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Jeffry
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^ Ya right fool, I saw the way RPK had a field day, and bodied you son,you vs me? you want? I think i can do good this time
Don't hesitate to get elevating tips from A.T., bitch you could use some,
I would reach for the DQ, but I don't play foul, I don't blow the whistle,
You showed up (or not) with Mac-10's I showed up with penguin missles [1]
Your chick told you to go on her so you untied her shoes and massaged her feet,
Pissed off, she hit me up later, and actually went down on her like a submarine,
I ain't playin to fight, I play to win, you play call of duty,
Pissed off your parents fightin over allimony on judge judy,
Knocks his head against the wall just to get some sort of feelin
I'll make this dude retire quicker than Good Morning America's Regis Philbin
[1] = http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Penguin_(missile)
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Yo madafaka you aint no shit to me
you smell like a rotten meat
your like your fat mother, fucking monster.
"rap more than words" ?
i'll let ya with no one left, fucking worm.
this is my motherfucking world
admit it, you cant do a quick shit
Penguin Missile? i'll put one up to your ass
better learn from me, asshole
I cant post feedback cause i dont have 50 posts already
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^ Ya right fool, I saw the way RPK had a field day, and bodied you son,
Don't hesitate to get elevating tips from A.T., bitch you could use some,
vs.
The wackest 10 lines I've ever read.
I've seen much better outta Jeffry but honestly he coulda won that shit with Dr. Seuss rhymes. Mac, take Jeffry's advice, and get some elevating tips.
hmm Right.. If you can give me some "elevating tips" and what are my problems, via PM, would be nice.. Since im new to rapOriginally Posted by Swift Shifty
i mean overall weak battle ima give it to jeffry just for having attempts and shit lol he didnt really hit hard with anything to tell u the truth butttt neither did mac therefore i give it to him. no hate just elevate my homieee
voteee jeff
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lol
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jeff
need i say more? i think i should..
mac, its gonna be really, really hard to elevate unless YOU want to. so for now...go to the LLL league and read the battles..alot of em. dont bite, but get an idea of how to form some sort of punch. cause really, i think u might hold the crown for weakest drop in Fl, prollly in general..well atleast since i've been here.
"rap more than words" ?
i'll let ya with no one left, fucking worm" - closest thing u had to rhyming, as u can see thats not rhyming at all. i dont know how to take u as tho, u asked for tips so im guessing you're serious. but in the back of my mind i had a feeling this was a joke battle to u.. this is a first to me cause i never seen someone write like u.
take a look at those type of battles, and when its done compare that skill to what u dropped and lemme know what u can work on.
but for now...please please please start writing alot more and getting into alot more battles.
elevate my nigga.
vote - Jeffry for the obvious reasons.
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^ Ya right fool, I saw the way RPK had a field day, and bodied you son,
Don't hesitate to get elevating tips from A.T., bitch you could use some
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v/jeff. no need to explain..weak battle on both parts
Definitely not 10 lines...
upp
lmfao i didnt even realize he wrote 9 lines hahahaha
anyways
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this was pretty bad... im gonna give it to jeffry for better attempts at punches. no hate to either.
v/jeffry
Thats feeding, but ah nvm, cuz this dude sucks... uppPenguin Missile? i'll put one up to your ass
better learn from me, asshole
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