21st..props

[st.poet89]

[LASTFM][/LASTFM]Well well..

dashing out ideal table
lets see if this succeed
with slips of lies like ..day 21st fable
yet props for the liars greed!
:hosea1:
still looking at the notepad of quotes ego
wanting to more of that green
possibly addicted to your lies bet cant even let go
21st was about to be Jokers wish scene

chaotic
how pathetic
keeping up this static
now your getting what you deserve..hiding in your liar attic.

stupidity soon...
using christian revelation of the end
you and your insults like typhoon
will soon turn against you my friend.

enjoy the earnings of these lies
just for a book to be published
none of us blind,still can see with our eyes
...i wonder how many more lies have already finished.

hoped you enjoy it, signing off -:st.poet:-
Feeds:
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[Mantra]

for every poem you post you must reply to two others. Once you've done so post the links in this thread or it will be closed.

[st.poet89]

ok like how?

[st.poet89]

Just like making some facts

[Mantra]

ok like how?

like how what?

the link you posted is to your own thread, lol.
leave acceptable feedback on two other poems, copy the addresses from the ones you replied to and paste them in here.

[st.poet89]

Lmao alright.

[PyroMania]

it was pree decent wasnt the best.. but i did enjoy stay up and keep writting

[st.poet89]

Thanks ill keep writing

[Mantra]

You need to give me acceptable replies, those links aren't going to cut it.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...491/index.html

^a link to the rules thread, which also contains some examples of what's considered adequate feedback. check it out and work on getting me some links that meet the requirements or i'll close this too.

[Kaotic Theory]

closed....follow the rules.

[Mantra]

opened. he has until the end of tomorrow to follow through.
i wouldn't waste time posting something if i wanted it closed.

[Mantra]

Gave you plenty of chances. Closed until you are able to give me some proper replies.