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Thread: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1 (wins)

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    Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1 (wins)

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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    Check

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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    check
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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    real talk.. who do you think you are?

    pers's luck is shit. so quit talkin like ya tough as brick
    cuz ur such a pussy, ass, <-which is also in the same order i fuck ya chick
    pers an animal? i'll take this dawg to the pound
    sweatin like a bitch in heat? i had no idea ur mom was around
    $pit exposed u as a biter. i hope ur conscience is hurting
    but i'll leave it in the past.. unlike the flipped concepts ur always rewording
    the jersey shore full'a gays. p ya goofy
    so u took advantage of the situation, by slippin him GHB n roofies
    champ? i doubt it. i won't let it slide cuzin
    only pers holdin a worthy title.. has 'LV' stitched on the side of it
    per$ looks up to me. stop frontin u dummy
    u sweat me so hard, on a hot day u'd give my balls a run for their money
    bitch, i sting like a bee. i'm ignited wit gas n fire
    s'when i roll wit the punches, u'd think Ali was whoopin ur ass wit tires
    ur a gymnast at flippin concepts n a known, faker
    so i'll admit that somersault.. but the rest are bland with no flavor
    the second i drop ya, pers'll be coughin up shit
    i'd never kick a man while hes down, which is why i'll keep stompin this bitch
    a chick wit pers, isn't really the case
    cuz bitches wit handbags.. hand-bags to u to put over ur hideous face
    the crew ya reppin has fallen to an all gay corruption
    i aint seen scyts filled wit this many fags since RENT was a broadway production
    pers has no life. while im stirin up shit like a monsoon
    ur burnin the candle at both ends, now ya only source of heat'll be gone soon
    20 somethin n im just keyin this fam
    so i went over 18.. cuz if i went under, pers would be creamin his pants
    i aint gotta read ya OM's.. this dummy's obnoxious
    cuz i know ya 'Stories of Confliction' were u battlin wit comin out of the closet
    exhausted? im off to jamaica where the weed is bizerk
    as i enter the plane n get on bored<--thats how we'll feel from readin ya verse

    sky high...
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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    extension? i'll be gone from noon through midnight tomorrow and i haven't started writing yet....i might have it done by tomorrow morning, but maybe not
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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    thats cool. im leavin out to. i'll drop tonight.

    gl

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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    Quote Originally Posted by Untold. View Post
    dropped. aite ya'll.

    im off to jamaica. see ya'll next tuesday or wednesday.

    g/l to everyone this week. pz!

    jamaica! go light one up... listen to some bob marley and swag it
    when you get back i'll be jammin... your body into a coffin you faggot
    your fake as fuck.. thinkin you hood.. it's the most viscous of syndromes
    cuz you ain't thug or g... but you sure as hell wish you were in one
    he knows not to battle me.. once it's time to pay the price than he's bookin
    have people sayin unyain trouble.. when he gets sliced like i'm cookin
    im bout to waste this knat... pay attention...watch his face get smacked
    cuz the only things we like that un do... are when he takes them back
    why even go to jamaica? that's about as dumb as sayin un's a vet
    I mean you could go on some one love shit.. but we all know your one love is text
    you got no talent, friends or prospects.. all you are is the cockiest homo
    we can bet that last week wasn't the first time in ya life that god was a no show
    him and his girl got nothin goin for them.. just think of all that time wasted
    shit he'd probably cellar for sex.. since he never leaves his moms basement
    you don't have any momentum... don't act like people talk about you
    yeah you had the wind at ur back... for a split second when i knocked it out you
    i'll end this dude with the quickness.. cuz i do shit prompt like an agent
    leave him tarred and feathered..cuz this chicken's gettin stomped to the pavement
    i've owned this guy repeatedly.. if he talks back he gets slapped like a bitch
    when im around his hearts racin so fast usain bolt asks him for tips

    Quote Originally Posted by Untold. to me in his vote last week
    and I see you being a threat
    that's damn right homie.. most people know that i'm a dangerous dude
    shit I know you think im a threat... but i can't say i think the same for you
    you actually think you'll get the title? dude please.. you're a faggot
    but everyone agrees that un worthy.. is what you would be if you had it
    honestly i'll light you up... stop thinkin you're nice.. you suck
    so when i say you enjoyable... i'm just talkin bout those dykes you fuck
    it's annoying going against this dude..why am i always facing wit these queers?
    his profile's about as empty as the fucking space between his ears
    you'll never be better than me... whether it's at text or building wealth
    cuz if you had to live by my standards.. shit.. you'd have to kill yourself
    Last edited by Per$onal; June 12th, 2011 at 03:46 PM
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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    Close battle here. I'm on my phone, so no break down.
    Untold had some nice hits, I like that 18 line bar and pers
    Answered back with dome good ones. Was really feweling the
    Wind at your back bar. Ultimately it comes down to consistency,
    and even there it is close, so ima go with who I felt had just
    A little something extra.

    Vote- untold

    Def could go either way
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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    Close battle here. I'm on my phone, so no break down.
    Untold had some nice hits, I like that 18 line bar and pers
    Answered back with dome good ones. Was really feweling the
    Wind at your back bar. Ultimately it comes down to consistency,
    and even there it is close, so ima go with who I felt had just
    A little something extra.

    Vote- untold

    Def could go either way
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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    Ok battle, shoulda been 1/2 the lines though. Untold I likes the leave Irvin the past bar, roll w punches was coo...somersault hit. Pers thug orgy was rofl then got kinda bland till God punch. Cellar & wind @ ur back were ok, in worthy coulda been dope but was way too obvious. Blah end to your verse. Ok I see it like this, Pers easily had the lotb with the orgy line but still seemed to just fall off after that. Un had some pretty bad misses too but was def still more consistent. This will come down to voter preference but I'd say UN squeezed this one out....barely.


    V untold.

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    champ? i doubt it. i won't let it slide cuzin
    only pers holdin a worthy title.. has 'LV' stitched on the side of it
    the second i drop ya, pers'll be coughin up shit
    i'd never kick a man while hes down, which is why i'll keep stompin this bitch
    a chick wit pers, isn't really the case
    cuz bitches wit handbags.. hand-bags to u to put over ur hideous face
    pers has no life. while im stirin up shit like a monsoon
    ur burnin the candle at both ends, now ya only source of heat'll be gone soon
    20 somethin n im just keyin this fam
    so i went over 18.. cuz if i went under, pers would be creamin his pants

    vs

    your fake as fuck.. thinkin you hood.. it's the most viscous of syndromes
    cuz you ain't thug or g... but you sure as hell wish you were in one
    im bout to waste this knat... pay attention...watch his face get smacked
    cuz the only things we like that un do... are when he takes them back
    why even go to jamaica? that's about as dumb as sayin un's a vet
    I mean you could go on some one love shit.. but we all know your one love is text
    him and his girl got nothin goin for them.. just think of all that time wasted
    shit he'd probably cellar for sex.. since he never leaves his moms basement
    you don't have any momentum... don't act like people talk about you
    yeah you had the wind at ur back... for a split second when i knocked it out you


    This battle's close as fuck. Shit, I honestly don't know how to call it. I felt both came about even here. Same amount of standouts. Both had some stuff I wasn't feeling and some played shit. I don't know. That Usain Bolt line I could of sworn I seen before, tbh. Either way, I think Per$onal maybe came slightly less really played in a few lines because of the bored line. That was just really the most played line of the battle. Somersault probably second. I really don't know how else to decide this even though that's kind of gay. Both had some basic stuff too, idk. Close battle and really a coin toss. Props to both.

    /v per$onal
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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    a chick wit pers, isn't really the case
    cuz bitches wit handbags.. hand-bags to u to put over ur hideous face
    pers has no life. while im stirin up shit like a monsoon
    ur burnin the candle at both ends, now ya only source of heat'll be gone soon
    20 somethin n im just keyin this fam
    so i went over 18.. cuz if i went under, pers would be creamin his pants

    v.s

    your fake as fuck.. thinkin you hood.. it's the most viscous of syndromes
    cuz you ain't thug or g... but you sure as hell wish you were in one
    im bout to waste this knat... pay attention...watch his face get smacked
    cuz the only things we like that un do... are when he takes them back
    him and his girl got nothin goin for them.. just think of all that time wasted
    shit he'd probably cellar for sex.. since he never leaves his moms basement


    heres my gripe untold, you came really rushed it seemed like ur wording wasnt as crisp as it usually is and ur concepts didnt seem as thought out as usual, like the pers line u cant use a pers line against pers dawg cuz its been done to death i dont know u jus didnt seem s focused n this is the champ amtch u sholdve been, pers u had some misses dude but u also had some good hits i stilll think ur wording on some bars is fucked but other times u brought it i thought the undo n bsement was really dope

    v/personal

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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    champ? i doubt it. i won't let it slide cuzin
    only pers holdin a worthy title.. has 'LV' stitched on the side of it
    ur a gymnast at flippin concepts n a known, faker
    so i'll admit that somersault.. but the rest are bland with no flavor
    the second i drop ya, pers'll be coughin up shit
    i'd never kick a man while hes down, which is why i'll keep stompin this bitch
    a chick wit pers, isn't really the case
    cuz bitches wit handbags.. hand-bags to u to put over ur hideous face
    pers has no life. while im stirin up shit like a monsoon
    ur burnin the candle at both ends, now ya only source of heat'll be gone soon
    20 somethin n im just keyin this fam
    so i went over 18.. cuz if i went under, pers would be creamin his pants


    vs.


    your fake as fuck.. thinkin you hood.. it's the most viscous of syndromes
    cuz you ain't thug or g... but you sure as hell wish you were in one
    im bout to waste this knat... pay attention...watch his face get smacked
    cuz the only things we like that un do... are when he takes them back
    why even go to jamaica? that's about as dumb as sayin un's a vet
    I mean you could go on some one love shit.. but we all know your one love is text
    him and his girl got nothin goin for them.. just think of all that time wasted
    shit he'd probably cellar for sex.. since he never leaves his moms basement


    I got this going to untold..

    Nice match, I think this can go either way, because different ppl like different things...

    Pers had bigger misses I think. Untold had a verse with better setups I think, pers had an extra day, and should have blown this out the park considering, either way nice match.

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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    the second i drop ya, pers'll be coughin up shit
    i'd never kick a man while hes down, which is why i'll keep stompin this bitch
    a chick wit pers, isn't really the case
    cuz bitches wit handbags.. hand-bags to u to put over ur hideous face
    pers has no life. while im stirin up shit like a monsoon
    ur burnin the candle at both ends, now ya only source of heat'll be gone soon
    20 somethin n im just keyin this fam
    so i went over 18.. cuz if i went under, pers would be creamin his pants

    vs

    your fake as fuck.. thinkin you hood.. it's the most viscous of syndromes
    cuz you ain't thug or g... but you sure as hell wish you were in one
    im bout to waste this knat... pay attention...watch his face get smacked
    cuz the only things we like that un do... are when he takes them back
    why even go to jamaica? that's about as dumb as sayin un's a vet
    I mean you could go on some one love shit.. but we all know your one love is text
    him and his girl got nothin goin for them.. just think of all that time wasted
    shit he'd probably cellar for sex.. since he never leaves his moms basement
    you don't have any momentum... don't act like people talk about you
    yeah you had the wind at ur back... for a split second when i knocked it out you

    nice battle here. like other people are saying, this is a very close call. both battlers came with some heat, but I got personal taking the win. I was liking some of his punches more than untold's. can't really say anything bad about either verse, though.

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    Re: Champ: Untold. 9-3 Vs. Per$onal 7-1

    $pit exposed u as a biter. i hope ur conscience is hurting
    but i'll leave it in the past.. unlike the flipped concepts ur always rewording
    the second i drop ya, pers'll be coughin up shit
    i'd never kick a man while hes down, which is why i'll keep stompin this bitch
    pers has no life. while im stirin up shit like a monsoon
    ur burnin the candle at both ends, now ya only source of heat'll be gone soon
    20 somethin n im just keyin this fam
    so i went over 18.. cuz if i went under, pers would be creamin his pants


    vs.

    your fake as fuck.. thinkin you hood.. it's the most viscous of syndromes
    cuz you ain't thug or g... but you sure as hell wish you were in one
    im bout to waste this knat... pay attention...watch his face get smacked
    cuz the only things we like that un do... are when he takes them back
    him and his girl got nothin goin for them.. just think of all that time wasted
    shit he'd probably cellar for sex.. since he never leaves his moms basement
    you don't have any momentum... don't act like people talk about you
    yeah you had the wind at ur back... for a split second when i knocked it out you



    this was close tbh, both had a few misses, same amount of quotables, some nice punches.. I think personal edged it out though was feeling his non quotables a lil more.. untold was nice but I've def read better from you bro, still good shit from both.. no hate untold.


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