BACK AGAIN FLOW (ThaKING is Back)

[Well Versed]

ok so this beat is super dope...tellingbeatz(my homie) makes alot of dope tracks...n this one sounded alot like GROWN ASS MAN by young jeezy...so i kicked quite a few bars to it...enjoy!


IM BACK AGAIN (back again by telling beats, young jeezy?)

v1

ok im back again, with that crack again
movin packs of sand, call tha trap Pakistan
with straps in hand, this was tha war on drugs
all of my homies were crips, n went to war on bloodz

gurls workin for coke, so we got em whores on us
allday gettin fucked, pussy lookin like worn out rugs
were tha walmart store of drugs, spend less live better
we got deals on tha pills, n these are tha best ever

2-4-4's a double decker, every trappers a vector
fast like a zephyr, n were out buryin our treasure
we put it on like a sweater, jayz are tha specters
its like a chilli cook off, tha way we all got tha peppers

seein who makes it better, i keep em sealed up like a letter
n top dog in my sector, KING, so i knock em out with my scepter
yall dudes are lesser, im tha master, like shredder
bow down, but im not a rector, i just do this for pleasure

v2

i am a jester, i teach em like a lecture
what u wanna write smart, let me be ur professor
i will be ur assessor, n tha transgressor
n if u are lucky mayb oneday u will be my successor

ill make u more than just clever, stronger than ever
holdin down this rap shit, like a white oppressor
bring out tha aggressor, ur work i will lessor
cuz i own u n everything u do like a possessor

i mean i pwn, like a gamer, cuz i got more skill
n i spend more hours, writin more lines, n thats for real
ok, they say im basic, but yet, im so complex
just cuz it sounds doper on a track, then it does on text

kill any writer, so whos next?, i got better concepts
thatll crush any vets, who they they fuckin with tha best
im different than tha rest, cuz im not down with a rappers
im chillin often dealin, while im pillin, with tha trappers

v3

i cant hear haters over my laughter, im who everone is after
im vicious, livin in trapassic park, cuz imma spartatraptor
victory or death, no latter, white rapper no asher
eyes so azure, yeah its a game, but fear is no factor

imma X trapper, it lives within me, i cant hide it
so me not rappin bout my life, nah i cant abide it
i know u get excited, like a chick whos bout to ride it
everytime u hear me light it, n bout how u see me write it

critics like ur sick with it, but ur shit lack punches
i keep em wrapped like crack, ready to feed these kids like sack lunches
n lines i stack bunches, candy bars, like crack crunches
no handicap, just hand me rap, n ill il make em bow like back hunches

these other writers, n rappers, still tellin me i suck
when i got money comin in every month, n many bitches to fuck
n i wud call em haters, hypocrites, mayb their just insecure
cuz i rap, better tha lame shit, that u got off in ur signature

v4

ull blog, flame, n tweet, but u wont meet me in tha street
i got 2 forwards one point guard, n me, call us tha heat
were tha final four, n we'll die for what were fightin for
this is way past words, so punk, what u hidin for?

oh u think u can talk shit, bout my work,
but i cant talk none bout yours?
u trippin like when, a chick is, on X, standin on wet floors
ur yearly income i net yours, inside of a month
ur gurly i can get her, anytime that i want

i disrespect yours, this is ur passion, then prove it
i dont gotta add nothing, i just heat it up n brew it
crack in a glass pot n skilet, HARD crack rock muzik
thats my favorite metaphor, im not slowin it down, but i do screw it

im fly like a witches broomstick, work magic, n write greatness
i tie everything into this, real, fiction, bitch, im timeless n ageless
n famous, like mages, or knights who to love to fight n are courageous
my word is my sword, n my metaphors, are my aegis

v5

so if u wanna go to war, u better come with it boy, n not with tha gayness
of these, lame kids, my voice is kinda, high, but im proud to be Baseless
im like caster troy, ill give u a facelift, if u hate this
im evil mixed with good, toss in some crack, n get a taste bitch

i swing around maces, to leave ya faceless, this is my place bitch
welcome to my castle, im KING, im not who u wanna play with
see im that mean kid, on tha block, my shots are aimless
so i hit random ppl, i didnt mean too, right in their faces

yes i am shameless, cut thru competition like a stainless
blade in they leg, shit, no mercy, its all tha sameness
bad muzik being overplayed, stick that grammy up ur anus
u might be a rapper from atlanta, but that dont mean ur on tha A list

lets get back to tha basics, yall just some bitches who waitress
u cant be tha cook, cuz ur shit is too bland, n dude ur muzik is tasteless
ive been formin my style for awhile, n urs is still shapeless
im workin out, addin weight, evry song, is another 45lb plate bitch

v6

im sry ur a lil pussy, n i dont like what u like
u enjoy that faggy shit, im on that, trappin all night
so what u like MM, tech nine, n royce da 5-9
u can dick ride, all u want, but tha money is gonna grind mine

KILL-A mike like grind time, yo fuck tha lime light
im back stage, just chillin, cuz i got tha hindsight
n i got signed right?, u cant see it? dude EYE rhyme tight
n deep down u hate me, my muzik, n my fans, becuz u know im right

n every fagget ass rapper on this site, wont make it, i know
cuz yall just write for each other, n not for tha ones who might show
oh? does it hurt? ur dreams are trash, n so are you
so is every battle rap u won, n everyone in ya crew

n dude, im not hating im just stating, tha truth
all ur medals, n ur records, dont mean shit to them dudes
so all this time in tha booth, in tha prime of ya youth
wont amount to nothing, cuz ur not tryin to produce

v7

what tha world wants to hear, im makin muzik dope again
rappin bout traps, straps, GOD, n givin dudes hope again
n bitches i rope em in, im tha nastiest rapper since too short
yall go back 2 watchin sports, im with gurls who like 2 snort

my cum up they nose, like its coke
n they scrub their pussies with my cock, like its soap
i put my dick in their throat, n face fuck em til they choke
hangin their head off tha bed, until they swallowin my yolk

so hard they cant breath, so good they cant leave
so deep they cant see, i just give n they receive
let em up in they wheeze, cough in they heave (throw up)
then they say oh GOD, KING, give me some more plz!

ill make u believe, that i got some tricks up my sleeve
cuz ill make u cum so hard, that u can not conceive
it, while ur still squirtin, ill still be workin
grindin hard, as its spurting, legs shakin, pussy twerkin

v8

ill have u sayin my name, while ur up n down jumpin
n ull start screamin bloody murder, if i start thrustin
givin thanks, ur a just a turkey, n im tha stuffin
i can feel it runnin down my dick, u dont gotta say that ur cummin

throwin u violently n shovin, ur face down, as im fuckin
dam shut tha fuck up, bitch u need to stop fussin
so what ur bustin, nuttin, n gushin
2 hours, im just gettin started, u aint seen nothin

i know all tha best positions, if u just let me get in
ill be hittin, im never quitin, even if ur cryin or splittin
ill beat up that kitten, until its all crimson
then, ill go down n see whats left to eat in ya kitchen

it taste like chicken, ill work my tongue like a piston
n as i keep on lickin, slowly i will quicken
make my tongue stiffen, n then stick it in
n start tyin ribbons, inside u, until u lose ur vision

ur cum will start drippin, down my mouth n lips n
i will suck it out of u, so none of it is missed then
once i have finished my mission, we start cuddin n kissin
ill spit it back n ur mouth, so u can see what u was missin

v9

this is all facts no fiction, we on mats no friction
i put it on her like a cross, now shes a born again Christian
thought i was done well i isnt, thought i wud stop well i didnt
i got my lines all ready, like im bout to go fly fishin

im sorta like a hitman, i take jobs n make a hit man
just give me a dope beat, n crack ill get to whippin
im loked out like im crippin, but im not
i got these gurls sweatin me, becuz im hott

im on tha block, pirate ship tied up at tha dock
walkin round drunk, im capn jack sparrow, with a glock
i flip off, all tha gurls what i want on my cock
i call em all swallows, these birds come in a flock

im dope with tha rock, double metaphors
eat beats n spit words, i need to take mevacore
dude im like no one uve ever meet before
legendary pirate KING, n i rule anywhere i set ashore

yo...leave feed...ill RTF for sure...PLZ TELL ME UR FAVORITE LINES and THANX FOR READING!

LINKS:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...372/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...049/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...458/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...175/index.html

[Tr!gga]

FUCK... That was long but all that was on fucking point tho.. Some of that shit was horror-core but it was dope as fuck lol

lmao @ that born again Christian line smmfh lol

[Well Versed]

lol thanx homie...no one else?...fuck mayn yall say something!

[Nohbody]

so, im going to return feed, but to be honest. . there is now way im reading all that shit lol . . . .

So im going to just take the 1st and last verse,

ok im back again, with that crack again
movin packs of sand, call tha trap Pakistan
with straps in hand, this was tha war on drugs
all of my homies were crips, n went to war on bloodz

gurls workin for coke, so we got em whores on us
allday gettin fucked, pussy lookin like worn out rugs
were tha walmart store of drugs, spend less live better
we got deals on tha pills, n these are tha best ever

2-4-4's a double decker, every trappers a vector
fast like a zephyr, n were out buryin our treasure
we put it on like a sweater, jayz are tha specters
its like a chilli cook off, tha way we all got tha peppers

seein who makes it better, i keep em sealed up like a letter
n top dog in my sector, KING, so i knock em out with my scepter
yall dudes are lesser, im tha master, like shredder
bow down, but im not a rector, i just do this for pleasure

to be straight up. . i absolutely hate your style. but do understand, that you are just going with the styles around you and thats what you are influenced by.

Rap is a forum to let people be so more creative. .you seem like you restrict your ability by complying to the norms of commercial restraint. Its a shame that everyone tries to sound like everyone else . . . id really hope for you to one day just step out of your comfort zone and try to do something more creative and unique. .

but enough with the rambling and on to the verse. . .

so the story here is basically your a drug dealin nino brown that bangs dirty factory worker sluts lol. . concept - basic, vocabulary - basic, flow - basic. . you honestly have a very ordinary verse here man

this is all facts no fiction, we on mats no friction
i put it on her like a cross, now shes a born again Christian
thought i was done well i isnt, thought i wud stop well i didnt
i got my lines all ready, like im bout to go fly fishin

im sorta like a hitman, i take jobs n make a hit man
just give me a dope beat, n crack ill get to whippin
im loked out like im crippin, but im not
i got these gurls sweatin me, becuz im hott

im on tha block, pirate ship tied up at tha dock
walkin round drunk, im capn jack sparrow, with a glock
i flip off, all tha gurls what i want on my cock
i call em all swallows, these birds come in a flock

im dope with tha rock, double metaphors
eat beats n spit words, i need to take mevacore
dude im like no one uve ever meet before
legendary pirate KING, n i rule anywhere i set ashore

well now, this was an improvement over the first. .

that was sarcasm

you did however at least attempt some minor wordplay. . but the content again... why try to make the world believe your some kind of glock totin pimp when your obviously just some dude on sitting behind the comp trying to get some attention to your work like the rest of us????

I dont know man, maybe its my disgust with commercial rap, and thats your style. . im all biased against it, but if thats your aim, i cant really say your any worst or any better then all the other whack ass bullshit i hear on the radio

[Well Versed]

i respect what u said...but i like to think if radio was boring...im at LEAST entertaining...

[Shoemaker]

I love horror core. GREAT drop homie

[Well Versed]

up! i will RTF just take a lil time outta ur day...

[ArcherPriest]

seein who makes it better, i keep em sealed up like a letter
n top dog in my sector, KING, so i knock em out with my scepter
yall dudes are lesser, im tha master, like shredder
bow down, but im not a rector, i just do this for pleasure

-- dug the sceptor 'n shedder shit, dope

i am a jester, i teach em like a lecture
what u wanna write smart, let me be ur professor
i will be ur assessor, n tha transgressor
n if u are lucky mayb oneday u will be my successor
ill make u more than just clever, stronger than ever
holdin down this rap shit, like a white oppressor
bring out tha aggressor, ur work i will lessor
cuz i own u n everything u do like a possessor

-- this rolled out like pacquiao jabs man, dopeness

victory or death, no latter, white rapper no asher
eyes so azure, yeah its a game, but fear is no factor

--nice

Verse 4...
ull blog, flame, n tweet, but u wont meet me in tha street
i got 2 forwards one point guard, n me, call us tha heat
were tha final four, n we'll die for what were fightin for
this is way past words, so punk, what u hidin for?
oh u think u can talk shit, bout my work,
but i cant talk none bout yours?
u trippin like when, a chick is, on X, standin on wet floors
ur yearly income i net yours, inside of a month
ur gurly i can get her, anytime that i want
i disrespect yours, this is ur passion, then prove it
i dont gotta add nothing, i just heat it up n brew it
crack in a glass pot n skilet, HARD crack rock muzik
thats my favorite metaphor, im not slowin it down, but i do screw it

--- text heads will look over this like nothin but these lines are strong man, needs to be put to audio for some to appreciate it tho.. pretty much this whole piece, ur style, etc.. good for recording, if u got the voice that is

verse 5

--ILL man, rode the shit the whole way 'n the rhymes fell where i wanted em too.. i been doin this shit a long time man 'n i know how hard it can be to make shit roll like that without the hiccups here n there, jus cuz you aint usin fifty dollar words n shit dont mean ur shits any less complicated.. you showed skill

n every fagget ass rapper on this site, wont make it, i know
cuz yall just write for each other, n not for tha ones who might show
n every fagget ass rapper on this site, wont make it, i know
cuz yall just write for each other, n not for tha ones who might show
oh? does it hurt? ur dreams are trash, n so are you
so is every battle rap u won, n everyone in ya crew
n dude, im not hating im just stating, tha truth
all ur medals, n ur records, dont mean shit to them dudes
so all this time in tha booth, in tha prime of ya youth
wont amount to nothing, cuz ur not tryin to produce

--on sum real shit homie

n bitches i rope em in, im tha nastiest rapper since too short
yall go back 2 watchin sports, im with gurls who like 2 snort
my cum up they nose, like its coke
n they scrub their pussies with my cock, like its soap
--hahaha, nice

verse 8 and 9-- dope but outta place, shoulda put these on a separate track

overall, TOO FUCKIN LONG! dont do this shit to us again fucker, haha, but forreal tho, this is solid dope rhymin my dude, many quotables but like i said, ppl dont wanna take the time, i dont wanna say commercial but this is the type of shit the populous wants to hear, like u said, ppl on these sites write for eachother.. i dont know if u got audio shit or not but if u aint in the booth, get there homie! peeash

[Well Versed]

WOW...thats everything i aimed for...thanx for this...means ALOT too me...friend me n be a fan bruh i got dopeness coming all day long...

[Well Versed]

upped for yall lazy fucks

[H.A.S. - D.4.L.]

I was going through it to pick out filler to recommend ridding of and then I realized it's one long list of rhymes. I guess you were trying to do that 70 something bar freestyle that no one actually freestyles and are again usually just 70 something random punchlines thrown together, but it was just long. Concentrate more on your 16.

one love

[Joe Boston]

Very long read but u know y im feeling this because it was like a freestyle and its omething no one on here kicked before. Some of the metaphores were pretty straight and vocab was on point. The way it interested me was i can you actually turning an instrumental on and just ripping it from the top of ur dome. This would be ight for an intro to a mixtape or something like that. I wont comapre you to other shit out there cuz mainly i took this as just an overall freestyle with ur own personality towards it.