Per$onal 3-1 Vs. Raydeoh 3-3 -Vote-

[Tim]

Lethal Lyricist League Week 12

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm EST.
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Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST.
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[Per$onal]

check

[Raydeoh]

Check

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...071/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=8085668
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=8085687
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=8085799

[Raydeoh]

*<-star? Please.. dude you're way more than half cheek..
'Cuz nigga you'd HAVE to be an Asterisk another beating like last week's
YOU beastin' ME? Nah.. bitch I'll have you seein' 3..
& make this battle unique.. the way my fists hit Personalize repeatedly
Forreal.. the thought of you winning dog I HAD to laugh..
Nigga if I'm caught seein' double.. I just cut your bitch ass in half
Plus ya girl has sick tits.. I've been meanin' to dig it..
'Cuz she said when you hit the Box you can't Everlast even a minute
Ugly cat too.. for God's sake I HOPE you have paper..
If a girl ever screams "Pers a cute dude".. ya geek ass just attempted to rape her
& fuck a gun.. my fists are loads better than a weapon..
So I'll just Plane Crash your head in til' Al Qaeda starts contactin' me for lessons


12..

[Per$onal]

3. Per$onal

This guy is on a tear right now.. taking W’s left and right.. this week he’s up against Untold.. I think Per$ is hungry right now and is going to bring all he has in his arsenal to get a shot at the title.. week in and week out he’s been bringing fresh concepts with crisp wording.. this week I’m expecting the same

Thanks yo lol.. that was actually my personal favorite

on my nuts 24/7...no matter what the situation he'll always find my dick
so please dont claim favorites when u know you're in love wit every line I spit
he's like his avy in real life tho.. don't believe that this fuckin guy's passive
he won't hesitate to stick his finger up..... inside of other guys asses
this dumbass thinks he'll win? bitch I'm top of the food chain
so your heads full of errand you should probably shop for a new brain
your location's hilarious... no one ever wants to talk to this loser
it's no wonder you're delaware when you never fuckin get off your computer
won't ever drop dope..ya lyin if you said you've had beastly creations
cuz raydeoh's so full of shit he wouldn't pass FCC regulations
why you such a fruity faggot? step to me pussy n' i'll beat you up
cuz u'll never be sugar ray...but deep down u'll always be sweet as fuck

[MV]

Raydeoh
*<-star? Please.. dude you're way more than half cheek..
'Cuz nigga you'd HAVE to be an Asterisk another beating like last week's
YOU beastin' ME? Nah.. bitch I'll have you seein' 3..
& make this battle unique.. the way my fists hit Personalize repeatedly

vs

Per$onal
your location's hilarious... no one ever wants to talk to this loser
it's no wonder you're delaware when you never fuckin get off your computer
won't ever drop dope..ya lyin if you said you've had beastly creations
cuz raydeoh's so full of shit he wouldn't pass FCC regulations
why you such a fruity faggot? step to me pussy n' i'll beat you up
cuz u'll never be sugar ray...but deep down u'll always be sweet as fuck

Ray had a strong start but fell off a bit towards the end. ashame seriously because by the first 2 bars of his i was like fuck this doesnt look good for Per$. In the end Per$ finished up with a consistent verse, more solid hits and more quotables

v/Per$

[miracle]

Plus ya girl has sick tits.. I've been meanin' to dig it..
'Cuz she said when you hit the Box you can't Everlast even a minute
^cool
Ugly cat too.. for God's sake I HOPE you have paper..
If a girl ever screams "Pers a cute dude".. ya geek ass just attempted to rape her
good nameplay

vs

he's like his avy in real life tho.. don't believe that this fuckin guy's passive
he won't hesitate to stick his finger up..... inside of other guys asses
decent
your location's hilarious... no one ever wants to talk to this loser
it's no wonder you're delaware when you never fuckin get off your computer
cool personal
why you such a fruity faggot? step to me pussy n' i'll beat you up
cuz u'll never be sugar ray...but deep down u'll always be sweet as fuck
decent nameplay

vote: personal for stronger hits. ray started off slow i thought then picked it up toward the end where personal stayed consistent thruout his verse

[Chrit.]

*<-star? Please.. dude you're way more than half cheek..
'Cuz nigga you'd HAVE to be an Asterisk another beating like last week's
YOU beastin' ME? Nah.. bitch I'll have you seein' 3..
& make this battle unique.. the way my fists hit Personalize repeatedly
Ugly cat too.. for God's sake I HOPE you have paper..
If a girl ever screams "Pers a cute dude".. ya geek ass just attempted to rape her

vs

your location's hilarious... no one ever wants to talk to this loser
it's no wonder you're delaware when you never fuckin get off your computer
^ cool concept, but your wording fucked it up

why you such a fruity faggot? step to me pussy n' i'll beat you up
cuz u'll never be sugar ray...but deep down u'll always be sweet as fuck


v/Raydeoh, just a stronger verse.

[Shunned1]

*<-star? Please.. dude you're way more than half cheek..
'Cuz nigga you'd HAVE to be an Asterisk another beating like last week's
YOU beastin' ME? Nah.. bitch I'll have you seein' 3..
& make this battle unique.. the way my fists hit Personalize repeatedly
Plus ya girl has sick tits.. I've been meanin' to dig it..
'Cuz she said when you hit the Box you can't Everlast even a minute
Ugly cat too.. for God's sake I HOPE you have paper..
If a girl ever screams "Pers a cute dude".. ya geek ass just attempted to rape her

vs

he's like his avy in real life tho.. don't believe that this fuckin guy's passive
he won't hesitate to stick his finger up..... inside of other guys asses
your location's hilarious... no one ever wants to talk to this loser
it's no wonder you're delaware when you never fuckin get off your computer
won't ever drop dope..ya lyin if you said you've had beastly creations
cuz raydeoh's so full of shit he wouldn't pass FCC regulations

cool battle, but I got raydeoh taking this with a harder hitting verse. I was feeling per$' verse, but I just think ray made a stronger impact.

v/ raydeoh

[Philly®]

*<-star? Please.. dude you're way more than half cheek..
'Cuz nigga you'd HAVE to be an Asterisk another beating like last week's
meh
YOU beastin' ME? Nah.. bitch I'll have you seein' 3..
& make this battle unique.. the way my fists hit Personalize repeatedly
lol, but meh
Forreal.. the thought of you winning dog I HAD to laugh..
Nigga if I'm caught seein' double.. I just cut your bitch ass in half
iight
Plus ya girl has sick tits.. I've been meanin' to dig it..
'Cuz she said when you hit the Box you can't Everlast even a minute
funny, but everlast punches are.. well u kno
Ugly cat too.. for God's sake I HOPE you have paper..
If a girl ever screams "Pers a cute dude".. ya geek ass just attempted to rape her
dope
& fuck a gun.. my fists are loads better than a weapon..
So I'll just Plane Crash your head in til' Al Qaeda starts contactin' me for lessons
eh



vs



on my nuts 24/7...no matter what the situation he'll always find my dick
so please dont claim favorites when u know you're in love wit every line I spit
nah
he's like his avy in real life tho.. don't believe that this fuckin guy's passive
he won't hesitate to stick his finger up..... inside of other guys asses
meh
this dumbass thinks he'll win? bitch I'm top of the food chain
so your heads full of errand you should probably shop for a new brain
lol, nice
your location's hilarious... no one ever wants to talk to this loser
it's no wonder you're delaware when you never fuckin get off your computer
dope
won't ever drop dope..ya lyin if you said you've had beastly creations
cuz raydeoh's so full of shit he wouldn't pass FCC regulations
eh
why you such a fruity faggot? step to me pussy n' i'll beat you up
cuz u'll never be sugar ray...but deep down u'll always be sweet as fuck
meh


this vote does not count as Per$onal believes me to attempt to hate vote when in fact after reading he would have gotten my vote

v/PERS... take it as it is or take it as purely feed

[Tim]

YOU beastin' ME? Nah.. bitch I'll have you seein' 3..
& make this battle unique.. the way my fists hit Personalize repeatedly
Ugly cat too.. for God's sake I HOPE you have paper..
If a girl ever screams "Pers a cute dude".. ya geek ass just attempted to rape her

Vs.

this dumbass thinks he'll win? bitch I'm top of the food chain
so your heads full of errand you should probably shop for a new brain
your location's hilarious... no one ever wants to talk to this loser
it's no wonder you're delaware when you never fuckin get off your computer

Really close battle here i can see why it could go either way, but in the end i think the dell line did it for me

Vote...Pers

[Token]

*<-star? Please.. dude you're way more than half cheek..
'Cuz nigga you'd HAVE to be an Asterisk another beating like last week's
Ugly cat too.. for God's sake I HOPE you have paper..
If a girl ever screams "Pers a cute dude".. ya geek ass just attempted to rape her
& fuck a gun.. my fists are loads better than a weapon..
So I'll just Plane Crash your head in til' Al Qaeda starts contactin' me for lessons

vs.

on my nuts 24/7...no matter what the situation he'll always find my dick
so please dont claim favorites when u know you're in love wit every line I spit
dope
won't ever drop dope..ya lyin if you said you've had beastly creations
cuz raydeoh's so full of shit he wouldn't pass FCC regulations

ok pers you had the lotb for sure.. that was dope. but Raydeoh got this with consistency. close battle.

Vote: Ray

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

YOU beastin' ME? Nah.. bitch I'll have you seein' 3..
& make this battle unique.. the way my fists hit Personalize repeatedly

vs


on my nuts 24/7...no matter what the situation he'll always find my dick
so please dont claim favorites when u know you're in love wit every line I spit
won't ever drop dope..ya lyin if you said you've had beastly creations
cuz raydeoh's so full of shit he wouldn't pass FCC regulations


i thoughtthis battle was dope, ur asterisk line i think is stretched cuz i say it where it sounds like asterix so it doesnt sound like risk or that would of been up there how ever ithought the fcc regulat was dope and the lotb


v/pers

[SmokaJoka]

YOU beastin' ME? Nah.. bitch I'll have you seein' 3..
& make this battle unique.. the way my fists hit Personalize repeatedly
Ugly cat too.. for God's sake I HOPE you have paper..
If a girl ever screams "Pers a cute dude".. ya geek ass just attempted to rape her


vs.


on my nuts 24/7...no matter what the situation he'll always find my dick
so please dont claim favorites when u know you're in love wit every line I spit
this dumbass thinks he'll win? bitch I'm top of the food chain
so your heads full of errand you should probably shop for a new brain
your location's hilarious... no one ever wants to talk to this loser
it's no wonder you're delaware when you never fuckin get off your computer



ehhh...tbh alot of the wordplay that Ray had just was played to me, the ones I didn't quote anyways...I even used some alteration of an asterisk line like 6 years ago or some shit...lotb was the pers a cute line though...if you aint quoting that in your votes then you're fucking retarded...but, Pers had more quotables...pretty good read from both


Vote - Personal