such a Bad Teacher.. a bitch was casted to play ur roll in the flick
meh/iight
tokes weak wit rap, so keep ya tracks cuz u wont leak a gem
ur music speaks volumes.. that even deaf people wish wouldnt speak to them
ok
enough of the childish shit. ya crews wild n sick. i get nauseous
monsters inc? ok i got it.. cuz u n arch like to hang out in little kids closets
might not not M.I isnt new.. these punches are played to death
ya hoe know i like some dome. n the league know shes likes to bone
cuz her headset.. well in my crotch while she spoke into my microphone
nice
plus ya chick, be runnin her mouth to a bunch of pricks
now she has a blue tooth, since she wasnt bayou when she sucked his dick
coo
its time that this fag dies. we knoe he should'a lost last time
cuz even god's Grace.. could fuck ur ass up if u her got in a cat fight
huh
its cool that we dropped alot. now this coward wont beef wit me
cuz face it, twenty-eight ur verse.. but i drop'd the rest to devour u easily
coo
toke, should take a shot cuz i know this bitch is hurtin
fight? nah! u only TAAKA lot'a shit cuz the vodka gives u liquid courage
nah
THIS BATTLE WAS PRETTY GOOD... ONLY DIFF TBH WAS UNTOLD MISSES.. ON THAT NOTE
V/TOKEN.. GLAD U SHOWED UNT
the predictions have made it clear, the winner's no doubt slaying
so if the season champ's untold.. it's only because it goes without sayin
Alright, decent
i'm going casey anthony on this kid, you ain't a winner dude
this is such a blatant case of murder, i just got offered a mill for my first interview
Nah I've personally used a casey anthony line the other day. so meh at best
this faggot could never get a date to show, i dont mean to look like a snitch
but now I know how Untold feels.. Friday was the first time i've ever been stood up by a bitch
wasn't feeling
this queer needs some tips, there's no point in prolonging this battle further
cuz when it comes to being quick to dish beef this bitch mimics rapbattle's server
blah, miss
join the SAP and get shook g, I bet you got the looks of a rookie
shit, nobody even has to see U-N-T, to know you got the traits of a pussy
Okay, good
reading 5 bars from you is bad enough, voters r gonna be pissed n' bummed
so if ur verse causes a change of heart.. it'll be arch editing the line limit minimum
Lol, decent
honestly, kid's had a couple haymakers, but not enough to be fearing this geek
watch him be the first nigga to get a 1-2 punch medal in the Lethal Lyricist League
Ha, ok
even with a couple *lol* lines, the rest of ur shit is too weak n' lame
so if untold ever makes a *DEAD* line.. the outcome will still be the same
Seen this before, too lazy to grab links
what made u so cocky bitch? there's no reason for such a confidence
cuz when I say you're a master at executing concepts.. it's not a fuckin compliment
NICE
your punches never connect, as a text battler ur such a bore
shit, the only time my verse is an understatement is if I drop it after one of yours
Meh, decent at best
bitch you couldn't even top my worst, so this is me schoolin you modest
cuz sometimes the truths better untold.. & i'm just being brutally honest
Pretty good
he's got no sense of cleverness, while his ideas are dull n' old
plus his punches & style only mesh, cuz they're both full of holes
Decent
ur bitch was due for some remodeling, that's why she ain't respond
shit, the only reason you got this far is cuz ur girl was in Bed and Bath with Beyond
LMFAO omg dope
ur nervous and it shows, quit being timid n' act wreckless
cuz you should've never been scared in the first place..
..knowing you wouldn't make it past second
Alright
go ahead n' post..
ur verses never entertain, so ur still getting crushed in the chest
i mean, the reason this thread was never cleaned.. is cuz philly's post still sums it up best
Could have been better, not feelin this
vs
check the nines. when it comes to guns, u cant mess wit mines
so for a season recap, i'll double up n bust a cap in ya ass a second time
Meh at best
i don't think when i drink! so for a safer bet, i'll take the steps
but i'll be the designated driver.. responsible for another alcohol related death
Good
i stay wit sluts! wit toke's girl 'round the clock to say enough
if u count-her clockwise, u cant keep up wit how many times a day we fuck
Alright
toke, the hoes hate ya, n they won't date ya. so its harder to win
we watch each dame dash so quick, jay-z'll consider him for a partner again
Ok, decent
while goin through ur history, its no mystery that ur in denile
last good page toke had, there were no cell phones n beepers were in style
Nah, filler
i murder while its a bet toke ain't a threat. ull get beat easy hoe
but ur a predator in the league.. that has yet to be caught on the t.v. show
Eh, ok
now listen fam. im a business man. n this battle, you lost it.
so intern.. u can answer my calls n take notes when im out of my office
Dope, I liked this.
tokes a bad example. now the fag gets trampled n thrown in a ditch
dawg, ur such a Bad Teacher.. a bitch was casted to play ur roll in the flick
Wasn't feelin this
tokes weak wit rap, so keep ya tracks cuz u wont leak a gem
ur music speaks volumes.. that even deaf people wish wouldnt speak to them
Alright, decent
enough of the childish shit. ya crews wild n sick. i get nauseous
monsters inc? ok i got it.. cuz u n arch like to hang out in little kids closets
So played
ya hoe know i like some dome. n the league know shes likes to bone
cuz her headset.. well in my crotch while she spoke into my microphone
Decent
plus ya chick, be runnin her mouth to a bunch of pricks
now she has a blue tooth, since she wasnt bayou when she sucked his dick
Bayou wp is played, meh
its time that this fag dies. we knoe he should'a lost last time
cuz even god's Grace.. could fuck ur ass up if u her got in a cat fight
meh
its cool that we dropped alot. now this coward wont beef wit me
cuz face it, twenty-eight ur verse.. but i drop'd the rest to devour u easily
Nice
toke, should take a shot cuz i know this bitch is hurtin
fight? nah! u only TAAKA lot'a shit cuz the vodka gives u liquid courage
nah
Token: 9 bars I liked
vs
untold: 7 bars I liked
Vote: Token, pretty good match.
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