Absolutely wackness
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Wackness
Definitely the wackest battle I've ever seen. High And Drunk, not one of your setups were relevant to your attempted punches and your structure is one of the worst I've seen. Manny Play, your setups weren't relevant to your attempted punches either and you came with a lotta played concepts. But you at least had some half decent attempts at punches.
Vote: Manny Play
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word, thx for ur opinion, yo
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Put Your Money Where Your Mouth Iz
Arent this dude and the first dude who voted on our battle the same guy... ?
haha...
u tell me. i only pop in here once in a while...
if so, im down with vetoing both his votes...
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Put Your Money Where Your Mouth Iz
No, you guys are fuckin' idiots.
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vote = high n drunk
and yes manny the fastener line was your best...the others we're just ok...
high had a better style and flow, more attemped multi's and just better punches overall
im not a fan of his "bolding the obvious" but w/e...he still got the job done
The Birth Of Creation
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Storyteller | Cr@$h | JMS | Meth | Celph Taut | Messiah | Bstill | Fatal
No, I read his thread wrong, lol.
Good battle man. Upping someone to close this, I'll take the L.
good battle, yo...
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H N D
.. Man's bitch! Forget him! He left every battle with his pants pissed! The lesson?
.. Manny's an A/V Tech Geek but cant fix his textin'!
nice lol good multi usage
.. Just die, fool! It's gettin' gory: You mention cash in your sig, so I'm hyped, dude.. and predatory!
.. But the truth is: Play's an exaggeration like high school gym stories!
nice punch and metaphore
.. Check Manny's name? You best don't do him - My little keystyle's got a deft solution:
.. I'll give Play a little rope, then ace the execution!
nice
.. He's the #1 textcee on a site with Tard Decorum!
.. Shit.. When I saw Play's the King Of That Dumpster, I almost felt sorry FOR-UM!
nah good personal but not feeling wordplay
.. He's just BAD, folks! Like the Christian Religion... or Bevis' fat jokes!
.. Shit, give me one more flick of the wrist..
.. And I'll put Play in the Afterlife screaming, "JESUS! MY ASSHOLE!"
lmao
Manny
spits like 2-ply, ur posts are thin, u might as well not even try to close the win
but when i spit this at him, ima split his atoms - cuz he "hy" off "dro" & "gen"
not feeling this wordplay no hate
his drop's mundane, mock his name, the pot i blame for his cocky claims
& just stop the blame, ur skill dont fit the bill - u still just pocket change
nice also good multis
near-cryin, queer-eyein, sears buyin, fear's climbin but u lack height
i'ma expose ur "shortcummings" - & i dont even need a black light
not good multi usage here but nice concept second line
hip hop's like an amtrack train, lame. high & dry aint no passenger
his last girl called him "Buckles" - cuz he always came so "fast-en-er"
i thought this was funny and creative
on ur knees in this fight how P's impedin ur height, i be the reason he's tyke
but ur just feedin the hype & bleedin tonight. cuz u the cheapest of types...
like expedia flights
stretched woulda been ill if it was less wordred
MVGT: High and Drunk
Overall just thought he had the better punches and concepts. Manny did good but his stretched multi structure threw off his sting when it came to his punches.
high and drunk
Man's bitch! Forget him! He left every battle with his pants pissed! The lesson?
Manny's an A/V Tech Geek but cant fix his textin'!
set ups a bit irrelvant and the textin line a lil played.
Just die, fool! It's gettin' gory: You mention cash in your sig, so I'm hyped, dude.. and predatory!
But the truth is: Play's an exaggeration like high school gym stories!
again played, and metaphore was delivered a bit simple
Check Manny's name? You best don't do him - My little keystyle's got a deft solution:
I'll give Play a little rope, then ace the execution!
the multies stood out more than the punch, u focused more on a more complexed flow than the real set up connect. the jab itself landed its just weak to be honest
He's the #1 textcee on a site with Tard Decorum!
Shit.. When I saw Play's the King Of That Dumpster, I almost felt sorry FOR-UM!
wp attempt felt a bit forced and didnt fit in well with the bar cause it was just stretched...
He's just BAD, folks! Like the Christian Religion... or Bevis' fat jokes!
Shit, give me one more flick of the wrist..
And I'll put Play in the Afterlife screaming, "JESUS! MY ASSHOLE!"
nah, didnt like this one. i didnt feel a hit at all on the attempt
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manny play
spits like 2-ply, ur posts are thin, u might as well not even try to close the win
but when i spit this at him, ima split his atoms - cuz he "hy" off "dro" & "gen"
nice use of the nameplay, solid opener
his drop's mundane, mock his name, the pot i blame for his cocky claims
& just stop the blame, ur skill dont fit the bill - u still just pocket change
too many filler multies that were useless here. plus, callin a dude pocket change after a whole bar is too weak, basically a statement really..
near-cryin, queer-eyein, sears buyin, fear's climbin but u lack height
i'ma expose ur "shortcummings" - & i dont even need a black light
set up had me like 'wtf'? all those multies again were usesless and irrelevant to the punch. way off topic. but..the punch is a bit played. especially anything "cum/cumming" incorportated wordplay.
hip hop's like an amtrack train, lame. high & dry aint no passenger
his last girl called him "Buckles" - cuz he always came so "fast-en-er"
nah, again the set up made it seem more basic plus the wp punch attempt was forced and holds no sting to it, honestly..
on ur knees in this fight how P's impedin ur height, i be the reason he's tyke
but ur just feedin the hype & bleedin tonight. cuz u the cheapest of types...
like expedia flights
filler multies with weak metaphore punch deilvery, its too played and sounds bad when you try to execute punches
verdict
thought manny took it alone with the opener due to the rest of you guys really missing the played concepts and punches. thought u guys definitely tried to come with some stingers but just couldnt deliver em with some excessive multies with poor structure.
if i seen somethin from HnD that hadn't been played or was more personal/creative in his bars a couple of times he most likely would get my vote..
but manny came with a more solid opener and surprisingly held on to the victory with that bar.
both can work on some better set up structures and practice on bringin the sting factor out of those misses u had. cut down on the filler multies which are forced in there, if its complexity make it benefit you. too many of em were hurtin your bars asides from the poor execution.
i think i know who took this..
vote-> manny play
link-> http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...193/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...001/index.html
when both of u got some time vote up on the links when ya can. peace fellas
INFEKTED PENZ
High and drunk... You have 12 hrs to post 3 links before you are DQ'd
DayumNation
High - Decent verse.. Think ur structure needs a lil help, this aint the style FL is used too.. But ur punches were cool, kinda wordy by the way u set the shit up tho
Manny - A lil more consistent, fresher punches.. EVen tho u used a cum line I liked the way u flipped it and the opener and closer landed well..
Hmm - kinda tought but Manny gets this
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