Marz & Paper Rockets - G.A.S (Feed for feed!)

[Marz_]

http://soundcloud.com/crashlandingma...ds-marz-sigidy

Hope you like it. Im on verse 2.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...608/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...919/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...473/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...506/index.html

[LEWSHiS]

Weird Intro..
First Kid on Is Pretty Dope I like the beat! He got nice wordplay and delivery.
You.
Seems Like Your Verse And Dubs and Up a little to high but lyrically and everything your verse is pretty sick man it'd be cool to get on a collab.

[Rishi P]

iigh checking this out....wtf is up with this intro man lol...jus fuckin start already lol....beat is mad weird....first dude got the swag pretty lyrical eat def needs some better mixing and leveling....some decent punches here...aiigh u coming in...shoulda maybe had a hook on here instead of talking....quality aint as good...but this aint too bad some corny punches yeah ur dubs are off in some parts...flow wasn't too bad 1st dude was def better....

not a bad drop man diff vibe for real keep doing u

hit me back with feed please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...688/index.html

[J-min]

yo mars this drop is much better the first stuff u dropped your verse comes in alot harder more conviction fo sho man
quality is still abit weak but again better than before brah.
get a hook in there man song sounds to broke up to many breaks to keep listening man

end result ; getting better man

rtf http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...607/index.html

[Marz_]

Rishi P: Appreciate the feedback man. Ill keep em comin.

J-Min: Thanks man. And yeah I agree we coulda composed it better. Most def.. But yo, feedback comin your way man.

[I-M-E]

haha ok intro is messed...first verse is pretty good, delivery is good, flow seems decent...lyrics are good, got some mulitis in there that sound good...second verse has some ok lyrics but kinda basic some of it, i like the part in the middle of ur verse...not bad.....3rd verse sounds kinda gay at the start like hes getting dick in his ass, and his flow-delivery need work...lyrics have some potential, def needs to be upped....4th dude got a good voice and his delivery is nice with his emotion and extras he adds...lyrics are really good, hes def the best out of all...5th verse sounds almost like the 4th dunno if its same dude but tis also good haha....outro is retarted hahaha....quality is a bit iffy throughout but a good drop nonetheless

[Marz_]

Thanks for the in depth feeedback man. I know the vibe was a little weird haha that was our aim tho! lol