A.T 5-4 Vs. Shunned1 5-5 -Vote-

[Tim]

Lethal Lyricist League Week 12

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be Dqued
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm PST.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
Must Leave 4 links to the battles you voted on in this thread somewhere.
Failing to vote if you win and the loser votes will result in no (w) added to winners record loser will still get an (L) If both fail to vote it will cancel out.
Any Person That Fails To Vote Will Be Put On a Warning List
Only League Participants May Vote

[A.T.]

in...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...068/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...061/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...063/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...062/index.html

[Shunned1]

check, 10-12?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...071/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...066/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...072/index.html

[A.T.]

30.















nah, 10-12 is good

[Shunned1]

you aint special, your "solid" drops couldn't come off any softer,
A.T.? A.T. only drops hard when luke takes down an imperial walker.
I dont conduct myself very nicely, you winnin this is a pipe dream,
it dont matter if you're predicted to take the W, check the Caps vs lightning.
I'm shockin this bitch....
......you got laker hype & I'm a maverick that's poppin ya quick,
you got the arc holdin ya back, while I'm behind it droppin the hits.
shinin on the scene? nah, your accomplishments are dumb & gay,
all that glitter aint gold, it's just what this faggot's wearin to a rave.
how u gonna step to me, when u got grass growin around ur feet,
u lazy bitch...
......like wu tang I get money, while ur just thinkin about their cream.

[A.T.]

Gotta drop from my phone on my lunch break, my Internet is fuckibg up.
30 min. Ext.

[A.T.]

Im moving up in the ranks, while you've been regressing nonstop, 
You can tell you hit your peak, When that's all we do to your drops. 
I'll keep him in suspense kids, cause he drops like I'm not contendin, 
But I'm giving dude his first sellout crowd... And have all his d/r's voting against him. 
I'll laugh when he tries to defeat me, dude really thinks he can beat me,
But I'll be glad to lend a helping hand, that'll knock him out the league completely. 
Dude was glad for the recession in the begining, so he ain't a friend to me,
Cause when his boss told him he was laid off, dude thought he lost his virginity. 
Your creativity is lacking, and personally I find it a tad bit tacky,
That you've made a name for yourself... that'll match your concepts exactly,

[Chrit.]

shinin on the scene? nah, your accomplishments are dumb & gay,
all that glitter aint gold, it's just what this faggot's wearin to a rave.

vs

I'll laugh when he tries to defeat me, dude really thinks he can beat me,
But I'll be glad to lend a helping hand, that'll knock him out the league completely.
Your creativity is lacking, and personally I find it a tad bit tacky,
That you've made a name for yourself... that'll match your concepts exactly,

weak overall, but AT wasbetter

v/AT

[Token]

shinin on the scene? nah, your accomplishments are dumb & gay,
all that glitter aint gold, it's just what this faggot's wearin to a rave.

vs.

Im moving up in the ranks, while you've been regressing nonstop,
You can tell you hit your peak, When that's all we do to your drops.
ha
Your creativity is lacking, and personally I find it a tad bit tacky,
That you've made a name for yourself... that'll match your concepts exactly,
decent nameplay


I mean.... AT came with more than enough for the win, not much else to say. I know he can come better, but I doubt he wanted to waste the lines. shunned, keep reading battles man, gotta elevate.

Vote: AT

[The Archetype]

shinin on the scene? nah, your accomplishments are dumb & gay,
all that glitter aint gold, it's just what this faggot's wearin to a rave.

vs

Im moving up in the ranks, while you've been regressing nonstop,
You can tell you hit your peak, When that's all we do to your drops.
I'll keep him in suspense kids, cause he drops like I'm not contendin,
But I'm giving dude his first sellout crowd... And have all his d/r's voting against him.
I'll laugh when he tries to defeat me, dude really thinks he can beat me,
But I'll be glad to lend a helping hand, that'll knock him out the league completely.

nothing really hard hitting, but AT was pretty consistent w/ those punches... they all hit just as hard... not haymakers, but strong hits...

vote AT

[Teknyshun]

I'd only quote the same bars as the other 2 voters.. it would seem like i didn't read the battle so i'm just gonna write a long sentence about why i'm gonna vote the way i will.

Shunned is impressing me with his progress tbh, but aside from that quotable the others weren't up to par with any of a.t.'s quotables or even some of his non hard hitting punches.

A.t. you prolly just keyed this cuz you've been coming a lot better now adays, I got the same quotables that name line was creative and pretty good a hit

your peaks line was just a nice hit period. I got no more to say on this battle

so v/a.t.

[Bongkers]

shinin on the scene? nah, your accomplishments are dumb & gay,
all that glitter aint gold, it's just what this faggot's wearin to a rave.

vs

Im moving up in the ranks, while you've been regressing nonstop,
You can tell you hit your peak, When that's all we do to your drops.
I'll laugh when he tries to defeat me, dude really thinks he can beat me,
But I'll be glad to lend a helping hand, that'll knock him out the league completely.


v- AT, better verse overall

[Tim]

shinin on the scene? nah, your accomplishments are dumb & gay,
all that glitter aint gold, it's just what this faggot's wearin to a rave.

vs

Im moving up in the ranks, while you've been regressing nonstop,
You can tell you hit your peak, When that's all we do to your drops.
I'll keep him in suspense kids, cause he drops like I'm not contendin,
But I'm giving dude his first sellout crowd... And have all his d/r's voting against him.

at had good solid punches, shunned1 came decent, but was coming a little bit less harsh then at was

Vote: A.T