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Battles Are Set Up On Monday
Check In's Are Due by Wednesday at 11:59p.m. EST
Punches Are Due by Friday at 11:59p.m. EST
onwards tally ho!
Like the attitude! g/l
On RB a year longer you still suck, you shoulda been aborted but ya ma refused
you drop weak like she did when she held her baby... you and her pro-life views
he always had an unseeing passion for rap and yo thats not a lie
i told him cross your heart hope to die... then i poked out both his eyes, nigga.
Rhyme Schemes stepped it up this week, unseeing passion/cross heart/hope to die/poke out his eyes/nigga were all used in accordance to delivering a well-rounded bar top to bottom.
Del's pro-life choice concept was really bad. The bar itself read like a short story topical that had nothing comical nor creatively witty. He will need to cut down on the prolixity of the two lines and compact his punch, also needs to focus on delivering on the concept when it's necessary to do so i.e. mid-end closer should be emphasizing either the creative aspect of the punch or the comedy found therein. Good job on staying with a single concept and elaborating on it tho.
V-RS
GO FOR BROKE
okay RS gets my nod on this...
Delaterious...concept couldve came along a lot better...but ya were a lil tooo abstract with it...
RS..this was an aight PL far as linkin ya concepts..but imo this is still childs play conceptually..not really a devestating ..but it was enough to mook this dude..imo..
MVGT Rhyme sting
i dunno who to vote for in this shit
1st dude.. bar wasnt hard @ all really
rs.. connected iight... but is nigga part of the bar? cuz it def wasnt needed
EDIT... VOTE R.S CUZ OTHER DUDES WAS JUST UMMM YEA ASS
Last edited by Philly®; July 4th, 2011 at 02:58 PM
uppin for votes
this battle was pretty close in the end...came down to a preference thing...both had a good attempt but felt rhyme's had more sting...though to decide
vote - rhyme
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pretty weak battle here, both kinda misses but i gotta go with rhymes for having a better attempt.
v/ rhymes
RS for random use of the word NIGGA haha. naw for rea Delaterious your bar just need different wording on the second line and it could have hit a lot harder.
v/RS
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Rhymeschemes had no punch at all, IMO. It was meh, at best.
Y'all make it look like dude dropped a bomb. It was weak.
D had a good concept, wording was ass, but it still hit harder than RS' 2nd grade punch.
Vote- D
DayumNation
When I read RS's bar, I couldn't find a punch, really. Delaterious had an okay concept, with bad execution, but it was still better than RS's.
V/D
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both came really bad..
lmao @ RS dropping "nigga" out of nowhere..
gonna go with Del for actually having a concept, without execution.
whereas RS just dropped a statement pretty much.
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