Swag - When I Hit The Stage

**Blackflags** · May 8th, 2011, 09:49 PM

This is a pretty cool song I think. Produced by RISKKT. Mixed by Me!
Check it out

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**J-min** · May 9th, 2011, 12:58 AM

nice chilled beat man def vibing this fo sure...

delivery was dope flow wa son point .. im liking the hook

good drop brah

Soule · May 9th, 2011, 01:15 AM

Beat put me to sleep. Some afro samurai, laid back shit. Delivery and flow was ill bro. Sotw easy. On my droid so dunno how much i actually saying. Dope track. Love the hook. Join the order dude.

**Vinzr** · May 9th, 2011, 04:59 AM

^word lol.

Swag this stuff is dope man... flow is real nice and your delivery is clear and good. Also im really feeling the hook. Good stuff.

**Emperor F Ect** · May 9th, 2011, 05:37 AM

Flow and emotion was dope. delivery and mic presence were no problem here.
Hook was dope
the lyrics were on point
only feedback i have, is turn the lyrics up just a tiny bit... other than that solid work for real

by the way that beat was on point

**Blackflags** · May 9th, 2011, 06:42 AM

^Lol, you know I got my producer to turn them down because they were too loud. Haha. Thanks for the honesty man, because I was thinking the same exact thing!

**ToBy** · May 9th, 2011, 10:13 AM

yo man, youre sick!

**Andrewert** · May 9th, 2011, 05:16 PM

nice beat brah

**Andrewert** · May 9th, 2011, 05:16 PM

song*

**ShaDoWLesS** · May 9th, 2011, 06:37 PM

RISKKT ain't bad as a producer, feeling the beat. I'm feeling the whole vibe of this track, everything from the flow, what your spitting about lyrically, plus the chorus could deff get a hip-hop crowd moving, props man. Nice wordplay throughout the verses too, good shit homie.

***Art.*** · May 9th, 2011, 08:10 PM

listeningg, chilling/relaxing type beat... reall cool flow and delivery is rutheless and i really like the concept of the song man reall creative...i would think to turn your vocals up a bit? it might just be my speakers but im not sure...imageryy is pretty dope as well..alot of emotion in this too. dope song bro, keep it coming!

**Blackflags** · May 9th, 2011, 08:35 PM

I appreciate all the comments guys, I REALLY do. PM me some links if I have not left feedback on your newest songs, and I will be sure to do so!

**Longway** · May 9th, 2011, 10:52 PM

This track is better then your hall of fame entry... Love the lyrical .... delivery is really on point... beat is pure hip hop -- hook eh... the less remarkable part of the track imo... still 8/10 -- keep em coming fam

**Nahlidge** · May 10th, 2011, 10:18 PM

This shit's nice. You sound smooth as fuck over this beat duke. That convo we had the other night lol. I can definitely hear the difference compared to your old shit. You stepped ur game up A LOT duke. Easy to notice. Buried under water like a flyin' dutchman. dope. Diggin' the track. Hook is dope too. Def got the hip hop vibe. Only thing I would say from a music pov is try to write some catchier hooks as opposed to "hiphop" hooks. if you get what I mean.

**Blackflags** · May 10th, 2011, 11:16 PM

Oh I know what you're saying man. This was a last minuter Chorus, because Recess switched the beat on me. The original Beat had no chorus line. But no, I totally agree with you.