Didn't wanna battle him vs. Desperate man

[SureyouAre]

JEFFRY
Never heard of this bitch before and i doubt ill ever hear about him again, debbie downer
If hes the big show, andre the giant, ill wreck this bitch like sargarent slaughter
-good
This lame doesn't belong in the FL, he should really be banned........and,
We don't belong together bitch, you'd be the bitch, cuz your worse than nick cannon
-okay
Arch n A.T. both recruit me to their swag, im a blue chip recruit, HA!
Saw you battle Jhh, and you were on your knees literally blowin his top off,
-wow, you do talk about Arch and A.T lots. -okay bar
I'm flyin through the sky like peter pan, he got lost in Alice's Wonderland,
He sipped on some jesus juice then let MJ beat him off at the Neverland,
-lol, hurd your neverland bit before
You aren't on my level fag, you're diggin yourself 6-feet under,
The way this dude is on my nuts i swear hes snickers, statisfies his hunger,
-lol good shit
You say im a fag? Uhm no i ain't, bitch you don't know me we could never relate,
His girl is taco bell, open 24 hrs so i put my meat in her taco and shes always open late
- lol, i think it coulda had a harder punch at the end. still a nice punch
bitch.
step.
off.

VS
D-somethin
Slow faggot gives two time limits, cuz to him the difference is a lot
He’s either typing up a written… or trying to write bars on the spot
- okay
Fuck ya record u little pussy, trigger pulled I’ll give him the lead
Blow his whole body to tiny pieces so that J wont even be ahead
-meh, not one for the gun shit. still it coulda bin worded better
I’ll decapitate this wack Jeff, send the dome to his bitch before its rotten
so she recognizes, 2nd time… I gave her the best head she’s ever gotten
-wording coulda bin better, good though
You pathetic piece of shit, ur unwanted around here like pork to a Jew
Your beggin to be eaten, and get spit out… and its torturing you
-okay
My punches’ll kill his lame verse, raise my fists and tell him don’t look
Then send him spiralin… searchin for something good in his notebook
-good
you got no punches AND no bitches, failure- not even one of the two
cuz I’d at least have a good sex life… if I had as many misses as you
-meh

bitch

votes for Jeffry, no hate. thought i coulda a seen better from both

[Filthy McNasty]

Never heard of this bitch before and i doubt ill ever hear about him again, debbie downer
If hes the big show, andre the giant, ill wreck this bitch like sargarent slaughter
--weak opener (this is a stretch to say it rhymes and i'm not feeling that Drake flow)
This lame doesn't belong in the FL, he should really be banned........and,
We don't belong together bitch, you'd be the bitch, cuz your worse than nick cannon
--naw (flow is off and using bitch twice in the punch was ineffective)
Arch n A.T. both recruit me to their swag, im a blue chip recruit, HA!
Saw you battle Jhh, and you were on your knees literally blowin his top off,
--meh
I'm flyin through the sky like peter pan, he got lost in Alice's Wonderland,
He sipped on some jesus juice then let MJ beat him off at the Neverland,
--swing & a miss... setups and punches aren't linking up homie
You aren't on my level fag, you're diggin yourself 6-feet under,
The way this dude is on my nuts i swear hes snickers, statisfies his hunger,
--not feeling this one... I see what you were going for, but the double entrende is a self diss because you allow another man on your nuts... I'm just saying
You say im a fag? Uhm no i ain't, bitch you don't know me we could never relate,
His girl is taco bell, open 24 hrs so i put my meat in her taco and shes always open late
--meh concept, but executed horribly... 24 hr operations already implies it's open late

vs.

Slow faggot gives two time limits, cuz to him the difference is a lot
He’s either typing up a written… or trying to write bars on the spot
--weak opener
Fuck ya record u little pussy, trigger pulled I’ll give him the lead
Blow his whole body to tiny pieces so that J wont even be ahead
--see what you were going for, but not feeling this concept tbh
I’ll decapitate this wack Jeff, send the dome to his bitch before its rotten
so she recognizes, 2nd time… I gave her the best head she’s ever gotten
--aight concept, but could have executed this one better imo
You pathetic piece of shit, ur unwanted around here like pork to a Jew
Your beggin to be eaten, and get spit out… and its torturing you
--not feeling this as written
My punches’ll kill his lame verse, raise my fists and tell him don’t look
Then send him spiralin… searchin for something good in his notebook
--meh
you got no punches AND no bitches, failure- not even one of the two
cuz I’d at least have a good sex life… if I had as many misses as you
--nice closer... LOL!

Vote: Delaterious

No hate to either...