true...4-1...preciate the vote bro...
peep my shit against ya boy lost cause...or mine with vinzr
true...4-1...preciate the vote bro...
peep my shit against ya boy lost cause...or mine with vinzr
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word glad we getting some votes in here now its up to you langston if u wanna keep this open????
keep it open bro, it aint over till its over
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we can keep it open...i aint in a rush...i was getting more annoyed with lack of voting going around than tryn steal a win
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joe boston - far, FAR too simple bro. the concept has been done about a thousand times. everybody and their long time missing twin has talked about their voice not being heard by the people. and why did you explain your concept at the end when it was completely obvious lmao. never explain ya shit dude. simple as that. flow was boring. try throwing in multies and double syllable rhymes at the end. and try not using such badic wording. get a little more creative.
langston - started off solid. a couple well put together lines at the beginning of the read. but about mid way it seemed to get lazy and under developed. like you no longer cared about an impressive flow or wording. the concept is also played. i can name ten writers right now who have done a army concept at least twice. but i think you get my vote cuz those first like six lines were better worded than his entire verse.
vote lv
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