appreciate the feedback. up this.
appreciate the feedback. up this.
This piece is nice...
OK, well first off, has a old school feel to it, may just be how I am reading it. The flow feels simple and basic, but NOT in a bad way. I really like it, "Kool G Rap" whoever said that has the right idea. The story worked, and to be fair if your doing a story piece and people get what your rapping about and follow the story, then job done. You did it well, congratulations bro. I'd give it a 6 or 7 out of 10. Its not brilliant, but its definitely not shit, put it like this, if it was on my ipod I wouldn't skip it... I hope this helps