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    Arrow Starstrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk superflow!!!

    ight...this is a long time coming...over 2 years...ive been writing...recording...taking all tha hate from these fuckers on RB...n all that bullshit...n now...here i am...SIGNED...DOPE...LOVED...n i will fuckin be respected...so...here u go tha first of many...enjoy!

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    STARSTUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK (ST by TRIXX, fun beat, fast or slow flow)

    LYRICS

    v1

    its ok baby, if u get star struck
    n i jump outta my car, at starbucks
    with some star sluts, n grab me a coffee
    n see that i cant get these hoes off me

    no im not sry, im tha shit anywhere i go
    n yeah im cocky, im better than anyone u know
    n yeah i got flow, n bars for days
    n yeah im dope, n kinda paid

    yeah im stupid, my shirts custom made
    writin by me from lines inside my brain
    n yes im insane, oh u didnt ask?
    well im complicated like simple math

    if u wore a blind fold, ud go off tha page
    i look at their skills, i dont go off tha age
    i off in a rage, when i write a track
    n leave em ripped up like a bear attack

    v2

    ok lets get back, to tha point im makin
    im cookin up crack, like ur mom does bakin
    imma jew tho, so dont put me in tha oven
    n i aint jokin that shit aint even funny

    i flash my money, n gurls flash me somethin
    thats nice n lovely, thats above their tummy
    hey there hunni, plz dont run from me
    cuz i havnt eattin all day, n im hungry

    gurls like that im scruffy, cute as a puppy
    n she can gum me, stretch her like gumby
    ill have her wanted it, worse than a junkie
    but i do it roughly, like we were playin rugby

    im bright like its sunny, i wrap like a mummy
    after i kill beats, n dump em in tha country
    50 tracks monthly, i never get rusty
    im track tha ripper, so count urself lucky

    v3

    i walk by, all tha gurls n say hi
    if u wanna come with ur boy then say I
    yeah i ride fly, 24's so i ride high
    but if ur not 21, then i say bye

    cuz u cant come with me, not where i hang
    n if ur not brave u cant come where i slang
    i just do my thang, n miss match my clothes
    ride with different gurls n miss match my hoes

    spit massive flows, hold on tight to survive
    cuz im something like a twister, call me an f-5
    oh good ur alive, but get that beat to a doctor
    cuz i beat tha shit outta it, like an abusive father

    muzik is like my daughter, n i over protect it
    so u better act right n show me respect bitch
    never do i neglect it, i wanna raise it right
    like goose bumps do, when i phrase it right

    v4

    it still pays me nice, enough for beer n gas
    with enough left over, for tha gurl shakin her ass
    oneday ill be rich, n u wont even know me
    but ull be sittin there, chillin as u quote me

    as u roll weed, talkin bout tha dopest
    rapper out right now, thats where all my hope is
    thats why i wrote this, to make u think that
    wack rappers, be tha wrong order, take that drink back

    they strink wrap, n mayn im seran
    yall stayin local, im tryin to expand
    i need at least a grand, for a dope track
    n, i got more stored back, then where tha dopes at

    solid coke rap, yall dudes just sprite
    u can obey ur thirst, but first, learn how to write
    im like, goodnight, n then turn off tha light
    right in tha middle of that show u had that nite

    v5

    boy i write hot shit, no u cant top it
    i hang with more killers, than gay clothes in ur closet

    crush any topic, how many times have i said it
    n i like my head fresh, so i call it lettuce

    no i dont edit, i write it, then forget it
    go home n practice for hours to spit it
    then listen, hard to see how i did it
    n then i trash it, if i thought i didnt hit it

    yeah im in my room, sittin in my chair
    on COOL EDIT, workin on my career
    scratchin my nuts, cuz im in my boxers
    ina white tee, look at my screen, goin bonkers

    ignorin my father, cuz i pay tha bills
    half is just talent, but tha rest is skills
    n i workin on them, like a kid in college
    for a scholarship, i feed my brain with knowledge

    v6

    i try to keep my flow, polished, n pretty
    at tha same time i be gutter n gritty
    n im feelin shitty, im an ass no dobut
    like constipation, i go hard, n push it all out

    whats it all bout? i think it was tha fans
    all tha ones who said KING ur tha mayn
    n all tha rest who just got to read my raps
    n then left me that lil bullshit feed back

    how bout i do it outta love, cuz thats what i have
    i write these lines just to make u laugh
    n make u happy, this world is so sad
    n life is crappy, why it gotta be like that?

    just listen to me rap, i do it from tha heart
    white boy form tha trap, u knew it from tha start
    n now days imma star, so enjoy what i do
    n i want u to know, i do it just for u


    hope yall loved that shit...get at ya boy...


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...799/index.html

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...513/index.html

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...473/index.html
    Last edited by Blackflags; June 4th, 2011 at 09:36 PM
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    Re: Starstrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk superflow!!!

    All constructive here..i feel like your younger, not sure though..your potential is visible but right now your almost trying to hard..reminds me of ..me when i was younger..lol...the beat got annoying after a while..but bro please dont take me the wrong way..its all about elevation..and i think you should slow your flow down a little bit and just relax..youve got skill, and with more practice I think you can elevate your game a great deal..keep working dog

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    Re: Starstrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk superflow!!!

    lol possibly a rushed or bad drop...but i wanted a freestyle up first...but as long as tha lyrics were dope then im happy...thanx
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    Re: Starstrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk superflow!!!

    I still can't tell if you are serious or this is some elaborate joke. Lyrics need lots of improvement, flow and delivery weren't there, the only thing driving this track was the poppy beat which even then had the tag popping up every thirty seconds lol. You say you're signed? Must be on William hungs record label

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    Re: Starstrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk superflow!!!

    lol like i said rushed...n my lyrics? what u mean this is random shit...
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    Re: Starstrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk superflow!!!

    Closed until you PM me your links. Please Read and Follow Rules. You have 24 hours before I delete this thread! Thanks.

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    Re: Starstrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk superflow!!!

    Opened. Thanks for the links!

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    Re: Starstrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk superflow!!!

    yo up this shit...ill RTF...i love jammin new shit
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    Re: Starstrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk superflow!!!

    Lets do how we do it on the discovery channel lmao!!!! funny shit i can see this being played on the radio not my type of style but its cool u can flip off this kind of beat. it was just a bunch of lyrics that didnt make sense but it was funny overall.
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    Re: Starstrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk superflow!!!

    lol thanx bruh...this was a flow after all...as long as my lyrics were dope mayn...yo ill RTF on all feedback...i got love for everyone makin muzik
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    Re: Starstrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk superflow!!!

    the beat was nice at first and i liked the track to start with but it got boring with no hook and it didnt mix up. at first the flow/beat/delivery was refreshing but it did get boring after a while but i liekd it up until around v4

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    Re: Starstrukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk superflow!!!

    well dam...it was just a freestyle...my lines/metaphors/wording shuda kept it rollin...oh well thanx ill just keep on trying...
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