The Outcome

[Joe Boston]

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1st: Enig
2nd: Joeboston
3rd: Amigon

We thought it was a good idea on the hook to get each of us sayin it after our verses and then have it mixed with the backround vocals.

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[.Mimic.]

A decent joint man, i mean all of your flows seem to be on point, however, i have a problem about the amount of reverb you've put on this. Definatley should lay off reverb, i never touch it because it distorts your words and makes it sound unproffesional. The hook was sort of ruined with the reverb also, but then again it fits into the same catagory without the reverb it would sound good. Your lyrics seem to be good, and your delivery, i was getting a dark theme towards this. Your mixing needs to be slightly tweeked and it would stand to be a good track, decent though!
Keep up the work!

[Well Versed]

POST LYRICS!!!! PLZ ITS SO MUCH BETTTER TO FLOW ALONG!!!

ok so tha intro was weird...i cudnt understand it...tha beat is pretty good...some rap/classical shit n i love that shit...ur hook was lackin becuz it was too hard to understand...mayb kill that echo or something...

first guy...was good...liked tha flow...wording was good...metaphors...nice presence n all that

2nd guy...was cool...a lil lackin in presence n i think ur vocals were a lil low...lyrics were good...good wording...liked ya metaphors n shit...it was cool mayn

3rd guy...i didnt really hear very well at all...idk if this was cuz tha mixing/mastring was off or what...but i cud hear some of his lyrics they were good...metaphors n all that...just idk...made it harder to listen

honestly it was just hard to hear n hard to get into...no hate...just saying...but lyrics were good for yall...just felt so...uninspired ya dig?...anyways KEEP ON DROPPIN BRUH!