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good luck man. this is my check..
10-14 lines
due by 8pm central tmr. (24 hours)
let me know what line limit you want when you check in.
good luck man. this is my check..
Lets go 15 Maximum
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oh u can only do 14 ite lets go 14
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Lets pretend this is a comic scenario your the good guy with W on ur mask..
.. Was that you or your evil brother that wanna clash?Originally Posted by W
You internet beg that aint got friends , 22 getting old with regret..
People wud of thought u retired already .. with how your alone with a thread..
Back off wen this battles done there wont be a rapture so stay low..
I'll destroy what this guy stands for like his full username was WAKO..
Its obvious I will win , victory for u wud be sutin new..
Votes never take after you , V comes before W..
I aint got a problem with you but im programmed to kill the enemy..
Get shot down in the streets of your town(Dallas) .. John F Kennedy..
Coz Im confused .. I thought he was a chick with how he was pm'ing me..
..ll stamp on this letter untill he isnt male that cant send to me ..
I couldnt care less if i dont win , Coz i actuly have songs on the net..
So its cool to fink ur fly .. coz fly dont belong on the web ..
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checked out the video of yours, & damn that's one mean lookin scowl..
so I wouldn't dare give you two black eyes .. you already look like an Owl.
this shit's a Home Run for me.. the verses you pitch are filled with doubt
so if he says I have no balls, I guess that means I'm striking Out
with that music you think you're gonna get plays? I suggest you don't hold your breath
trouble passing out the mixtape Peace Doesn't Exist.. I'll help by choking you to death
you'll get left behind in this fight, I'm taking this shit outright..
ain't callin the judges pussy ... they just don't wanna take this Out'side
gettin' brain from ya sister & cousin .. shit I almost forgot about your girl
my dick was in Apocalypse.. don't let that put an end to your world
I'm in control of this battle, press my buttons guaranteed you'll get hurt
this hack's been down & out longer than the Playstation network
this is a preamble.. introduce you to what I'm capable of with words
after leavin Outss scrambled.. it's only right I toss-u to the curb!
Lumbee vs. Tim
Outss vs. Bongkers
King Zombie vs. Outss
good battle Outss, let's get some votes on this. don't sleep.
Lets pretend this is a comic scenario your the good guy with W on ur mask..
.. Was that you or your evil brother that wanna clash?
Good opener
You internet beg that aint got friends , 22 getting old with regret..
People wud of thought u retired already .. with how your alone with a thread..
Good
Back off wen this battles done there wont be a rapture so stay low..
I'll destroy what this guy stands for like his full username was WAKO..
pretty good
Its obvious I will win , victory for u wud be sutin new..
Votes never take after you , V comes before W..
Creative
I aint got a problem with you but im programmed to kill the enemy..
Get shot down in the streets of your town(Dallas) .. John F Kennedy..
Really good prob best bar
Coz Im confused .. I thought he was a chick with how he was pm'ing me..
..ll stamp on this letter untill he isnt male that cant send to me ..
Ehhh okay
I couldnt care less if i dont win , Coz i actuly have songs on the net..
So its cool to fink ur fly .. coz fly dont belong on the web ..
Good closer
vs
checked out the video of yours, & damn that's one mean lookin scowl..
so I wouldn't dare give you two black eyes .. you already look like an Owl.
Good opener however comments have already been made so not really oringal
this shit's a Home Run for me.. the verses you pitch are filled with doubt
so if he says I have no balls, I guess that means I'm striking Out
Good
with that music you think you're gonna get plays? I suggest you don't hold your breath
trouble passing out the mixtape Peace Doesn't Exist.. I'll help by choking you to death
Good
you'll get left behind in this fight, I'm taking this shit outright..
ain't callin the judges pussy ... they just don't wanna take this Out'side
Decent
gettin' brain from ya sister & cousin .. shit I almost forgot about your girl
my dick was in Apocalypse.. don't let that put an end to your world
Decent
I'm in control of this battle, press my buttons guaranteed you'll get hurt
this hack's been down & out longer than the Playstation network
Creative
this is a preamble.. introduce you to what I'm capable of with words
after leavin Outss scrambled.. it's only right I toss-u to the curb!
ehh not feeling the closer
close battle for me to pick
v/outss no hate..
this was a good battle but i think outss was better in my opinion
remember to actuly vote for me up der ^^
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i did brah
Lets pretend this is a comic scenario your the good guy with W on ur mask..
.. Was that you or your evil brother that wanna clash?
good start, okay opener
You internet beg that aint got friends , 22 getting old with regret..
People wud of thought u retired already .. with how your alone with a thread..
missin the punch here, 1st line in this bar was good, 2nd was a miss
Back off wen this battles done there wont be a rapture so stay low..
I'll destroy what this guy stands for like his full username was WAKO..
not feelin this
Its obvious I will win , victory for u wud be sutin new..
Votes never take after you , V comes before W..
average line
I aint got a problem with you but im programmed to kill the enemy..
Get shot down in the streets of your town(Dallas) .. John F Kennedy..
this was a good line
Coz Im confused .. I thought he was a chick with how he was pm'ing me..
..ll stamp on this letter untill he isnt male that cant send to me ..
missed punch here
I couldnt care less if i dont win , Coz i actuly have songs on the net..
So its cool to fink ur fly .. coz fly dont belong on the web ..
okay closer
vs.
checked out the video of yours, & damn that's one mean lookin scowl..
so I wouldn't dare give you two black eyes .. you already look like an Owl.
good opener
this shit's a Home Run for me.. the verses you pitch are filled with doubt
so if he says I have no balls, I guess that means I'm striking Out
good punch here
with that music you think you're gonna get plays? I suggest you don't hold your breath
trouble passing out the mixtape Peace Doesn't Exist.. I'll help by choking you to death
got the refernce, wording was off
you'll get left behind in this fight, I'm taking this shit outright..
ain't callin the judges pussy ... they just don't wanna take this Out'side
weak line here
gettin' brain from ya sister & cousin .. shit I almost forgot about your girl
my dick was in Apocalypse.. don't let that put an end to your world
girl/world = played, but good punch
I'm in control of this battle, press my buttons guaranteed you'll get hurt
this hack's been down & out longer than the Playstation network
haha, good punch
this is a preamble.. introduce you to what I'm capable of with words
after leavin Outss scrambled.. it's only right I toss-u to the curb!
alright closing line
flow - W
opener - outs
punches - W
flow - tie
closing - Tie
outs - i see you are clearly elevating, its obvious to see but you gotta work on your punches, no hate i see progress from you
W - good opener, solid punches, but there were a few lines that were misses, no hate either. very creative, flow was good.
v - W
Lets pretend this is a comic scenario your the good guy with W on ur mask..
.. Was that you or your evil brother that wanna clash?
creative idea, but to me it was forced and was worded quite simple
You internet beg that aint got friends , 22 getting old with regret..
People wud of thought u retired already .. with how your alone with a thread..
doesn't hit tbh
Back off wen this battles done there wont be a rapture so stay low..
I'll destroy what this guy stands for like his full username was WAKO..
forced again
Its obvious I will win , victory for u wud be sutin new..
Votes never take after you , V comes before W..
ok this was cool, could have been worded slightly better but I'm feelin the concept
I aint got a problem with you but im programmed to kill the enemy..
Get shot down in the streets of your town(Dallas) .. John F Kennedy..
worded pretty simply, should have tried to put a clever flip on it.. average at best
Coz Im confused .. I thought he was a chick with how he was pm'ing me..
..ll stamp on this letter untill he isnt male that cant send to me ..
the wording failed in the last half of the second line.. could have been good
I couldnt care less if i dont win , Coz i actuly have songs on the net..
So its cool to fink ur fly .. coz fly dont belong on the web ..
played concept
vs.
checked out the video of yours, & damn that's one mean lookin scowl..
so I wouldn't dare give you two black eyes .. you already look like an Owl.
decent
this shit's a Home Run for me.. the verses you pitch are filled with doubt
so if he says I have no balls, I guess that means I'm striking Out
lol ok
with that music you think you're gonna get plays? I suggest you don't hold your breath
trouble passing out the mixtape Peace Doesn't Exist.. I'll help by choking you to death
not feeling the wording + stretched
you'll get left behind in this fight, I'm taking this shit outright..
ain't callin the judges pussy ... they just don't wanna take this Out'side
cool, maybe could have been worded better
gettin' brain from ya sister & cousin .. shit I almost forgot about your girl
my dick was in Apocalypse.. don't let that put an end to your world
lmao @ jefferson saying a rhyme is played, not sure if I get this line 100% is there meant to be a wordplay on apocalypse? with lips as the last word? shit i dunno
I'm in control of this battle, press my buttons guaranteed you'll get hurt
this hack's been down & out longer than the Playstation network
played
this is a preamble.. introduce you to what I'm capable of with words
after leavin Outss scrambled.. it's only right I toss-u to the curb!
decent
thought out had too many misses and was trying to forced too many punches that weren't there... seen better from both but I'm giving this to W
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you got one flow for W and another with a tie..lol
opener - W (i was dyyyyying)
flow - Outss
punches - Outss
multies - Outss
personals - Outss
nameplay/wordplay - W
complexity - Outss
closer - W (i think the last line went over peoples head..delivery was simple tho)
5-3
vote - Outss
D Block: Humble But Hungry by Large Amount
Jack Riches ft. John Stock & P. Body - No Talkin'
track #11
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Its obvious I will win , victory for u wud be sutin new..
Votes never take after you , V comes before W..
vs.
checked out the video of yours, & damn that's one mean lookin scowl..
so I wouldn't dare give you two black eyes .. you already look like an Owl.
I'm in control of this battle, press my buttons guaranteed you'll get hurt
this hack's been down & out longer than the Playstation network
Yo W, that opener was NICE! Outss brought some pretty good shit to the table but I'mma have to give W the win.
Lets pretend this is a comic scenario your the good guy with W on ur mask..
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Originally Posted by W View Post
^^ outss you wanna battle?
.. Was that you or your evil brother that wanna clash?
wack...
You internet beg that aint got friends , 22 getting old with regret..
People wud of thought u retired already .. with how your alone with a thread..
wording is awful... i don't even know what you were trying to get at...
Back off wen this battles done there wont be a rapture so stay low..
I'll destroy what this guy stands for like his full username was WAKO..
weak...
Its obvious I will win , victory for u wud be sutin new..
Votes never take after you , V comes before W..
shit concept...
I aint got a problem with you but im programmed to kill the enemy..
Get shot down in the streets of your town(Dallas) .. John F Kennedy..
weakish...
Coz Im confused .. I thought he was a chick with how he was pm'ing me..
..ll stamp on this letter untill he isnt male that cant send to me ..
awful wording again...
I couldnt care less if i dont win , Coz i actuly have songs on the net..
So its cool to fink ur fly .. coz fly dont belong on the web ..
i see what you tried... but it came off weak as fuck...
vs
checked out the video of yours, & damn that's one mean lookin scowl..
so I wouldn't dare give you two black eyes .. you already look like an Owl.
eh...
this shit's a Home Run for me.. the verses you pitch are filled with doubt
so if he says I have no balls, I guess that means I'm striking Out
not a bad name flip...
with that music you think you're gonna get plays? I suggest you don't hold your breath
trouble passing out the mixtape Peace Doesn't Exist.. I'll help by choking you to death
too wordy...
you'll get left behind in this fight, I'm taking this shit outright..
ain't callin the judges pussy ... they just don't wanna take this Out'side
wording sucks...
gettin' brain from ya sister & cousin .. shit I almost forgot about your girl
my dick was in Apocalypse.. don't let that put an end to your world
wordplay was forced as fuck... lmao... i don't even know what you were goin for other than lips...
I'm in control of this battle, press my buttons guaranteed you'll get hurt
this hack's been down & out longer than the Playstation network
eh...
this is a preamble.. introduce you to what I'm capable of with words
after leavin Outss scrambled.. it's only right I toss-u to the curb!
nah...
i don't know how anyone's voting for Out here... he was completely outclassed... no pun intended... you have to work on wording your shit so that it has sting...
vote W
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