12 lines
due in 24 hours...
drop as soon as you can..
12 lines
due in 24 hours...
drop as soon as you can..
wow this kids a fag
anyway, check.
and due in 2 hrs as stated in Jeff-slapped thread
Never heard of this bitch before and i doubt ill ever hear about him again, debbie downer
If hes the big show, andre the giant, ill wreck this bitch like sargarent slaughter
This lame doesn't belong in the FL, he should really be banned........and,
We don't belong together bitch, you'd be the bitch, cuz your worse than nick cannon
Arch n A.T. both recruit me to their swag, im a blue chip recruit, HA!
Saw you battle Jhh, and you were on your knees literally blowin his top off,
I'm flyin through the sky like peter pan, he got lost in Alice's Wonderland,
He sipped on some jesus juice then let MJ beat him off at the Neverland,
You aren't on my level fag, you're diggin yourself 6-feet under,
The way this dude is on my nuts i swear hes snickers, statisfies his hunger,
You say im a fag? Uhm no i ain't, bitch you don't know me we could never relate,
His girl is taco bell, open 24 hrs so i put my meat in her taco and shes always open late
bitch.
step.
off.
Slow faggot gives two time limits, cuz to him the difference is a lotEither due in 2 hours or 24 hours
He’s either typing up a written… or trying to write bars on the spot
Fuck ya record u little pussy, trigger pulled I’ll give him the lead
Blow his whole body to tiny pieces so that J wont even be ahead
I’ll decapitate this wack Jeff, send the dome to his bitch before its rotten
so she recognizes, 2nd time… I gave her the best head she’s ever gotten
You pathetic piece of shit, ur unwanted around here like pork to a Jew
Your beggin to be eaten, and get spit out… and its torturing you
My punches’ll kill his lame verse, raise my fists and tell him don’t look
Then send him spiralin… searchin for something good in his notebook
you got no punches AND no bitches, failure- not even one of the two
cuz I’d at least have a good sex life… if I had as many misses as you
bitch
links shortly
You aren't on my level fag, you're diggin yourself 6-feet under,
The way this dude is on my nuts i swear hes snickers, statisfies his hunger,
good concept, but the wording isn't there
vs.
Slow faggot gives two time limits, cuz to him the difference is a lot
He’s either typing up a written… or trying to write bars on the spot
this was OK
you got no punches AND no bitches, failure- not even one of the two
cuz I’d at least have a good sex life… if I had as many misses as you
kinda played, but the set up was pretty dope tbh
Jeffry I felt attempted more punches, but he used a lot of played out concepts, and had poor wording throughout tbh.. Del had some pretty good stuff, a few weak/basic lines in there but enough to take this down comfortably IMO.
V - Del
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Uppin... cuz I'm desperate
Jeffrey:
The way this dude is on my nuts i swear hes snickers, statisfies his hunger,
You say im a fag? Uhm no i ain't, bitch you don't know me we could never relate,
His girl is taco bell, open 24 hrs so i put my meat in her taco and shes always open late
I found these lines hilarious best lines in ur verse
VS.
Delaterious:
Slow faggot gives two time limits, cuz to him the difference is a lot
He’s either typing up a written… or trying to write bars on the spot
Fuck ya record u little pussy, trigger pulled I’ll give him the lead
Blow his whole body to tiny pieces so that J wont even be ahead
I’ll decapitate this wack Jeff, send the dome to his bitch before its rotten
so she recognizes, 2nd time… I gave her the best head she’s ever gotten
You pathetic piece of shit, ur unwanted around here like pork to a Jew
Your beggin to be eaten, and get spit out… and its torturing you
My punches’ll kill his lame verse, raise my fists and tell him don’t look
Then send him spiralin… searchin for something good in his notebook
you got no punches AND no bitches, failure- not even one of the two
cuz I’d at least have a good sex life… if I had as many misses as you
U came hard in this verse u had some good setups and some parts where the punches were off.
MVGT: Delaterious
Overall had the better Punches more impact came harder.
^get that vote Dq'ed
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My punches’ll kill his lame verse, raise my fists and tell him don’t look
Then send him spiralin… searchin for something good in his notebook
vs
The way this dude is on my nuts i swear hes snickers, statisfies his hunger,
You say im a fag? Uhm no i ain't, bitch you don't know me we could never
Both came really played, like REALLY PLAYED. Misses Mrs punches have been done since the start of time. fast food 24 hour lines too so nothing was really fresh. Both had 1 line but Jeffs wasnt as strong as D was so mvgt D
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Jeffry
You say im a fag? Uhm no i ain't, bitch you don't know me we could never relate,
His girl is taco bell, open 24 hrs so i put my meat in her taco and shes always open late
the closer line had filler that didnt need to be there, extra syllables to say for no reason when it coulda been removed so the flow and delivery is smoother. plus the punch is really played and basic.
vs
Delaterious
you got no punches AND no bitches, failure- not even one of the two
cuz I’d at least have a good sex life… if I had as many misses as you
punch wise didnt have much of a sting factor, basic attempt overall.
Verdict
i think dela overall came less played while takin the more direct approach in terms of disses and punches. jeffry tried to connect more but he either didnt flow correct following the set ups or the punch was just really poor overall. it was weak drops coming from both but dela came just a bit better in this.
Vote-> Delaterious
uppppp in this bitch
up... someone pls
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