Jeffry vs. My Mom

[#PrimeTime]

uppin

[Riley Freeman]

not gonna do a bar breakdown or throw out best lines against the other's best lines. this battle was way too obvious. MM, you got some elevating to do. i've seen people use your same structure and kick ass with their verse. i didnt see that coming from yours. you attempted punches, pretty weak overall but not bad for effort, i'd give you that for trying. jeff, you had one bar that, by far, made a touch. every other bar was like WTF? you tried too many times to fuck with his name and failed each time you tried. not good, and looks like you fed too when you mentioned his structure in ya verse. dont do that, exploits ya self on not bein creative. overall, you pretty much won this regardless.

/v/ jeff

[#PrimeTime]

uppin

[Edicius]

My Mom, thats not even a battle verse.. the fuck.

Vote Jeffry for obvious reasons.. he actually used a few punchlines.

[John J]

wtf hes on your friends list that vote shouldnt count

ye but so what?

maybe if this battle was neck n neck and i gave my vote to jeff i see how u could think that..


but its obvious that he came harder in this..if u dont see that correct ya vision my nigga. he had the better flow...better punches...better verse, period.

if u dont want the vote to count its w.e, but dont get pissed when im 100% wit my vote.

my bad for the free post if u wanna call it that but i had to say some shit..

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[#PrimeTime]

uppin

[Jak D. Ripherbs]

lol weinie shit UP

[Slowhands]

i'm not breaking this down because it's trash. My Mom, this is text. You must be more complex and incorporate multis, metas, punches, wordplay, etc etc. your shit seemed like you watched 8 mile then googled rap battle and went retarded. seriously. Jeffry wins this for throwing punched, PERIOD.