8 bars
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Jeffry
Cbjbkd
8 bars
Due 24 hours
check... im dropping as soon as i can...
make this due in 3 hours
Looking at your profile, see your first day was April 30th, one day after mine,
Watch your step Mr. CB, I set off went you step on my land mines,
LTW? Please..I shake my head, glad I left that whack crew,
How could they be good? When everyone else is on the same level as you?
I saw you battle Arch, indeed you put up a good fight,
I went right up the rankings, when Arch and I left you to write,
I love fighting people like you, they think they've got it won before they drop,
you left your snacks at home, but I made your mom Snap, Crackle, and pop,
I don't really mind battling people like you, its very great in fact....yo,
Went to the carnival, saw your head bobbin, so I decided to whack your mole,
Left to write....no wait, Left to Right? Don't you know your directions?
Unlike you I don't need Viagra, My flow lasts longer than 36 hour erections,
Ask your doctor if Viagra is right for you - thats what it says in the commercial,
This kids a dork, people mistake him for that loser Steve Erckel,
Im not really sorry if i lose this battle, but please beg my pardon,
You deserve to be executed by a fire squadron.
blah. keystyled the whole thing. Links coming soon.
First I battled Arch, but now Jeff...this isn’t making any sense
‘Cause wasn’t I supposed to warm up before the main event
The voters tell you to elevate, but I think you should listen to me
You’ve been wack your whole life, you got a reputation to keep
But you’re smart Jeff & that’s something I’ll admit without doubt
‘Cause you left the crew before we got the chance to kick you out
Noticed after every verse you put keystyle, & with logic & reason…
I propose if you took time to write one it might actually be decent
I could do some research & look for personals, but I don’t need to
“ffeJ I nac neve etirw ym senil sdrawkcab dna I dluow lilts taeb uoy”
You’re in A.T.’s Elevation Group, but you could elevate by yourself
Sorry about this filler here, but im about to take the time to help
First you think up a concept, insert a setup that is clever to you
Insert punch here…or just PM someone better than you
16 already? This was fun! Great opportunity, thank you son
Tell the voters hurry so I can collect half your ranking points
Jeff: that verse was hurting, man, tough to get through. first off, everything was worded about as soft as you could possibly think, you gotta have a way harsher tone. the lines themselves were all pretty wack to be honest. A lot of them didn't make sense, and there was very little creativity involved (the closest you got was the snack, crackle pop line, but still way too simple). The "whack your mole" line sounded mad homo, too, read it again and tell me it doesn't sound like you're jerking him off. Just being real.
CB: you had some aite lines, the "reputation" line was cool, so was the "kick you out." Not sure how I felt about the backwards thing, it was clever presentation, but the punch itself wasn't anything to write home about. But you probably weren't trying too hard so no need to get into it.
Vote: Cbjbkd. please return the favor on my battle with Decimation
Jeff: No hate seen u come with personals but everything was off ur punches were weak and so ur metaphores. I seen u do better if u did take time u could of beat him because u came with a good approach.
CB: U had some good punches and creativity but i seen you come a little harder then this.
V/ CB no hate jeff just next time u come with personal approach come harder.
Uppin...
Uppin again...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=451514
Jeff drop your links man
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